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2 days ago
Current too late i bought a spell that would bring me good luck in my pregnancy and in the courtroom to get my kids back
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2 days ago
idk what going on but 13org is too unproblematic to be the issue so i'm with them
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23 days ago
and y'all were mad i was out here talking about sucking toes. now you're stuck with this guy. hope you're happy, fools.
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25 days ago
i love your cat more than you btw
25 days ago
not to repeat it ad nauseam but my dating app entry is that i suck toes as long as they're white, baby blue, pink or french tipped

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Just an Aragorn looking for his Arwen


Most Recent Posts

@Joestar Alright, I don't have anything to add momentarily. I'm working on my own CS at the moment (one out of two, because I will be playing a jonin and chunin I think) so I might be unresponsive a bit.
I know. Women are evil. x)
@Joestar I prefer zero to hero as well, but I've noticed that when we RP with genin it turns into a power struggle where everyone wants to 'level' up their character asap and it makes my work fucking annoying. x) You're free to 'leave empty holes' in the jutsus. You could just not use the maximum amount if you prefer.

Also this man has a girlfriend? Look at you. All fancy and shit.
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All kinds of opinions, needed changes, etc. appreciated.


Please take a look, edit, and let me know when it's done. x)

@Joestar I feel ya, I was just warning ya. And take 80% of what's said as a joke. Honestly it ain't bad.
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Overall I can accept it, but please take a look at the notes I gave you, correct them where you feel neccesary and then you can post it in the character bin. (I will read it again, I just don't feel the changes are large enough for me to say 'hurr post it here again' because tbh half of the review was sarcastic comments and you can probably ignore/take those with a grain of salt.
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Press view raw in the upper right corner to look at the codes for the CS skeleton, then copy paste them. Then fill them in. CS's with incorrect coding will not be graded because it's an eyesore. If there are issues please let me know.

As a sidenote, you are allowed to change the format slightly, but please don't do a complete overhaul. Thanks.
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PLEASE! post your character sheets in the OOC for grading before adding them to the character bin.
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