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He has no friends, but he gets a lot of mail. I'll bet he spent a little time in jail.
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Really just waiting on more/finished sheets before we can start.
@Lewascan2 Oh, I hadn't realized that you wanted to negotiate the nerf.

What I was planning was basically putting your character on the same footing as everyone else at the start, divorced from their "universe" and therefore most of her power. She can still move very fast, but the Void is not a place where concepts like time, speed, distance, etc, hold a lot of value.
@Kassarock Flawless, accepted. I'm glad we're going the Asura's Wrath route with this.

@Lewascan2 OK, I like the sheet. I just feel that she's a little too strong for the very start. Being a small universe is something I may have expected further down the road. I won't ask that you change anything for now. Would you accept a temporary nerf slapped on her for the start of the RP?

@DracoLunaris Good sheet, I can see some interesting places this can go.

Fun fact: in the lore for a board game (Kingdom Death: Monster), the closest thing to their world's ultimate evil is an "Entity" called the Goblin. There's content forthcoming for battling the Goblin Dragon (as dragons are the physical manifestations of Entities), but for now its entire relationship with the game is a random event where the Goblin looks at you, and you instantly die.
OK this is finished I guess now

@Lewascan2 Give me the summarized version first, that was supposed to be the point of having a short CS. If you can't keep it brief, it means you've overcomplicated the concept.

@Randomness Like I said, keep things simple. I think this is a better idea; why bother with the middle-man?

@KillamriX88 I see what you're getting at. Again, I urge you to push it further. Rather than just, "guy with his sisters living inside him," what if they were an actual triarch-godhead? Three faces, six arms, the whole deal. Just an idea of a direction to take; I like the idea, and want to refine it.
@Randomness This all really just sounds less and less like your character is meant to be the Inheritor, and more like this tree should be.
@Randomness The different dimensions thing was the part that would not have worked at all. The rest we can discuss. My main concern is for this character, compared to any other, it would not be "their" power, they would explicitly owe their place to a higher authority, which would be unable to access them once they leave their home world.
So the CS template and example are both up. Seht mostly exists as an example of what I'm looking for in terms of depth/length of CS. This is an easy concept to get too bogged down in details within.

That said...

@Moonlit Ghost Gods aren't beings that our characters will have had direct dealings with before the events of the RP. And while the slime may have a story, it still doesn't really have an arc. Where is its pathos, its will, its drive? That's more important than how many universes it's destroyed.

@DracoLunaris I'm gonna be straight with you, I'm not reading all that. The CS is up, consult the sample for the length of story that I'll be reviewing your character based on. Having all of those details is fine, I just want to work with base-level concepts and themes at this stage.

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