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Ignite Heart! A Magical Girl RP

The sun was low in the horizon, coloring the sky in a deep orange-gold that was beautiful to gaze at. The sound of automobiles sounded in the distance, and every now and then a bird flew over head. The smell of the city was filled with a queer combination of the exhaust of vehicles and the smell of people just beginning to cook their dinners for the day. The restaurants on the side of the road, however, were the only thing that captivated Shiina, her mouth watering at all the options laid before her. Itamemono, Yakitori, Tempura, Takoyaki... Hell, with the money her mom gave her for dinner, she may be able to afford some expensive sushi! Ogata simply gazed at the various names of the restaurants, attempting to pick out the ones that had delicious sweets, until Shiina pushed her back into her bag. There was no way she was risking being discovered as a magical girl... Although, that would make her even more popular... No, the risk was too great! In the end, she settled on a smaller Udon shop that she heard her friend Kumiko talk about during lunch.

Several minutes and 500 Yen later, a steaming bowl of noodles was placed in front of the drooling pink-haired school girl, and she slowly slid the Higashi she bought for Ogata into her bag. Picking up and disconnecting her chopsticks, Shiina quickly began to devour the food as if she hadn't eaten in days. I have to remember to thank that guy taking mom out tonight!, Shiina thought to herself. She was glad that her mother was beginning to go out and look for somebody. After all, raising a child alone is difficult, and considering how Shiina acted, her mother must have been going through a tough time. These thoughts were disturbed when she realized that she hadn't used the bathroom the entire day. Embarrassed, she quickly devoured the rest of her bowl, wiped her face of noodles that missed her mouth, and quickly made her way to the bathroom.

The bathroom was very nice, considering she was in some random Udon shop. Her friend, Satoko, talked about them as if they were gas station restrooms... But then again, considering very few people were eating in the shop, it seemed as though not many people came to the shop. Not complaining about the unexpected cleanliness, Shiina, entered one of the stalls and did her business. Quickly leaving, she washed her hands and returned to the restaurant, realizing that she left Ogata all alone! She quickly checked her bag, thankful to see Ogata playing on Shiina's phone and breaking pieces off of the (relatively) large Higashi. Closing the bag, she turned towards the man behind the counter, realizing she now had more room in her stomach for dinner.

"Hey, Ojiisan! Another bowl this way!"

"It's Ojisan, brat! I'm only 45..."

Taking another 500 yen, the old looking shopkeeper began to prepare another bowl of Udon, allowing Shiina to have plenty of time to gaze around the shop. It had a wooden floor and was very traditional in style, with paper room dividers blocking off separate parts of the shop, and the only light being provided besides the outside sun were paper lamps. It seems as though while she was in the bathroom the dinner rush came in, as the number of customers seems to have more than tripled in the short time frame. In fact, the crowd was so large that Shiina decided to try and look for any of her classmates or friends, but before she could begin, she heard a voice close to her call out.

"Here ya go kid, thanks for the patronage"

A steaming bowl of Udon was deposited right in front of Shiina and, feeling a second wind overtake her, she began to eat, albeit significantly slower and more carefully than earlier. Despite this extra precaution though, it was still very messy. Numerous separate thoughts began to overtake her, such as what her mother's (possible) boyfriend was like, the types of clothes she planned on buying, if anyone she knew was in the shop, and what patrol was going to be like tonight.

Ignite Heart! A Magical Girl RP

What time of the year is it? Is it the beginning of the school year, or has it been going on for a while now?

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@GodOfWar
None of our quirks are flashy, so we can save a ton on special effects!

Ignite Heart! A Magical Girl RP

@HereComesTheSnow
Yeah, and she's one of the few of us that has an actual finisher, which opens up a lot of combos (Like shortening the distance between her and an enemy, and then using her finisher)

Ignite Heart! A Magical Girl RP

Alright, so far we have:

• Fiery champion of justice with a sweet tooth (DPS)
• Technology illiterate maiden with super speed, knives, and a watered down version of Mystic Eyes of Death perception (DPS)
• Stereotypical "Believe in yourself!" dumb-dumb with ribbons (CC/Support)
• The Smarty pants with space manipulation and a big sword (DPS/Support)
• The upbeat yet determined girl with sanic speed (DPS)
• The independent loli that loves animals (Ranged DPS)
• The meek newbie with a power so complex that I can't even understand it, in a good way. (DPS, Support, Some CC)

Jesus, We're prepared for pretty much any situation

Ignite Heart! A Magical Girl RP

@VitaVitaAR
Ah, alright. Thank you for clarifying.

Ignite Heart! A Magical Girl RP

Shiina Mamiko

Name: 椎名真美子 (Mamiko Shiina)

Magical Girl Title: The Pink Delinquent

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Appearance:
She wears her uniform on school days and rarely changes into anything else for casual activity. When she is off school, she usually wears a pink and grey blazer and a grey skirt, unless it is during the winter, when she wears a blue winter coat and black pants.

Magical Girl Appearance:
As with most magical girls, Shiina's clothes change, shifting into a pink dress. Shinna is somewhat unique in that she is physically changed when she transforms, as her eye color becomes red while transformed,

Personality: A highly driven young girl, Shiina strives to be the best she can possibly be. She constantly pushes herself to try new activities, learn new skills, and convince her friends to do they're best. She looks to the future with a bright hope in her eyes, and does everything in her power to make sure the people around her don't miss out on anything they might regret. This has resulted in her getting suspended on numerous occasions for pulling pranks on the student body and faculty, and she skipped school multiple times in order to hang out with her friends and go to a restaurant, or take the train to hang out at Shinjuku or Akihabara... Let's just say, she is far from a good student, and her grades clearly reflect it. But it's not her fault, there's just so much more interesting stuff to do! She hates indecisiveness, and usually just drags people with her before they are able to say no to whatever she is requesting them to do.

Shiina is actually like this because of an incident that occurred when shes was 9 - A fairy came to her and offered to ignite her heart, but Shiina was just too much of a coward to agree, worried about the dangers that come with being a magical girl. As such, the fairy left, and Shiina wallowed in self-hate that a lifetime opportunity passed her by. She felt so defeated, in fact, that she cut off her long flowing hair, leaving it short. She has kept the same style to this day, but decided that striving to improve oneself is far better than remaining a pathetic person that hates themselves. Shiina hates despair above all else - if a friend is feeling it's cold fingers, she'll do anything to cheer them up, from motivational speeches and presents, to threatening the thing causing those feelings.

Shiina is the least formal person out there, and her Kaa-san can't count the number of times that she pissed off a teacher by referring to them with their first name. Sometimes, people wonder if she even knows what a last name is for... Additionally, she prefers to do things that require great skill or trial-and-error, constantly throwing herself at challenges headfirst until she either succeeds, or (more likely than not) gets bored.

The most jarring thing about Shiina, however, is how bloodthirsty she is towards Negari. Hell, her main technique is to grab them, and squish them in her ribbons until they burst...

Skills: Shiina is, surprisingly, amazing at persuasion, and her charisma is off the charts. This is most likely because she is constantly talking to people and getting them to do stupid stuff like skip class or jump off bridges into rivers. Shiina is also a 'jack of all trades' in that she is slightly better in everything - that's what happens when you try to do a new thing every day! Shiina is also great at taunts, and while other's do not consider this a skill, she tries to make puns when she can to lighten the mood. Shiina's most impressive skill, however, is her iron will. She will keep doing something until she can succeed, and putting her mind towards something will make her a force to be reckoned with! This combined with her charisma make her amazing at speeches. Unfortunately, her intelligence is below average, and she is no more physically powerful than the average 14 year old girl.

Abilities: Unlike other magical girls, Shiina does not grow stronger or faster with her transformation. Her durability increases slightly, and her reactions improve significantly, but her main power is the ability to move ribbons using her mind. She can only manipulate a maximum of 3 at the moment, and all three are worn on her outfit. Her power can cause the ribbons to change density and maneuverability, and they can move at blinding speeds. They can even grow to longer lengths and grow wider, up to a maximum range of 50 feet and 10 feet wide! Sharpness can be altered, to a degree, but is nowhere near as manipulable as other properties. They are not indestructible, but are far more durable than average ribbons, and regenerate given enough magical energy, which is a good thing considering Shiina doesn't really have the money to replace them each time a Negari rips through them.

She knows three techniques:
Gleipnir Restraint, her signature move, tightly binds a Negari until they are unable to move (But can still break through if strong enough). Variations include crushing the opponents rather than merely restraining them, but this is more tiring.

Cloth Coat, a defensive move, surrounds the ribbons around a target, shielding them from damage (As with Gleipnir Restraint, the shield can be broken with enough power).

Finally, Striped Shuttle pushes the ribbons against the ground with great force, launching Shiina up to 5 stories in the air (Cloth Coat must be used before landing in order to prevent broken bones).

Weapon(s): Most of the time, ribbons are merely an accessory used to look cuter. But for Shiina, they are a truly powerful weapon!...and make her look super cute. Using her magical girl powers, she can animate the ribbons to do a number of tasks, and cause them to go from soft and maneuverable, to rigid and harder than steel. Ogata has suggested, on numerous occasions, to use the ribbons as a form of labor so they can lounge around all day while the ribbons do the work.

The ribbons are essential to most of Shiina's maneuvers and attacks, and losing them would be detrimental to her. Their are 3 in total, 2 black and 1 red/pink striped.

Brief History: Born to a middle class family in Tokyo, Shiina was a shy, feminine young girl who sought to help her single mother, Mamiko Ririko. Shiina's father ran away when he was told that Ririko was pregnant, and he seemingly moved to another country, with no records. Kaa-san was never very upset though. She always said things like "Well, he gave me you, so he isn't all bad." or "Don't be too bad or I'll send ya to live with your father!" But raising a young girl is hard when you're a single mom, so they were forced to live in a... poorer neighborhood. Crime was never a problem, though, and the neighbors were all very nice. All in all, Shiina lived a normal life and was never faced with trouble or too much adversity.

But that's what made it a living hell.

Every day was exactly the same; Wake up, eat breakfast, go to school, eat lunch, walk home, watch TV for hours until kaa-san came home, eat dinner, and go to sleep. Wake up, eat breakfast, go to school, eat lunch, walk home, watch TV for hours until kaa-san came home, eat dinner, and go to sleep. Wake up, eat breakfast, go to school, eat lunch, walk home, watch TV for hours until kaa-san came home, eat dinner, and go to sleep. Wake up, eat breakfast, go to school, eat lunch, walk home, watch TV for hours until kaa-san came home, eat dinner, and go to sleep...

It got to the point where Shiina could barely tell the days apart, and had to obsessively check the date to make sure time was passing at all. Nothing was special, everything was routine, and it was an inescapable pit of boring endlessness. That is, until she was greeted by a fairy on her way home from school. You could imagine the surprise when shy little 9-year old Shiina was asked to become a magical girl! But Shinna was frozen. She couldn't respond to anything this crazy... Hell, she didn't even know if it was real, or just her brain making hallucinations out of sensory deprivation. In the end, Shiina silently turned on her heel, and ran from the small floating woman. After the incident, Shiina was inconsolable. She was a coward who begged for change to her monotone life, but when a lifetime opportunity presented itself, she ended up running out of fear! Shiina slowly fell into a depression, withdrawing from friends and her mother.

It wasn't until she saw magical girls on the news fighting the Negari that she realized it - She should be looking to the future, not letting the what if's, should-have's, and if-only's drag her down. The very next day, on her way home from school, she cut her waist length hair. It felt liberating, her head held high with barely anything dragging it down. Ever since then, she promised to herself to be the best she can be!

Shiina was well on her way of accomplishing this goal... until she saw a hand-sized woman, leaning against a wall. This woman turned to Shiina, speaking in a soft, uncaring voice

"I need a partner... anyways, blah, blah, igniting hearts, you want to be a Magical Girl or what?"

A look of determination filled Shiina's eyes as she whispered out a soft "Yes"

That was a few months ago, and now she is currently enrolled in East Umitori High School, Class 1-B.

Fairy Name: 緒方 (Ogata)

Fairy Appearance:

Fairy Personality: The true incarnation of sloth, Ogata simply can't find the energy to do most things, refusing to even fly by herself unless forced to. She is extremely submissive (or more likely uncaring) to Shiina and her shenanigans, simply sleeping in her bag or somewhere hidden. While Shiina believes she was given a second chance to become a magical girl, in actuality, Ogata was simply too lazy to find a good candidate, so she chose the first girl with potential that walked by - Shiina. Despite this uncaring demeanor, Ogata does care for Shiina, if only as a form of transportation and source of sweets.

Theme Song: Sismic Music - It can't come quickly enough

Ignite Heart! A Magical Girl RP

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Shiina Mamiko

Name: 椎名真美子 (Mamiko Shiina)

Magical Girl Title: The Pink Delinquent

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Appearance:
She wears her uniform on school days and rarely changes into anything else for casual activity. When she is off school, she usually wears a pink and grey blazer and a grey skirt, unless it is during the winter, when she wears a blue winter coat and black pants.

Magical Girl Appearance:
As with most magical girls, Shiina's clothes change, shifting into a pink dress. Shinna is somewhat unique in that she is physically changed when she transforms, as her eye color becomes red while transformed,

Personality: A highly driven young girl, Shiina strives to be the best she can possibly be. She constantly pushes herself to try new activities, learn new skills, and convince her friends to do they're best. She looks to the future with a bright hope in her eyes, and does everything in her power to make sure the people around her don't miss out on anything they might regret. This has resulted in her getting suspended on numerous occasions for pulling pranks on the student body and faculty, and she skipped school multiple times in order to hang out with her friends and go to a restaurant, or take the train to hang out at Shinjuku or Akihabara... Let's just say, she is far from a good student, and her grades clearly reflect it. But it's not her fault, there's just so much more interesting stuff to do! She hates indecisiveness, and usually just drags people with her before they are able to say no to whatever she is requesting them to do.

Shiina is actually like this because of an incident that occurred when shes was 9 - A fairy came to her and offered to ignite her heart, but Shiina was just too much of a coward to agree, worried about the dangers that come with being a magical girl. As such, the fairy left, and Shiina wallowed in self-hate that a lifetime opportunity passed her by. She felt so defeated, in fact, that she cut off her long flowing hair, leaving it short. She has kept the same style to this day, but decided that striving to improve oneself is far better than remaining a pathetic person that hates themselves. Shiina hates despair above all else - if a friend is feeling it's cold fingers, she'll do anything to cheer them up, from motivational speeches and presents, to threatening the thing causing those feelings.

Shiina is the least formal person out there, and her Kaa-san can't count the number of times that she pissed off a teacher by referring to them with their first name. Sometimes, people wonder if she even knows what a last name is for... Additionally, she prefers to do things that require great skill or trial-and-error, constantly throwing herself at challenges headfirst until she either succeeds, or (more likely than not) gets bored.

The most jarring thing about Shiina, however, is how bloodthirsty she is towards Negari. Hell, her main technique is to grab them, and squish them in her ribbons until they burst...

Skills: Shiina is, surprisingly, amazing at persuasion, and her charisma is off the charts. This is most likely because she is constantly talking to people and getting them to do stupid stuff like skip class or jump off bridges into rivers. Shiina is also a 'jack of all trades' in that she is slightly better in everything - that's what happens when you try to do a new thing every day! Shiina is also great at taunts, and while other's do not consider this a skill, she tries to make puns when she can to lighten the mood. Shiina's most impressive skill, however, is her iron will. She will keep doing something until she can succeed, and putting her mind towards something will make her a force to be reckoned with! This combined with her charisma make her amazing at speeches. Unfortunately, her intelligence is below average, and she is no more physically powerful than the average 14 year old girl.

Abilities: Unlike other magical girls, Shiina does not grow stronger or faster with her transformation. Her durability increases slightly, and her reactions improve significantly, but her main power is the ability to move ribbons using her mind. She can only manipulate a maximum of 3 at the moment, and all three are worn on her outfit. Her power can cause the ribbons to change density and maneuverability, and they can move at blinding speeds. They can even grow to longer lengths and grow wider, up to a maximum range of 50 feet and 10 feet wide! Sharpness can be altered, to a degree, but is nowhere near as manipulable as other properties. They are not indestructible, but are far more durable than average ribbons, and regenerate given enough magical energy, which is a good thing considering Shiina doesn't really have the money to replace them each time a Negari rips through them.

She knows three techniques:
Gleipnir Restraint, her signature move, tightly binds a Negari until they are unable to move (But can still break through if strong enough). Variations include crushing the opponents rather than merely restraining them, but this is more tiring.

Cloth Coat, a defensive move, surrounds the ribbons around a target, shielding them from damage (As with Gleipnir Restraint, the shield can be broken with enough power).

Finally, Striped Shuttle pushes the ribbons against the ground with great force, launching Shiina up to 5 stories in the air (Cloth Coat must be used before landing in order to prevent broken bones).

Weapon(s): Most of the time, ribbons are merely an accessory used to look cuter. But for Shiina, they are a truly powerful weapon!...and make her look super cute. Using her magical girl powers, she can animate the ribbons to do a number of tasks, and cause them to go from soft and maneuverable, to rigid and harder than steel. Ogata has suggested, on numerous occasions, to use the ribbons as a form of labor so they can lounge around all day while the ribbons do the work.

The ribbons are essential to most of Shiina's maneuvers and attacks, and losing them would be detrimental to her. Their are 3 in total, 2 black and 1 red/pink striped.

Brief History: Born to a middle class family in Tokyo, Shiina was a shy, feminine young girl who sought to help her single mother, Mamiko Ririko. Shiina's father ran away when he was told that Ririko was pregnant, and he seemingly moved to another country, with no records. Kaa-san was never very upset though. She always said things like "Well, he gave me you, so he isn't all bad." or "Don't be too bad or I'll send ya to live with your father!" But raising a young girl is hard when you're a single mom, so they were forced to live in a... poorer neighborhood. Crime was never a problem, though, and the neighbors were all very nice. All in all, Shiina lived a normal life and was never faced with trouble or too much adversity.

But that's what made it a living hell.

Every day was exactly the same; Wake up, eat breakfast, go to school, eat lunch, walk home, watch TV for hours until kaa-san came home, eat dinner, and go to sleep. Wake up, eat breakfast, go to school, eat lunch, walk home, watch TV for hours until kaa-san came home, eat dinner, and go to sleep. Wake up, eat breakfast, go to school, eat lunch, walk home, watch TV for hours until kaa-san came home, eat dinner, and go to sleep. Wake up, eat breakfast, go to school, eat lunch, walk home, watch TV for hours until kaa-san came home, eat dinner, and go to sleep...

It got to the point where Shiina could barely tell the days apart, and had to obsessively check the date to make sure time was passing at all. Nothing was special, everything was routine, and it was an inescapable pit of boring endlessness. That is, until she was greeted by a fairy on her way home from school. You could imagine the surprise when shy little 9-year old Shiina was asked to become a magical girl! But Shinna was frozen. She couldn't respond to anything this crazy... Hell, she didn't even know if it was real, or just her brain making hallucinations out of sensory deprivation. In the end, Shiina silently turned on her heel, and ran from the small floating woman. After the incident, Shiina was inconsolable. She was a coward who begged for change to her monotone life, but when a lifetime opportunity presented itself, she ended up running out of fear! Shiina slowly fell into a depression, withdrawing from friends and her mother.

It wasn't until she saw magical girls on the news fighting the Negari that she realized it - She should be looking to the future, not letting the what if's, should-have's, and if-only's drag her down. The very next day, on her way home from school, she cut her waist length hair. It felt liberating, her head held high with barely anything dragging it down. Ever since then, she promised to herself to be the best she can be!

Shiina was well on her way of accomplishing this goal... until she saw a hand-sized woman, leaning against a wall. This woman turned to Shiina, speaking in a soft, uncaring voice

"I need a partner... anyways, blah, blah, igniting hearts, you want to be a Magical Girl or what?"

A look of determination filled Shiina's eyes as she whispered out a soft "Yes"

That was a few months ago, and now she is currently enrolled in East Umitori High School, Class 1-B.

(Note, I'm not sure if we have met our fairies yet. If we haven't, please tell me so I can edit the history)

Fairy Name: 緒方 (Ogata)

Fairy Appearance:

Fairy Personality: The true incarnation of sloth, Ogata simply can't find the energy to do most things, refusing to even fly by herself unless forced to. She is extremely submissive (or more likely uncaring) to Shiina and her shenanigans, simply sleeping in her bag or somewhere hidden. While Shiina believes she was given a second chance to become a magical girl, in actuality, Ogata was simply too lazy to find a good candidate, so she chose the first girl with potential that walked by - Shiina. Despite this uncaring demeanor, Ogata does care for Shiina, if only as a form of transportation and source of sweets.

Theme Song: Sismic Music - It can't come quickly enough

The Prophecy

I'll see if I can come up with something else as I don't want to make something too samey as someone else, I'm wondering if the domains of "Combat, Honor, and Passion" would conflict too much with his.

Their mortal would probably definitely be a berserker-ish sort of character.

@Rune_Alchemist

Don't worry about it, my guy would love having a warrior to compare himself to! Besides, Ehbus only really shares combat of those domains, so it's plenty different.

The Prophecy

Here is my character, please tell me if there is anything to change in order to make them fit better.

Komarod (Mortal)

Name: Komarod Enuzir (People in the Enuzir tribe do not have last names, so Komarod just took the tribe name as a family name)

Age: 35

Appearance:
Not Pictured: Countless scars across his body, his left leg is horribly disfigured (But it is hard to tell through the armor).

Race: Orc

Gender: Male

Sign/Mark: A sword, located on the left shoulder.

Blessing:
Incredible Strength: Even by Orc standards, Komarod's strength is simply supernatural. He can easily best an ogre in a wrestling competition, and swinging a sword twice his size is an actual viable strategy. Unfortunately, this incredible strength does not equal incredible endurance, and considering his hotheadedness, Komarod can quickly tire out by overexerting himself in combat.

Skills:
Advanced Swordplay: Komarod has trained with a sword since he was born, and has been on numerous successful raids on neighboring villages. While he possesses no formal training, decades of swinging a blade will give at least some skill.
(Relatively) High Intellect: Komarod is extremely intelligent for an Orc, putting him on equal terms with the average human. If he stayed in his village, he would have made a fine strategist.
Iron Will: Komarod has experienced many of his tribe members falling in combat, and his god's influence has only strengthened the resolve in his heart. Should he set himself to something, it would require extremely convincing words to turn Komarod away from the task.

Drawbacks:
Old Wounds: Komarod has countless scars from battle, but the most detrimental of these is his left leg. Crushed under an ogres club, Komarod has healed remarkably well considering his circumstances. However, this wound still leaves him much slower than he would be, and is a very large weak point that is easily exploitable by enemies that know about it.
Old Flame: Komarod is just not as enthusiastic ever since his injury. He once relished the opportunity to kill whenever it arose, but he has grown far too complacent in his years. It would take a very impressive enemy, or an incredible motivation in order to convince Komarod to take up arms against anyone, and that's even including his god's influence.
Constant Improvement: Ehbus is a god of combat, and advocates improvement above all else. Any moment not spent training or improving something in one's life is a moment wasted. While a day off is OK here and there, Komarod must train at least 5 times a week, or else he will have his blessing taken away until he makes some breakthrough in his abilities, such as a new sword technique or a higher level of endurance. This constant improvement has resulted in him being alienated from his less driven companions.

Inventory: A well-worn Steel Broadsword, Plate Armor, Necklace made of Ogre Teeth, 100 Brightly colored pebbles (Enuzir Currency)

History: Born to a well off couple in the Enuzir tribe, Komarod was destined to be a great warrior from birth. He was the largest in his litter of 3, he possessed the mark of the god Ehbus on his shoulder, and he was already capable of walking by 9 months. His first kill was only 2 months later, when he stabbed an older Orc who was breaking into his home. This boosted him to even higher reputation, and at the young age of 9, he was already in the village raiding party. By then, his kill count had already increased to 12, as the village elder found that designating a village executioner was effective at keeping crime rates low. Because his impressive skill, however, many younger members of the tribe hated Komarod, his siblings being the only children even willing to speak with him. Thanks to this social shunning, Komarod never developed articulate social skills, and was forced to rely on his fists in order to make progress. He slowly grew more and more blood-thirsty, seeking to kill foe after foe, and bolstering his standing in the tribe to new found heights while he was in puberty.

He already had several wives by the age of 20, and enough war trophies to fill a small barn. His blade, which he had stolen from a human that was allied with a neighboring village, was as deadly as it was ornate, and it lent itself very well whenever he was sent out on a hunt. The tribe had grown greatly since Komarod was born, and required large amounts of food to sustain itself. As such, large hunts were organized in order to take down massive prey. The most scaring hunt, however, was on the local Ogre den. Ogre's were much more physically powerful than Orcs, and it took his tribe's entire military in order to take out the den. Just before the Ogre chieftain was slaughtered, however, he smashed his "club" (which was more like a tree than a mere club) onto Komarods leg, easily shattering it. Komarod nearly died from blood loss, and was barely able to survive thanks to the work of the Enuzir healers. Ever since that moment, Komarod realized how much he truly relied on his god-given gift, and how weak and fragile he truly was. Ever since then, Komarod never participated in large hunts, only ever appearing in small raids where his risk of injury was extremely minor.

By 31 years old, Komarod had sired countless children, and he had mellowed down into an actually decent person. His blood thirst was far weaker than it once was, and he actually mourned the massive number of people he killed. He destroyed almost all of his trophies, many of which were bones from slain enemies, until the only thing that remained was the sword from so many years ago. The blade itself is dull, but Kamorod's raw strength still made it's cut true. By this point, the old chieftain had elevated Komarod to the second highest possible status, and he became the youngest Elder in his Enuzir history. From then on, Komarod lived a very comfortable life style, until the age of 35. Then, a small human messenger came to the village, presenting an ultimatum: either send the strongest warrior in the Enuzir tribe to the capital, or be exterminated by the Forsaken army. The other Elder's, knowing of the Forsaken's power, begged Komarod to go with the messenger. Secretly, Komarod was extremly afraid, as he had not been in a large battle since the incident that injured him. However, he knew that his brother was the second best warrior in the village, and Komarod refused to risk his brother's life. As such, Komarod left the tribe he lived in his entire life, leaving for a world far different and dangerous then he knew possible, to face an enemy he knew was, in all likelihood, going to kill him.

(Holy crap, rereading this, he sounds super edgy. I promise, I plan to roleplay him as a sort of grizzled veteran that is "too old for this shit".)

Ehbus (Deity)

Name: Ehbus, God of Conflict

Appearance:

Domains: Improvement, Conflict, Strength, and Nature

Skills:
Massive Strength: Legends say that Ehbus bears the sky on his shoulders, and the stars are his sweat pouring off him.
Conflict Chaser: Those blessed by Ehbus are cursed to seek out conflict in order to improve themselves, and Ehbus is able to inflict this curse on anyone.
Rules of Nature: Ehbus commands all beasts on the planet, from the mighty Bear, to the minuscule Beetle. However, these commands are nowhere near as strong as deities of nature, as Ehbus is merely a god of conflict.

Race: Colossus

A brief history: Born in the beginning of the universe as one of original gods, Ehbus spurs conflict in order to encourage growth and improvement, and many events (both good and bad) can be traced back to someone under his influence. Even when he existed in physical form, Ehbus rarely left the cave he dwelled in, preferring to allow the Orcs, his personal creation, to do his bidding. These Orcs were beings of violence and bloodshed that sought nothing more than to become stronger, and while their patron deity was alive, they were immortal as long as they sought this conflict. It is thought that evolution originates from Ehbus, as all animals grow through conflict in order to become better adapted. This belief actually did manifest some minor power for Ehbus in the domain of Nature, but he is still nowhere near an actual deity of nature in these terms. Ehbus is, however, one of the strongest gods in terms of raw physical strength, and was one the larger forces in imprisoning the Forsaken gods. The fight, however, forced him to leave the physical plane of existence, forcing Ehbus to spur on the worlds growth through his blessed. With his physical "death", the Orcs lost their immortality, and they were designated to mortal status, while still retaining their blood thirsty habits, resulting in low population numbers and infighting.

(I know this may be pretty conflicting with pre-established lore, so please tell me if there is anything you'd like me to change so it can fit better).