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KalasZane620 said
Celebrate all you want Hype be alone with people looking them in the eyes XD
Hey! He has Tabo...Keina...The walls xD
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I fell in love with a girl I’ll never see again lmaooooooooo character development I guess
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NGL I haven’t roleplayed in years but I still log in every so often to see if any friends from the old days hit me up. It’s nice to see that every once in a while
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I'd dropkick my 14 yr old self
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People who get excited to talk about music are my favorite kinds of people
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Positive vibes time! I hope you get that job you're applying for! I hope you pass that test coming up! I hope ya'll achieve what ya'll set out to today!
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Hey! He has Tabo...Keina...The walls xD
Mhm e3e
AbigailTenshi said
o3o
I saw that then refreshed e3e
Kronshi said
4: He's not a genius, he's just good with puzzles and chess and stuff like that, if you asked him what 4 times 18 was, he would be at a loss
But...He's good at computer programming, something that requires atleast that basic level of math if not more ಠ_ಠ
Celebration ಠ_ಠ
It's not my roleplay and I try to stray away from being a background gm, but if I can add my opinion....
This is an RP where the characters have been in space for most of their lives, using a term like 'average street rat' really doesn't fit. Not to mention there may be advanced technology, but I doubt there would be any blade remotely close to the one in your picture. I honestly doubt guards and the council would just let anyone carry around a sword, let alone a great sword.
Another thing, how could someone fifteen years of age take on twenty gang members and kill each one of them? I think there should be a mention of how that could happen. But killing in the act of self defense? Would that really get someone locked up? You claim it's because of his reputation but....If they knew about that then he would have been locked up beforehand, hence even the smallest crimes can be punishable by death. Those under eighteen get locked up and sent to earth...So why wasn't he locked up beforehand? Also a bio is there for a reason, could extend it by telling how exactly he became so good with blades and computers, that one is just a suggestion.
Minor things that I'm not going to bother writing eight paragraphs about: Why is his eyes read? Why the fuck is he fifteen yet looks like he's in his twenties? Why do you have that goddamn unicorn? ಠ_ಠ
Yeah, I'm not the type to criticism everything in someone else's RP...But I couldn't help myself this time around.
This is an RP where the characters have been in space for most of their lives, using a term like 'average street rat' really doesn't fit. Not to mention there may be advanced technology, but I doubt there would be any blade remotely close to the one in your picture. I honestly doubt guards and the council would just let anyone carry around a sword, let alone a great sword.
Another thing, how could someone fifteen years of age take on twenty gang members and kill each one of them? I think there should be a mention of how that could happen. But killing in the act of self defense? Would that really get someone locked up? You claim it's because of his reputation but....If they knew about that then he would have been locked up beforehand, hence even the smallest crimes can be punishable by death. Those under eighteen get locked up and sent to earth...So why wasn't he locked up beforehand? Also a bio is there for a reason, could extend it by telling how exactly he became so good with blades and computers, that one is just a suggestion.
Minor things that I'm not going to bother writing eight paragraphs about: Why is his eyes read? Why the fuck is he fifteen yet looks like he's in his twenties? Why do you have that goddamn unicorn? ಠ_ಠ
Yeah, I'm not the type to criticism everything in someone else's RP...But I couldn't help myself this time around.
I missed a post ಠ_ಠ
Wow, I completely fucking missed that Haruka post ಠ_ಠ
samreaper said
xD still sad they're making a GoW 4 also just posted
I thought that was already made o.o
Once he had pulled her a good distance away from the other two he looked over his shoulder to see Nohime shunpo'ing away, while the other girl stated there, he assumed recovering? From what he saw in Nohime's eyes, and the way the other girl got beat down....He had his doubts that this was just any normal ol' spar, he wasn't sure what he had walked into but he was sure he stepped in at the right time. He looked back at Rio crossing his arms, "I came to talk to you before I took a small trip away....But first tell me what the hell that was about."
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