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Drake would draw his five cards, looking at his hand with a serious face. He then looked back to his opponent playing his pendulum cards and setting a face down. Drake figures this deck would be annoying. He'd let out a sight as he drew his sixth card, starting his turn. "Lets get this over with, then." He said as he studied both his and the board carefully.
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"Tch." Drake put a pair of fingers on his forward in annoyance, before looking towards his challenger. "Stronger huh? Fine, We'll see who's superior. I'll take your challenge. If it will seal that annoying grin of yours." The edgelord prepared his deck and battle disc on the fly. "The rest of you two can either leave or watch as I crush this fool that dares to challenge me."

"Lets duel."
A dream of defeat

『ℂ𝕙𝕣𝕚𝕤』



𝕊𝕖𝕡𝕥. 𝟟, 𝟚𝟘𝟚𝟘 / / 𝕌𝕊𝔸ℝ𝕀𝕃ℕ 𝔼𝕒𝕤𝕥 / / 𝔾𝕣𝕠𝕦𝕟𝕕 ℤ𝕖𝕣𝕠 / / 𝟙𝟞53

The dragon remained motionless on the ground. Though he was free from paralysis, his pride was cut in two, unable to get up faced with defeat. Is this all for not? Was he ever even useful for his team in any situation? The beast, lost in thoughts with lack of self worth zoned out.

Chris found himself in human form, with lack of little memory of what he was once doing. As he stared at his hands, he noticed then a sea of molten lava beneath him. Trying to take in his surroundings, the sea was as far as could be seen in any direction, and its sky was black with stars and space above a red tinted sky. Everything felt surreal, as if it was all in his head. He was numb, and despite the bizarre visuals he felt at peace. So much so he wasn't bothered when he saw a boiling black liquid flow up from the lava, turning into a tendril that slithered up and into his mouth before breaking off and dissolving into a more translucent substance, that of which dripped down into his throat.

The vision ended there. Chris's eyes widened as he was returned to reality with disorientation. With blurry eyes he saw his hand, human. He had transformed back despite not fulfilling the full 2 hours the transformation lasted. In his naked body, Chris looked around, his vision and hearing were still in disarry, but as they cleared up he quickly got up and tried to get his boxers and pants back on. His face was flushed from waking up exposed in such a way.
I'll get a post up soon
Chris has an improved dragon form. Mentioned this on discord but I thought I'd put it here as well just to be safe.
update
With intense concentration, Chris can now transform back at will. His dragon form is slightly bigger, more durable than his previous form, and now has flight-capable wings.

Transformation time reduced to three minutes. Duration of dragon form still 2 hours. Cooldown time reduced to 12 hours.


『𝕊𝕒𝕟𝕕𝕖𝕣』 『ℂ𝕙𝕣𝕚𝕤』




ℂ𝕠𝕝𝕝𝕒𝕓𝕠𝕣𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟 ℙ𝕠𝕤𝕥 / / @RedDusk@dragonmancer


𝕊𝕖𝕡𝕥. 𝟟, 𝟚𝟘𝟚𝟘 / / 𝕌𝕊𝔸ℝ𝕀𝕃ℕ 𝔼𝕒𝕤𝕥 / / ℍ𝕒𝕝𝕝𝕨𝕒𝕪 / / 𝟙𝟚𝟝𝟘



Brooding beside a locker stood Chris, hoodie up and arms crossed. His blue eyes glaring at the empty hallway before him. Class was going to start soon, but he couldn't get the grin of that sickening punk that attacked him in the fight. Chris was no arbiter, this emotion was human. A thirst for revenge, and an outlet to the despair he felt from all the trauma thus far.

After lunch, Sander walked briskly down the hallway, heading toward the classroom. He was still mildly concerned about his roommate, but didn’t see it fit to interfere. If the blond boy didn’t want him there, he wouldn’t be there. Simple as that.

"Oi"-Chris called out from his corner as the familiar kid walked past. "How can you walk around so calmly?"-He shot a glare towards Sander beneath his hood as he spoke.

Um...”- Sander halted when a voice called out to him. He half-turned, eyeing the new comer with curiosity. White hair and blue eyes wasn’t common, but he had seen stranger things on subnaturals –“Can I help you?

Without warning Chris would immediately step up from the corner and take a jab at sander right across the cheek with a right hook. "That's for breaking my ribs on the battlefield, and letting our teammates die from your friendly fire." Chris said coldly.

Pain bloomed across his cheek when the stranger’s fist connected. The blow, as well as the suddenness of it, sent him reeling sideway, where he struggled to retain his footing. A hand quickly pressed against his cheek, while the other gripped the canister tightly. The craving buzzed dully at the back his mind, coaxing him to invoke the blood high at the slightest hint of pain. However, he squashed the urge before it could even form, and focused on his assailant.

W-What? I…”- He furrowed his brow, body tensed, expecting the accusations to come paired with more violence -“Who are you?

"The 'monster' you attacked instead of what was attacking the others, dumbass." Chris scowled, tempting to give him another hit but feeling as though that was all he needed he refrained from further violence, for now at least.

I didn’t…”- Realization set it then, and Sander swallowed his words. A flash of regret passed his features, but he broke eye contact there and then, staring at a spot at his feet instead –“…I’m sorry.”- He managed weakly.

Chris's composure lightened, He was expecting that the kid would take things the other way and a fight would break out but he seemed to understand his mistake. He'd sigh, "Whatever. Next time just avoid punching the dragon that fighting the monsters." Chris would cross his arms again.

Sander remained silent at that. He knew himself, and he didn’t want to make a promise he couldn’t keep.

"We're not friends, but we're not enemies either." Chris stated before walking away, heading to class without another word.

Sander looked at the stranger’s retreating back, a puzzled look on his face as he tried to decipher what the white-haired boy truly meant. A faint taste of copper lingered in his mouth, but it elicited neither fire nor rage, just dull pain. He pressed fingers to the tender patch on his cheek, though they came back clean. Nothing too serious then. Waiting a few moment for the ache to subside and the tabasco scent to fade, he turned, heading back to the classroom with a sombre look on his face.

It could have been different. They could have lived.


Enter the Dragon


Monroe...Monroe.. A hulking figure muttered as it walked down the station. Its crocodilian eyes looking around, lost. The creature in question was massive, its form monstrous. His appearance alone caused quiet a stir with the bystanders. Some trying to get away from the beast's path, others staring in curiosity or scowling in discrimination. What was even more bizarre was the gear the bipedal lizard was carrying. In its left hand, the Gorgas was dragging a large primitive metal sword, the craftsmanship of which seemed rather poor and dull. On his left hand was a stone and metal made shield, and a piece of paper that said 'Monroe Ship' in black ink. The beast wore no clothes, save a primitive waist-cloth made of earthen materials and leather.

Jackal, who was still wandering the station trying to find the designated ship, spotted a strange creature and some other alien converse, picking up the word Monroe. Watching the incredibly small figure leave, Jackal followed, but at a good amount of distance. Self aware of his own size. After some distance, when the figure he followed stopped at a ship, his eyes followed. The Gorgas stared up at the ship before beginning to make his way over. He stopped directly behind the incredibly small stranger, taking a few moments to find his words. "You are new recruit too?" A brute voice came from the beast's lips, unsurprisingly. His accent and poor English made it clear that it wasn't his first language.

@Tala Avana
@KOgaming
With your advice, I'm going to scrap most of those cards, I do have a single more simple card to put to the table for the future, with your review of course.

Doom Wing Dragon
Level 8 Fire Effect
Dragon-Type

Monsters Tributed for this card's Normal Summon must be Dragon-Type.
When this card is Tribute Summoned, destroy all other cards on the field. This card cannot attack the turn it is Normal Summoned.

3000/2500
@KOgaming


These are some of the cards I've been working on. It won't be the last of em either but this will likely be the bulk of the support. (A few of the spell/trap cards are remodeled from generic dragon spell/traps with Tyrant Dragon related Artwork that exist, I.E. Wingbeat of Giant Dragon, Overwhelm, and Stamping Destruction.)
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Is it alright to pre-make custom cards that we will be awarded later, and post them ahead of time for sake of review?
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