BayRat

Knights of Evil (High Casual, Organization of Evil Monsters) (Work in Progress)

I'm pretty sure we don't have to follow the exact coding of the CS skeleton, so long as we have the required fields filled out.

@TheWindel

You're free to pretty up the CS code as much as you want, but this sheet's lack of coding is what bothers me the most.

Knights of Evil (High Casual, Organization of Evil Monsters) (Work in Progress)

@shagranoz
Oh Boy

Well first off you didn't use any of the coding I provided for the sheet. Which isn't the biggest problem with this submission but I highly advise you fix that among other things.

This isn't your fault, but I already have someone working on a witch that is the daughter of Morgana. Which isn't too problematic as it is, in fact her's has her heritage a bit more distant so you can easily pass it as a long lost sister, but once that sheet gets over here I advise the two of you collab to avoid any lore inconsistencies. (In hindsight having an rp with Camelot as a central figure, I probably should have expected something like this.)

Her personality and heritage makes her, an unlikely candidate to be a Knight of Evil. Not that Lancelot doesn't enjoy his knights fighting over each other, but her world domination part is certainly a contradiction to what Lancelot idiolizes. Granted, she could keep this part a secret and just use this position to her advantage, but I'd like to emphasize if that ambition is found out; it can result in her death or exile.

Speaking of which; "Complete Immortality- Medea has developed a ritual that ensures that, no matter what abuse her body and soul endure, she will always survive. A favorite tactic to induce her opponents to surrender is to simply stand in front of them, letting them see how futile their assaults are. Note, however, that extreme methods of "death" like burning and scattering the ashes may take years to recover from"

TO be fair, there are plenty of hax spells that can bypass this, however having this form of immortality with the power she already has seems a bit much, especially when she doesn't really give the vibes of a true necromancer (despite having many necromancy-ish spells; something I'll get into later down.)
It would be much more reasonable to suggest that she has achieved immortality age-wise, and this can maybe include a resilience to diseases and a minor regeneration factor to still give her some survival abilities.

One of the biggest problems I have with this sheet is lack in consistency. You emphasize her abilities regarding hell's demons, yet you also give her generic necromancy spells to boot that don't really give the idea of flow. Yet she also lacks any variety outside from necromancy and demon magic, the overall feel of this character severely lacks in flavor. She is also a witch of Morgana La Faye, someone who was far more famed as an illusionary or Enchantress and seldom had any dealings with demons.

Speaking of which, demons aren't usually creatures ready at service. They are out for their own goals, and any deals made with them don't come without price. Liliana from MTG is a good reference for dealing with demons if you want to go that route, her necromancy and dealings with demons are much more in flavor and I certainly recommend giving her a look for inspiration if you want to continue this motiff.

Soul swallower I'm also a bit torn on. I like the idea of having an interrogator but having her permanently absorb a soul, as well as gaining a vague permanent buff from it; really seems a bit too...much.

Before I get on with balancing recommendations, your sheet is very barebones. If you look at one of my NPC's for instance you will see that many of the information provided is much more fleshed out, while some of the important information on your end seems barely fleshed out. Her bio alone is only a few sentences. Don't take this the wrong way but I don't think you're cut out for a roleplay on the High Casual spectrum.

IF you are serious and willing to keep working on a sheet however; I recommend either starting from scratch or at least cut out most of things here and start over. To your credit you do have some interesting ideas here.

For instance instead of soul swallowing, she can either imprison the soul in an inanimate object to 'animate' them in a cursed form (As part of torture/interrogation.) Or she may offer this soul to a demon to help fulfill the idea of paying a demon for its service. Once again this shouldn't be the only cost for working with demons, but it is something I'd recommend.

If you can really sell the ideal that summoning demons has a lot of detriment consquences and costs, then the Book of Azatoth will work much better as an artifact.

Sorry if I'm a bit hard but I do try to keep things in my management consistence and of quality; So this submission is rejected.

Knights of Evil (High Casual, Organization of Evil Monsters) (Work in Progress)

@KoL
Well it is an evil world out there. Just avoid writing anything in bad taste.

Knights of Evil (High Casual, Organization of Evil Monsters) (Work in Progress)

@Sophrus
Not gonna lie, that's pretty cool.

Knights of Evil (High Casual, Organization of Evil Monsters) (Work in Progress)

@Sophrus
If its any solice Bolladreq will never be used offensively since hes bound to the treasure hoard.
City destroyers are the highest calibur we'll have. Enemies, both good and evil aligned, will have just as strong forces.
Some missions will be cakewalks though, all matter of fun really.

IF your going for the tech aspect, why not have airships armed with a devastating cannon?

Knights of Evil (High Casual, Organization of Evil Monsters) (Work in Progress)

Introducing our first NPC. Bolladreq is the power cap in terms of raw destructive power. For anyone making high tier villains, use him as a reference for how strong he/she should be.

Bolladreq

Bolladreq the Sleeping Tyrant of Camelot

Sleeping Tyrant of Camelot, The Great Fell Dragon, Elderscale Primordial

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General description

Race

Ancient Dragon

Age

The Great Dragon himself was born far before humans came into being, he is one of the last dragons from the prehistory era.

Size

45 feet in height, 87 feet in length (bipedal), 45 tons.

Gender

Male

Sexuality

Straight

Religion

Though he has no form of worship, he does at least acknowledge the existence of gods and demons, even though he believes they are beneath him.

Guardian of the treasure hoard.

He is tasked with staying within the mass cavern that is Lancelot's treasure hoard (Despite Bolladreq claiming openly that it is his treasure.) and to both manage and guard it. He is to supply the Knights of Evil with artifacts and currency, should they need it, as well as store any treasures they recover. Bolladreq does not consider himself a Knight of Evil, and his service to Lancelot is limited to more of a mild respect and out of conevienance; he has no care for the title of dark lord nor does he have no qualms with defying Lancelot should he overstep his boundries. It has been agreed that Bolladreq has the final say over the contents of his treasure, but that doesn't stop Lancelot from tricking or bribing him into his wishes.

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Personality

While most would imagine such an ancient creature to be wise and mystical, Bolladreq's wisdom is overshadowed by his overwhelming greed,
sour attitude, and an obnoxious sense of pride. He tends to deliver a sarcastic sense of humor, however he is easily enraged if provoked.
On a more casual day he gives off the impression of an up stuck noble, especially with his human disguise. Perhaps living so long has made him soft, for he is incredibly lazy despite all his power and pride. He spends most of his time in slumber, and rarely seeks engages in any activity unless he is provoked into combat.
His greed was the driving force behind his collection, the room of mystical treasures that Lancelot now 'owns'. Though to Bolladreq, Lancelot does not own his treasure but rather burrows from it. He expects compensation as the previous knight of camelot rises to power. While one would think that a dragon would desire the throne of the dark lord, His laziness and contempt with his treasure hoard lacks any driving force to take such responsibility.

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Biography

Bolladreq has known Lancelot even before his famed betrayal. There exact relationship is unknown, but Bolladreq's 'service' to Lancelot suggests something more of convenience then outright loyalty. However Bolladreq's submission, even if minor, is a testament to Lancelot's unknown power; though many infer that an outright battle between the greedy dragon and the former knight of the round table would be a close and destructive event.

As an ancient beast, he has attained much wisdom with his growing eternity of a lifespan. However despite his wealth of knowledge he falls victims to his petty desires of pride and greed. Still, having seen the world been born and grow, kingdoms being created and destroyed; He is a great source for those that seek knowledge of history or the world as a whole. His knowledge does not come without a fee however, and he expects to be rewarded with treasure should he even consider sparing such wisdom.

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True Form

Bolladreq is a 45 foot tall bipedal dragon, clad in thorny plates of green scales. Great wings with a crimson membrane rest at his back, Two prominent horns curve out from the back of his skull amidst a series of smaller horns that resemble spikes or thorns along his skull and jaw. His tail is speared with a triangle-shaped tip that is as sharp as a blade, and his claws are just as dangerous. He is four-toed, both his hands and feet bear sharp menacing claws. Rows of spines curve back from his plated scales along the spine, all the way to the tail. His eyes glow like a pair of firey yellow orbs, and like a crocodile. His maw is loaded with teeth, and a forked tongue often slithers out from it.

Human Disguise

His human transformation speaks his age, as he takes the appearance of an elderly man, yet still ripe with a fit and bulky body. His hair is messy with the color of smoke-white, and a beard that also fits his elderly appearance. Blue eyes. which its' pupils still retain a slightly slit shape, gleam a faint light.
His skin is sun-kissed and weathered. His nose is red, that bears a scar from the bridge to his cheek and forehead in a diagonal line. His face is usually serious in expression, though cocky smiles are revealed when he speaks highly of himself.

He typically wears attires fit for a noble, gothic black in design. Capes with fancy shoes and sometimes a hat to match. Sometimes he sports robes of a similar theme, or a gilded armor with a redcape that was likely apart of his hoard of treasure.

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Traits and Equipment

Ancient Dragons

Dragons are rare, often old, and powerful beings of the realm. Reptile in nature, all dragons have a natural affinity towards fire. Many, at least those that are considered sapient, are affiliated with greed,
pride, and wrath. They are immortal, Rarely produce offspring (with the exception of the lesser dragons,
dragons that lack sapience and breed like animals), and are often very unique; making them few and far between similarly aside from their shared attributes above. They are magical in nature, and some have far more power and diversity in their elements then others. Dragons come in many different forms as well, from your typical wyvern to an asian-styled dragon; a great serpent or a six limbed, western style dragon. A giant lizard or a Verocious Sand Wurm.

Elder Dragons are the oldest of dragons, born in an era long before humans came to be. A single Elder Dragon maybe somewhere between 920,000 years old to being over 3 billion years old. They are considered to be both the wisest and most powerful class of dragons, however there are few individuals that remain. Those that do remain are feared even by demons and other monsters, and regarded to be as equals.

Strengths/Skills/Talents

• Ancient Armor
  
  Dragon scales are hard to break, and Bolladreq is no exception. His plated scales are as durable as steel, and like all dragons, no amount of heat can burn or damage his body; inside and out. His toxic nature makes him resilient to most forms of poisons and blights, though unlike his heat immunity he is not entirely immune to the strongest of acids or the most potent of ailments and toxins.
• Toxic Lizard
  
  Bolladreq has various toxic properties, such as a flammable saliva that exhumes a noxious chemical when burned, a venom-laced bite similar to a cobra's toxin, and blood that is almost as acidic as stomach acid (The blood of most dragons are similarly toxic in nature).
• Power of a Tyrant
  
  Being a great beast, Bolladreq has immense physical strength. Alone he can carry over twice his weight, and he can tear through most metals without trouble. His tail, being as sharp as a spear, alone is an effective weapon both for jabbing and swinging like a blunt instrument. His claws and teeth are just as formidable. He is capable of flight, and is deceiptively fast for his bulk; granted he can still be out-runned by more nimble creatures.
• Walking Inferno
  
  Bolladreq has formidable fire manipulation. He is able to exhume blazes of flames that can flood a city in a sea of fire, exhale a concentrated volley of fire that can tear through the average mountain, and stir enough heat to turn create pools of molten rock and metal. His manipulation is limiting to summon flames off of his scales while variations of firebreathing are his only method of ranged attacks. His saliva can be burned with a firebreathe to create a green flame that has a far more dangerous smoke then typical fire, as it is both disorienting and toxic to inhale.

Weaknesses

• Cold Blooded
  
  Biologically, Bolladreq is an ectothermic reptile and cannot produce his own body heat naturally.
  His fire ability allows him to heat his own body, however he does not have unlimited endurance and the more firepower he uses can drain him into exhaustion. Left vulnerable in cold conditions, he quickly becomes lethargic and easy to both outmaneuver and outwill. Cold based attacks can slowly drain his fire producing energy, and being drenched in water can temporarily douse his external fire production.
• Achilles Heel
  
  While his scales are tough, his chest is far more vulnerable and soft then the rest of his body,
  and a clean blow from a good weapon can deliver great injuries given the chance.
• Dragon's Bane
  
  There is a very rare flowering plant called Dragon's Bane. Named so because its aroma repels dragons.
  Exposure to the plant can rend Bolladreq weak and ill, forcing him to ingest it can cause him to become gravely ill.
• Ego Bubble
  
  His arrogance can easily allow him to underestimate foes, and he can become agitated quiet fast if anyone dares to insult his pride; Both weak points for manipulating him.
• Dragon's Greed
  
  If there is anything Bolladreq loves more then himself, it is his wealth. Bribing Bolladreq with rare items and treasures is certainly an easy way to get him to do what you want.

Artifact

Ring of Mortal Illusion

Though Bolladreq owns the treasure horde filled with rare and enchanting artifacts, he carries with him the Ring of Mortal Illusion. A ring that when worn, shape shifts the wearer, if the wearer is a non-mortal entity, into a human counterpart. Despite the initial small size of the ring, its enchanted to fit practically any sized beast or demon so long as it has a finger to wear it on.

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Relationships

(optional. Unless if you have predefined relationships with other accepted characters that were discussed by both parties, keep this blank and add to it as the IC progresses, giving a brief description have how your character feels about the other characters he/she interacts with.)

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Other

(Theme songs or other noteworthy things and such go here.)

Knights of Evil (High Casual, Organization of Evil Monsters) (Work in Progress)

Here we go, examples for mah ideas.

@Sophrus

Adorable.

Knights of Evil (High Casual, Organization of Evil Monsters) (Work in Progress)

Can I create a group of plague doctors?

@Scarescrow

By all means!

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Deal, Im aiming for Warhammer goblins so they are rather clever, but stupid (if that makes sense) So... im going with invented themselves but its cheap garbage. the complex stuff breaks half the time but, assuming i can have black powder the cannons or rifles are slow but reasonably reliable.

@Sophrus

There better be a battalion of clumsy goblin riflemen ready to salute their dark lord.

Knights of Evil (High Casual, Organization of Evil Monsters) (Work in Progress)

@Komager interesting, but i have come up with another idea, it would still largely fit into a rival warband concept but maybe a Goblin warlord instead. lots of clockwork & Steampunk technology intermixed with the Orcs and trolls.

are we allowed to have steam/clockwork tech @dragonmancer?

@Sophrus

Yes. However you must decide whether or not the tech was stolen or invented. If stolen, the tech is of higher quality but lacks enough abundance to equip the whole tribe in steam punk gear; Steampunk vehicles (if any) will be less abundant as well. Invented tech however can supply the whole population and give an abundance of vehicles and the like; at the cost of them being of lower quality make and prone to malfunction or break often.
Unless if you can convince me that your goblins are brilliant engineers.

Knights of Evil (High Casual, Organization of Evil Monsters) (Work in Progress)

Currently I'm thinking of some kind of ogre/orc warchief and or shaman/warlock kind of conglomeration. But that's all pretty vague.

I'm pretty firm on the ogre/orc who's power isn't from themselves but the huge war band they control. Though he would be semi-badass with an artefact weapon or something.

@Sophrus

Love the concept! Just note that the war band itself will have to be posted at a different fort as to not crowd Lancelot's keep. However your warlord may handpick a handful of warriors as personal guards or servants to stay at residence.

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I just realized the Sci-Fi tag is also on this RP. There's going to be Sci-Fi stuff?

@TheWindel

Ah glad you notice that, and potentially. While there won't be any super advanced aliens and UFO's if players want to make a magic system or otherwordly race that leans more towards SCI-Fi then Fantasy that is allowed; granted in moderation. Keep in mind that this RP will focus more on fantasy then SCI-FI regardless.

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@Thecrash20 That sounds awesome! Badass undead sorcerer incoming?

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This is an awesome idea. It's sorta similar to mine; I plan to have a sort of Beastman, created as a champion by a sort of but not all powerful demon, and hes just sorta spent his time gathering beastkin followers until recently. They could end up being fierce rivals.

@Komager

I look forward to the bickerings between two rival War Chiefs in one house.