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Just a little update, but my character should be up tomorrow. I had to spend today with the family (not that I'm saying that was a bad thing lol), but I have another day off tomorrow and I'm gonna work on my sheet.

I have to say though... I was just dragged to see Batman Vs. Superman. I don't know the state of potential comic book fans around here, but I can't hold my tongue. That was probably the third or fourth worst movie I've ever seen in my life--and I sat through fucking Last Airbender and Eragon for goodness sake. It was just... I even thought, going in, that there would be certain parts I'd like, but it was just an overall travesty of plot coherence and film editing. It hurt my soul.
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@Prisk Hey do you mind if I move Charlie over to the Character tab? Also I have my secondary character, Eliza, up for inspection :)
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@Rockette Haven't seen you in a while. How are ya?

@Prisk Gonna write someone new that's not Wormwood. Though I will choose a name that's just as memorable.
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Expect something from me tomorrow.
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@DJAtomika - I'm well enough, can't complain. Just the usual busy schedule with work and such, finally managed to bring everything to a decent consistency so I'm not overwhelmed.
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@potatochipgolem

It is a bit confusing to me, as well, but it is also pretty much what @Vox said. You can try it on your own skin. At extreme levels, the opposite feeling of whatever your skin is suffering will cause quite a bit of pain.

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No worries, thanks for the update.
And that was a bummer about Batman vs. Superman. I was kind of looking forward to seeing it, and the trailers seemed promising. But now that it is getting such mixed reviews, well, I'm not sure. Then again, I thought that new Star Wars movie was terrible, but was somehow praised by rotten tomatoes and everyone else. So, I'm also not sure if I trust critics.

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Ah, I didn't notice your edits. The 'warfare' title appears twice in Charlie's sheet. Also, could you format your spirit in the manner suggested by Redrum? I have done so for my character as well. I can write the code for Charlie and Eliza's spirits if it looks complicated.

As for Eliza, the '(no year)' marker is in her age section. You can remove it. Then there is the formatting for the spirits, but I'll help you with that if you want.

Other than that, they both look good. There is quite a lot that can happen between them in the story. Testing their friendship, I think, will provide the rest of us with some really nice sub-plot reading! I love that kind of stuff, so let your creativity carry you away. Besides that, I think my character, Olivia, would get a long well with Eliza, if they would have met at some point at Oakridge.

You can move them to the character tab, just make sure to take care of those tiny formatting details.

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We spoke over PM and I commented on your character there. All is well and wonderful. Please move Monika to the character tab.

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I just want to remind you that you can create new exotic effects for your spirits. They are by no means limited to what I have listed. Also, as Guardians constantly absorb spirits, new magical abilities form ever so often. This means that you can always add more magic to your characters as we go along, or change the current ones. The lore allows all of this to be quite fluid.

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@Prisk - I was honestly thinking of some exotic effects whilst creating Monika's spirits, specifically for Herrlichkeit, all of these are negative effects.

Terror - Suffers from temporary immobilization.
Pain - Take increased damage from physical attacks.
Imperil - Take increased damage from magical attacks.

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Cool! Those look great. May I suggest, though, that 'terror' inflicts damage with movement? It is more or less the same as being immobilized. The thing is that there is no way to measure time, other than just describing it.
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Great suggestion, and makes a little more sense with the overall nature of the other negative effects.
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@Prisk I believe I got the formatting issues fixed and I'll move them over now. And yeah I can see Eliza and Olivia being pretty good friends, I figure since they were both on the student council they'd know each other. And some Eliza/Charlie relationship strain will probably come along as they get farther along into the war.
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As promised, here is my character sheet! Let me know if there's any problems or any edits I should make. Sorry for taking so long, I was going back and forth over builds and such.

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It might just be me, but I see a lot of Bloodborne stuff in this character. I love it. Anyway, oh boy, there is a lot of sub-plot and lore potential here. Would you like to expand on The Cathedral and its teachings? It could be a denomination of 'Etroism', which is the major religion of the world.

The fact that Niko came to Oakridge rather late is interesting. I'm not sure yet how that would affect things, but most likely not in any particular way, as the school accepts students of almost any age.

For Ulciscor, put a plus (+) sign on Curse and Blind, so that I know that it applies to Niko rather than the enemy. In 'The Reaper' you describe a sythe as Niko's weapon, yet in the warfare section you describe a blunderbuss and a shortsword. Is this a mistake or does his weapon change during The Reaper?

Other than that, it looks very good! Please add it to the character tab.

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Those of you who are in the process of making characters, try to complete them this week. This only applies to your main character.

Also, start thinking about which event your character(s) are going to pursue at the beginning of the story. If you can't choose one, I'll choose one for you. I can say that Olivia will be joining the 'Hammer of the Army' and Selene will be doing the Kinabalu Eidolon—just to get the ball rolling here.
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@Prisk - The weapon changes from shortsword and blunderbuss to scythe when combined. It was the "trick" in the trick weapon lol. It should be the second little paragraph after the big one in my Warfare section. You did see a lot of Bloodborne influence as I thought I did when I first read over the OP of this OOC haha. I freakin' loved Bloodborne so... There's that.

Sure, I can expand on The Cathedral. Would you want me to add it into my sheet or send you a PM with information on it? Sorry, that may be a stupid question lol.

Ooooh, okay. I misunderstood the meaning's the plus and minus signs then. I'll edit that.

EDIT - I edited the pluses and minuses. I also added "Curse" to "The Reaper" now that I understand minus means a negative effect on the enemy. Thanks for accepting me as well, I'll move Niko over to the character tab.
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@icmasticc
Ah, damn. I think I got distracted by the +/- signs and forgot about the second paragraph there. My bad! Everything is cool there, then.

It would be a codex entry, so send me whatever you can conjure about it. You don't have to do it right this moment, just, whenever you feel inspired.

Cool, thanks! Helps me when looking things up fast for the system thing.
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@Prisk - Ah, gotcha. Yeah, I'll definitely do an entry and send you a PM with some info on The Cathedral.
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Would anyone else be interested in starting a web of relations our characters may have with each other? Though we naturally probably won't all know each other personally, I'm fairly sure all the Guardians would know of each other if they're in the same class, though I suppose @Prisk would know more about that. Not to mention I always find it easier to have interactions if we all somewhat know each other beforehand (:
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I leave prior relations entirely up to you. Oakridge is a big school, some of our characters might know each other, others might not. But the characters knowing each other beforehand is absolutely not a requirement, as I've had it be in the past.
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While on the topic of prior relations, if anyone wants to have known either Charlie or Eliza, just shoot me a PM or something :)
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Well shoot, there goes my weapon choice! Ugh, I'll come up with something. I am going to see a movie today and then I'll be home the rest of the day.
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