@Zaxter996 Yeea, when I first heard it, I thought it was her but I wasn't sure, so I went to the wikipedia page for that album and, well...yeah, it was Hayley Williams. xD Definitely not the kind of band you'd expect her to collab with back in those days.
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The Velouium Camper II - Backend of Forever — Coheed and Cambria — In Keeping Secrets of Silent Earth: 3
Hear the Sound — Eyeshine — Tone of Echoes
Forget About It — All Time Low — Dirty Work
Wonderland — I See Stars — The End of the World Party
Blood Runs Forever — Scary Kids Scaring Kids — Scary Kids Scaring Kids
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Chocobos of Cocoon - Chasing Dreams — Masashi Hamauzu — Final Fantasy XIII Original Soundtrack, Disc III
Fixed At Zero (Acoustic) — Versa[Emerge] — Fixed At Zero (Deluxe Edition)
The Few That Remain — Set Your Goals (feat. Hayley Williams of Paramore) — This Will Be the Death of Us
Hear the Sound — Eyeshine — Tone of Echoes
Forget About It — All Time Low — Dirty Work
Wonderland — I See Stars — The End of the World Party
Blood Runs Forever — Scary Kids Scaring Kids — Scary Kids Scaring Kids
Waking the Demon — Bullet For My Valentine — Scream Aim Fire
The Sentinel (Judas Priest Cover) — Machine Head — Unto the Locust (Deluxe Edition)
Chocobos of Cocoon - Chasing Dreams — Masashi Hamauzu — Final Fantasy XIII Original Soundtrack, Disc III
Fixed At Zero (Acoustic) — Versa[Emerge] — Fixed At Zero (Deluxe Edition)
The Few That Remain — Set Your Goals (feat. Hayley Williams of Paramore) — This Will Be the Death of Us
@Altered Tundra So I have a simple follow up question regarding the character's personality. This isn't meant to be anything other than curiosity. Since I've already changed it to something I'm still satisfied with, merely because I was able to fit everything in a more condensed space. I was told that my character's personality was considered too expansive. "Less is more" I was told, which seems to imply its not really about depth, more so the word count. My original word count was 318, a 10 words less than your own current word count. Presuming everyone is following the same rules. I know others may also have equal/longer word counts in future, since only a minimum was described in the CS, not a specific maximum.
I know (or at least have to good-faith assumption) that the intention was implying my mentally burdened character had "too much going on" though I do still intend for that character to display such quirkiness in various ways. I simply didn't bog down my personality sheet by needing to explain them. Etc etc. I don't believe I ever had a problem with repeating myself/using too similar descriptions for padding sake. I was merely focusing on detail, when it probably is better to just show it anyway. Because I still intend my character to behave strangely until the other character mellows them out a bit which will be a direct character arc I hope to achieve.
I was just curious on this, now that everyone has much more time to reflect on their character sheets.
I hope since one delay has already proven to be necessary, this doesn't come off in anyway other than curiosity for asking.
On the off-chance that somebody doesn't post their character sheet by that point. Are we moving forward regardless? (And just hoping those will eventually get around to it?) Will we wait/be put in hiatus for other (hopefully) more active participants? Etc.
Still looking forward to getting the show on the road. ^_^
Edit: And duly noted.
In the case of Izzy's personality, as compared to the others, we felt that some of the bits you included in your first draft was pouring into other avenues that didn't seem like the first two paragraphs or really reflective into the kind of girl that Izzy is. And it's fine if you still plan on having her acting that kind of way. It's not breaking her character because it's stated in the sheet, if not in a less-specific way. As
As for Conrad's WC vs Izzy's, I felt the number of words I used was more than enough to explain Conrad's personality without going into either a, too much detail, or b, other characters' avenues. Though, I feel like our two characters are two totally different ones, so different strokes for different folks and all that.
Regarding the current amount of characters and the two that still need to be submitted, come the 23rd, that part of your question(s) will be answered. But, regardless if we have 6, 7, or 8 by that time comes, the RP will go ahead as planned (start date currently scheduled for the week of the 23rd).
a last note: never apologize for asking any questions. We welcome any and all questions. <3
Also @Crimson Flame, everything looks good on my end. Feel free to move her over whenever you can.
@SleepingSilence I appreciate you mentioning it, but please let me and Hero handle the GMing comments/directives. Though, I don't know how I overlooked that.
I’ll work on fixing those things tomorrow.
Um... I may need help finding that anime image...
Awesome!
And just let us know and we'll help you out. <3
@Crimson Flame
On the Digimon side of things, we don't have any sort of problems per-se. It goes with everything we asked for, so it's all good there, but the sheet for Bianca - there are a few things both Hero and myself would like to be changed.
First and foremost, if you can, could you find a pic that seems more with the anime vibe of the series? Given the kind of character Bianca is, both Hero and I could help you there. Also, both of us agree that it's somewhat bothering that a 13-year-old would have any kind of curves, let alone those in the right places. We ask that you rewrite it so that it's not present in any form. No 13-year-old should have curves of any sort. They are, after all, kids of preteen ages.
Regarding the personality, there's something about it that makes us feel it's more the personality of a 16-year-old rather than a 13-year-old. We would ask that you adjust it accordingly. Maybe tone down on some parts revolving around her being groomed for the family business/name and focus more on how she is still very much a kid (you could carry that to the biography too). Perhaps include how her brother's death had an effect on her. I mean, she's a kid and kids don't often handle death all that well.
Aside from that, both we don't see anything else that needs work. Make those changes and she's accepted.
On the Digimon side of things, we don't have any sort of problems per-se. It goes with everything we asked for, so it's all good there, but the sheet for Bianca - there are a few things both Hero and myself would like to be changed.
First and foremost, if you can, could you find a pic that seems more with the anime vibe of the series? Given the kind of character Bianca is, both Hero and I could help you there. Also, both of us agree that it's somewhat bothering that a 13-year-old would have any kind of curves, let alone those in the right places. We ask that you rewrite it so that it's not present in any form. No 13-year-old should have curves of any sort. They are, after all, kids of preteen ages.
Regarding the personality, there's something about it that makes us feel it's more the personality of a 16-year-old rather than a 13-year-old. We would ask that you adjust it accordingly. Maybe tone down on some parts revolving around her being groomed for the family business/name and focus more on how she is still very much a kid (you could carry that to the biography too). Perhaps include how her brother's death had an effect on her. I mean, she's a kid and kids don't often handle death all that well.
Aside from that, both we don't see anything else that needs work. Make those changes and she's accepted.
L O C A T I O N / / The perfect seat for the Jun and Victoire Vareity Hour
I N T E R A C T I N G W I T H / / Tim-Tom-Tam [NPC] and Nadia
I N T E R A C T I N G W I T H / / Tim-Tom-Tam [NPC] and Nadia
As the duo of Sonny and Nadia made their way to the cafeteria, Sonny had told Nadia to save them a table as he went inside to get their lunches. For Sonny, his go-to always has been and always will be pepperoni pizza. There was no if, ands, or buts about it. To him, that was the only pizza he would ever recognize as proper pizza. A second place would be a meat lovers pizza that had three types of sausage in addition to pepperoni. How people can choose Hawaiian pizza over the classic staple of pepperoni, mozzarella cheese, and a thin layer of red sauce was beyond his comprehension. For Nadia, he got her a salad. She seemed like the type who enjoyed a nice Chinese chicken salad.
“That’ll be how much?” Sonny thought he heard wrong.
“Thirty Bucks, Sonny,” Timmy, the poor nerd who worked in the cafeteria, said.
“Fuck, that’s a ripoff, Tommy.”
“It’s Timmy.”
Rolling his eyes, Sonny handed him a fifty dollar bill. “Give me that change, Tammy.”
Timmy glared at Sonny as he gave him a twenty dollar bill in return. “There ya go, Sunny.”
And that earned Timmy a glare from Sonny.
He tried to shrug off the annoying feeling that nested itself deep in his stomach. “That Tummy Scott sure has a lot of nerve. Maybe Kavi should pay him a visit.” Sonny contemplated the entertaining thought of sicking the mixed pitbull on the nerd. He knew Kavi enjoyed tormenting those who were a lot weaker than he was. Usually, Sonny wasn’t supportive of it, but in this specific case, he was more than willing to turn the other cheek.
As he shook his head, he decided to save that for later as he came to the view of the table spread throughout the quad/courtyard (it was called a lot of things). It only took him a second scan to find Nadia. She had saved them a seat somewhere in the middle of it all. He rushed over to join her, handing her salad. “I didn’t know which one you liked, so I just got this one. My sister loves it and you two seem to have similar tastes,” he shrugged, taking a bite of his pizza, letting his eyes wander around the quad.
He saw a lot of faces that he recognized. Some were those he didn’t particularly like and some he did but didn’t feel like disrupting his time with Nadia. To his surprise, he actually found himself enjoying her company. Who would’ve thought that, of all people Sonny could’ve been paired up with and of all the possible outcomes, he’d find himself not minding the more mellow, if not somewhat cheerful, company of Nadia a breath of fresh air. She was nothing like that Victoire. God, if he never had to see her again, he’d still think it wouldn’t be long enough.
“So, what I’d miss--”
Before Sonny had a chance to finish what he was going to say, he first heard the familiar voices of Victoire and Jun rush past him, though they seemed to stop not far from where he and Nadia were sitting. At first glance, he rolled his eyes. Sonny didn’t mind Jun all that much anymore. The past month had been good for their building friendship (if you could call it that), but seeing Victoire still made his blood boil. But that’s all it was - a first glance. It was as it appeared to be. Sonny noticed a particular irritation from Vic as she spoke to Jun in a way that seemed way too familiar for the teen.
Sonny couldn’t help but utter a loud, noticeable laugh. “Get her, Jun!” Sonny whistled, cheering on his fellow misfit.
The back and forth between Jun and Vic had Sonny actually enjoying lunchtime for once. It had gotten to the point where Sonny pulled out his phone and started recording the conversation. From Jun being Jun and Victoire doing everything that she could possibly to rid herself of him. That was something Sonny could relate to, but heaven be damned if it wasn’t entertaining as fuck seeing her get the just deserts that she had been asking for since the party.
As he watched and recorded, laughs soon consumed the chuckling air that Sonny consumed. It was that use of
“He fucking did it!” At this point, Sonny was ready to become a real-life version of the common abbreviation of ‘rolling on the floor’ as his laughter could be heard from the parking lot to the history department nearly a half a mile away (not literally but that’s just how loud he was laughing). “I’m..gonna need a minute,” he said to himself. He made sure to save the video. He never knew when he might need to use it.
About three or so minutes later, though Sonny had some chuckles that remained, there was no doubt it mostly passed, so he was finally able to eat his pizza. He could see the apparent displeasing nature in Nadia’s eyes as she ate her salad. He didn’t pay that any mind. It was so worth it because he just knew it would come in handy one day. If Victoire’s reaction to Jun was any indicator, using this video was the key to getting to her as well. As he took a bite out of his pizza, Sonny wanted to check out the tables, seeing who might’ve shown up. At that moment, Sonny regretted doing just that. And before he could take the act of curiosity back, there four tables away from where he and Nadia were sitting, at their table, was Marisol, Archer, and two nobodies that Sonny didn’t recognize. Well, he recognized Captain Kirk, but the brown boy who, at the moment he saw them, had his arms around Marisol.
“And just who the fuck is that?”
“That’ll be how much?” Sonny thought he heard wrong.
“Thirty Bucks, Sonny,” Timmy, the poor nerd who worked in the cafeteria, said.
“Fuck, that’s a ripoff, Tommy.”
“It’s Timmy.”
Rolling his eyes, Sonny handed him a fifty dollar bill. “Give me that change, Tammy.”
Timmy glared at Sonny as he gave him a twenty dollar bill in return. “There ya go, Sunny.”
And that earned Timmy a glare from Sonny.
He tried to shrug off the annoying feeling that nested itself deep in his stomach. “That Tummy Scott sure has a lot of nerve. Maybe Kavi should pay him a visit.” Sonny contemplated the entertaining thought of sicking the mixed pitbull on the nerd. He knew Kavi enjoyed tormenting those who were a lot weaker than he was. Usually, Sonny wasn’t supportive of it, but in this specific case, he was more than willing to turn the other cheek.
As he shook his head, he decided to save that for later as he came to the view of the table spread throughout the quad/courtyard (it was called a lot of things). It only took him a second scan to find Nadia. She had saved them a seat somewhere in the middle of it all. He rushed over to join her, handing her salad. “I didn’t know which one you liked, so I just got this one. My sister loves it and you two seem to have similar tastes,” he shrugged, taking a bite of his pizza, letting his eyes wander around the quad.
He saw a lot of faces that he recognized. Some were those he didn’t particularly like and some he did but didn’t feel like disrupting his time with Nadia. To his surprise, he actually found himself enjoying her company. Who would’ve thought that, of all people Sonny could’ve been paired up with and of all the possible outcomes, he’d find himself not minding the more mellow, if not somewhat cheerful, company of Nadia a breath of fresh air. She was nothing like that Victoire. God, if he never had to see her again, he’d still think it wouldn’t be long enough.
“So, what I’d miss--”
Before Sonny had a chance to finish what he was going to say, he first heard the familiar voices of Victoire and Jun rush past him, though they seemed to stop not far from where he and Nadia were sitting. At first glance, he rolled his eyes. Sonny didn’t mind Jun all that much anymore. The past month had been good for their building friendship (if you could call it that), but seeing Victoire still made his blood boil. But that’s all it was - a first glance. It was as it appeared to be. Sonny noticed a particular irritation from Vic as she spoke to Jun in a way that seemed way too familiar for the teen.
Sonny couldn’t help but utter a loud, noticeable laugh. “Get her, Jun!” Sonny whistled, cheering on his fellow misfit.
The back and forth between Jun and Vic had Sonny actually enjoying lunchtime for once. It had gotten to the point where Sonny pulled out his phone and started recording the conversation. From Jun being Jun and Victoire doing everything that she could possibly to rid herself of him. That was something Sonny could relate to, but heaven be damned if it wasn’t entertaining as fuck seeing her get the just deserts that she had been asking for since the party.
As he watched and recorded, laughs soon consumed the chuckling air that Sonny consumed. It was that use of
nothing that always seemed to be an indicator of how Vic often felt about someone. Stella had told Sonny about how she said ‘I nothing you’ to her, but just like Stella didn’t, Jun wasn’t giving up. And just when Sonny thought Jun couldn’t top his previous line of the use of ‘Viccy’, he did it.“He fucking did it!” At this point, Sonny was ready to become a real-life version of the common abbreviation of ‘rolling on the floor’ as his laughter could be heard from the parking lot to the history department nearly a half a mile away (not literally but that’s just how loud he was laughing). “I’m..gonna need a minute,” he said to himself. He made sure to save the video. He never knew when he might need to use it.
About three or so minutes later, though Sonny had some chuckles that remained, there was no doubt it mostly passed, so he was finally able to eat his pizza. He could see the apparent displeasing nature in Nadia’s eyes as she ate her salad. He didn’t pay that any mind. It was so worth it because he just knew it would come in handy one day. If Victoire’s reaction to Jun was any indicator, using this video was the key to getting to her as well. As he took a bite out of his pizza, Sonny wanted to check out the tables, seeing who might’ve shown up. At that moment, Sonny regretted doing just that. And before he could take the act of curiosity back, there four tables away from where he and Nadia were sitting, at their table, was Marisol, Archer, and two nobodies that Sonny didn’t recognize. Well, he recognized Captain Kirk, but the brown boy who, at the moment he saw them, had his arms around Marisol.
“And just who the fuck is that?”
@Inkarnate You seem to be missing the move list for each form. Once you include them, you can move Cheryl and Betamon over.
GM ANNOUNCEMENT
So, it's been a little silent, so I figure I will update you guys on a few things that'll be happening in the next couple of weeks.
First off, all character sheets, cept for Hero who, for the time being, Hero will be taking a backseat from things, so I'll be handling all of the reviews and character questions for the time being, will be expected to have their sheets completed by October 23rd, 2018. It's being changed from what's seen int he IC 0th post due to this being the official announcment and so those who have yet to post theirs/haven't finished have plenty of time.
Secondly, @tobiax & @SleepingSilence's characters are accepted. You both can move them to the CHARs tab whenever it suits you. As for @Crimson Flame and @Inkarnate, please tag me when you have finished your character sheets so that I can review them as soon as I can. Speaking of sheets, @Bornlucky @OGSG - where do you two stand on yours?
And Lastly, my hope is to get this RP started by the end of the week of the 23rd (likely the weekend of that week). If not, then it'll be during the week of Halloween.
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