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3 yrs ago
Current Is there an RPGuild light mode?
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3 yrs ago
I wonder what the forum's musical preferences are.
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4 yrs ago
I wonder what future Animes I should watch, been stuck in an Isekai slump right now. No idea what else I want to watch besides Tensura and Shield Hero once that comes out.
4 yrs ago
I really want to be able to travel again real bad. I love visiting North America again.
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Je suis un homme qu'adorer le RPG, jeux vidéo, et histoire. Si vous veux jeux avec moi, envoye un PM en RPGuild et Discord.



If you can read that. Then as long as I have time. I'm happy to Roleplay with you. I'm okay with my French, but don't expect a Masters Thesis level of French from me.

I'm also cool with Roleplaying in English though!

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Name: Putri Perjaya Kusuma
Gender: Female, Bisexual.
Affiliation: Halim Defense Forces, formerly Indonesian Air Force Squadron Leader.
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Background: A Chinese Indonesian. Putri grew up and saw how her once great country has fallen off the world stage. Performing multiple combat missions during the war against China with her Trusty IF-21, she leads her squadron on multiple missions, many of them victories, and many more defeats. One of the many staff members ordered to evacuate to Kalimantan following the country's defeat, she instead decided that staying on the Capital would be fruitful, thus she joined the Halim Defense Forces, and her squadron of pretty old, but still reliable multirole fighter jets is a major unknown force that could decide future battles should the current status quo be disrupted.

She detests the Armed Forces Movement, The Islamic States of Java and Sumatra, and the FPI. Proud of her heritage and gender identity, she routinely acts as a liaison between the Halim Defense Forces, The Student Council, and Jakarta Protection Forces. As for her weapons, she usually carry a standard issue SS-13 Assault Rifle, modified with colouring and other gadgetry to suit the needs of her new circumstances, a custom made pistol of unknown origin, and a sword.

She also has a girlfriend, but she is noticeably tight lipped about who she is, where she is, and what nationality she is. A generally well spoken individual who likes working together with other people, most people don't know that she is a former Air Force pilot, not expecting to see a woman of her appearance, sexuality, and personality to be flying fighter jets.

Note: Don't underestimate her physical strength, being part of the TNI AU means that she is biomodified, her muscle density is genetically altered to suit the demanding needs of flying a multirole fighter jet, and she regularly does physical training whenever she has free time.

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I did think we went over the fact that your character is meant to be a new Communicator. The way you have it here indicates that she has been a communicator for roughly 7 or so years, and the more experienced Communicators are definitely not meant to be the focal point of the RP.

The reason for choice I also found to be strange. Why would Scathach have to seek Communicators out herself? If anything, assuming a physical form for so long would be vastly more draining than just doing it the old-fashioned way of divine location.

I think the backstory here needs a major overhaul overall.

EDIT: There are also some grammar/punctuation issues that could be fixed.


Oh, I would need to reword it. She has been training under her, but not necessarily becoming a Communicator herself. That's after she's finished her service.

I'll edit out the personal form.
Man, I'd love to join this, but not sure on what deity/communicator I want to play.
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