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Current Away from home between October 26th and November 10th. Contests will return when I'm back home!
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Don't forget to vote in the writing contest! The link is in the sidebar <3
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Back from vacation, taking my time to roll back into roleplays and contests.
5 mos ago
Vacation for a week, I'm off to Finland!
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Note to self: reply to RPs
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Hello everyone. I'm Dutch, a mother of a 8-year old boy and I love both rp-ing and writing. Since May 2020 I'm one of the contests mods.

I started with writing Dutch stories in 2002, I was already 19 at that time. I joined a writing competition and that got me started. Soon I started to write down all the stories my over-active imagination came up with. I had my first forum rp experience in 2003 on a Dutch fantasy forum. While I continued to write, I stopped rp-ing when the particular rp and forum slowly died. In 2011 my love for rp's rekindled when I joined a site with a forum and I started to RP solely in English since that is the language of the site. This is also when I wrote my first story in English.

I've got a few 1x1 rp's going on this site and a couple more on another site. I've always been a fan of writing competitions and I joined a lot several of the ones that were hosted on this website. Now I get to host them myself and really enjoy that too.

When you come here to check if I'm online, know that even when I show as online I might not be able to respond to RP's. I open this site so that when I have time I can spend some time here, but I don't always end up with the time to do so.

If I haven't replied in a while, feel free to poke me. I don't ghost on purpose, sometimes I just forgetful and if I read your reply and accidentally closed the tab I might forget I was supposed to reply T_T

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I bet mr Johnson is pinching the bridge of his nose now, thinking "why is it so hard to get good staff". I almost, almost feel sorry for him. Not really, but almost.

Yes, time to break their hearts. Poor things. But it will go better <3

And soon for Mike. Well, after a little timeskip to make sure Ethan is a full-fledged vampire hunter when it happens.
The second week of NaNoWriMo is known as Hell Week; it's when enthusiasm dwindles, motivation falters, and writing fatigue settles in.

It's wednesday so this week is already a few days old, but how is it for you?

Are you still going strong, or has your productivity gone down? Are you still enjoying writing this novel or are you beginning to wish you had never started?

Remember, NaNoWriMo is about writing that novel you always wanted to write and getting a daily writing routine. If you manage to get your 50k words that is a great achievement, but there is no shame in not getting there.

If you feel burned out, take a break. That's okay. If you worry about being behind, there is still time to catch up. And even if you don't, you worked on a novel that didn't exist before now. You're doing great!

Remember it's okay to start late and it's okay to switch projects. Just write and enjoy this process of creating something new.

Winner of RPGC #29: The Village



The Light That Leaves No Darkness by @Lady Selune


A woman rode into the abandoned hamlet, wide-brimmed hat and upturned collar deflecting the rain away from her. She gazed up at the moon, blinking once as a droplet struck her eye, and then turned towards the church, raising the lantern she carried a little higher. The hooves of her steed carried her towards the church with ease, trotting over twigs and puddles without any annoyance in its movement. Once her beast had come to the entrance, she gave the reins a simple tug in order to halt it. Before her stood the doors of the church; once stalwart defenders to any that had needed to take refuge inside, now rotten, the corpses of trees now twice-corpses in their dissolution.

Sighing, she twisted the reins about and tied them to a post by the church, making sure her mount was securely in place before turning her attention towards the building. Reaching into a pocket, she drew out a small handful of shimmering powder, using the water that had fallen onto the stone porch to make a gritty paste, then, slowly, dragging three fingers about the destroyed entrance. Her fingers ran across hard stone and rusted iron hinges, leaving a gleaming trail behind. Once it was complete she tossed the rest of the paste against the floor, brushing any remaining flecks off on her jacket.

Then, she stepped past it, into the desecrated house of worship. The pews were set astray, the altar’s white shroud moth-eaten and crumbling. Unceremoniously wiping her boots off on the flagstones, the traveller would set the lantern down atop the old stone and take a moment to shake the rain from her hat, looking about. “I know you’re here.” Her voice was clear and level, even as her lantern-light quivered at some unseen force.

The shadows closed in around the woman. She looked up, towards the leaden windows and saw as the moonlight shrank away, to a place more deserving of it. A slight scowl would spread across her face and she turned to one of the pews, taking a seat there and leaning forward on her knees. Reaching past her jacket, she would pull a simple symbol from beneath her shirt and let it dangle free, the carved wood displaying a shape similar to a Y, the arms of which had had holes drilled through for a string to serve as a necklace.

Still, there was no response from the presence in the church. Her scowl deepening, the woman pressed her hands together and licked her lips to brush away the dryness. She began to speak, lips forming the oft-spoken words easily. “On sn-”

”Faith has no power here. Not any longer.” The voice finally growled out, and the woman knew only she heard them.

“No, but you were so stubborn with ignoring me, I thought a small prod was in order.” The frown faded in an instant, the woman instead leaning back on her hard wooden seat, nonchalantly placing her hands over her stomach.

”Awful bold for you to come here alone.” The voice was almost mocking in its tone. Let it be; she held the cards here.

“I’d think you’d be happy for the company.” She felt her back stiffen as the pew’s hardness forced it to adjust; there never was a moment of comfort for the faithful. Just as she rose to stand, the edge of the wood biting into her muscle, the voice halted her.

”It is a… Change of pace.” The statement seemed to have been given almost reluctantly, and what had once been a frown on the woman’s face was now most certainly a smug sort of smirk. ”Although still a mistake for you.”

Once he had finished, the woman would nod with satisfaction to herself. It was in the main church; not speaking from some other area of the ruined building. This building held an ossuary in its bowels; where the last preacher had hidden his profane deeds. That meant there was an entrance to it. Rising to her feet, she took measured, even steps, every now and again pausing to tap her foot against the floor to check the sound.

Eventually, after perhaps a minute of quiet searching, she found what she desired. A fake flagstone with a cleverly concealed metal ring. Once again her fingers dove into her pocket, pulling out that shimmering powder and slowly dragging another circle out around it. She could feel the presence strong over her shoulders now, as if peering down to look at what she was doing. Then, she lifted the ‘flagstone’ up with a low, dull groan, dust falling into the vacuum of light that had appeared below. Carefully now, making sure not to disturb her previous work, she would let the trapdoor rest, returning to where her lantern sat on the altar. Lifting it up, disregarding the presence in the room, she sank down, the only comfort to her the lamplight as the cold and damp pressed in around her.

It was hard to feel comfortable when dead men watched you. Every alcove; every cubby, every nook and cranny had another set of skulls, and they all seemed to be staring at her. How many generations of villagers had long since settled into the Comforting Embrace? How many hadn’t settled?

Once her head had fallen below the church, the presence vanished, replaced instead by the rank stench of decay. This was not the smell that brought carrion to feast, no; this was the scent of the last few fragments of flesh finally succumbing to the flies. She turned to look at the stairs she had descended and could only shudder when she realised that the space underneath was filled with limb-bones, lined up like so many bleached-uniform soldiers. Another step, and another, her nose carrying her forward.

Then the whispers started. They brushed past her mind like cobwebs, and past her periphery vision like the first wisps of smoke from a campfire. Five? Eight? They were moving too quickly, their surprise at a mortal too much for her to draw a bead on their numbers. Not that it mattered for their bodies would tell her that. The scent drew closer, the whispers more insistent. How long had the preacher cursed them to this existence? Every footfall echoed with her frustration; at the fact that she and her comrades had failed to do anything for these people.

Finally, she reached them. Among the neatly ordered bones, the disarray stood out almost as much as the colour. They were yellowed and covered in a film of muck; viscous and brown. “The Embrace will come.” She said the words with a distinct finality, drawing a phial of clear liquid out of her coat with a soft clink. Uncorking it, she let the unction pour out, nose crinkling at the sensation of the perfumes struggle to overpower the decay.

The true power of this was not in the smell, of course, but in the symbolism. What they had not been given in life, she would provide in death. Each of the skulls received a small amount of the liquid, spilling down their crowns and in rivulets running through their empty eye sockets and noses. She held her lantern up high, opened the glass shutters, and closed her eyes, hearing the whispers pull together, and just as the flies had flitted towards their bodies, so too did they go towards the flame. Then, with a gloved hand, she would reach for each of the skulls in turn, placing them in a neat line one after the other, brushing fingers past where eyelids had once been.

With liquid still dripping from her hand she turned towards the stairway once more. Her lantern’s light was blue-white in its intensity, burning with a radiance that surpassed the natural. Her feet carried her naturally away from their final resting place and up, towards where her business would be concluded.

She emerged into the church again, and turned towards one of the great wooden beams that held the house of worship together. Wiping her hand off against it, she would wait for the voice to return.

”Did you find them? The works of this village? The works done in my name?”

“You denied them the Comforting Embrace.” She said it in a matter-of-fact tone of voice. “So now I shall grant them freedom.” She closed the trapdoor carefully, and gave one last check to the warding circle around it. Still intact. “And I shall return you to your rightful place.” One more phial would be drawn out with her spare hand, each of the wooden beams receiving a small daub of the oily liquid.

“What you have done here will become a memory, and when I pass to the Embrace, they will trouble this world no more. Throw your form against my mind; mayhaps it’ll raise my spirits now.” There was the sound of a chain rattling as the woman drew out a far grander symbol than the one that sat around her neck. Burnished silver, beaming in the spirit-light, it rang out a clear message in this desecrated house. Step by step, the symbol jingling with each one, the woman let her lantern-flame grace each of the daubed marks on the pillars, the glowing flames leaping outwards with unusual hunger.

”You dare?!| The voice held none of the confidence it had before- now it practically screeched at her. She ignored it; it deserved none of her time. She would lift the symbol up higher, swaying it gently from side to side as she strode towards the next pillar.

”You desecrate holy ground!” The voice had damned itself with its lies. There was no holiness in this place- elsewise the presence would not be here. The first pillar’s flames had already begun to devour it, so hungry were the flames.

“You cannot escape.” Was all she would say to it as she continued. “The door is warded. The ossuary is warded, so you cannot disturb the dead further. The stones will bury you, the flames will consume you, and their fuel will escape beyond your reach.” The fangs of fire began to bite at another pillar, the old, dry wood burning without much smoke.

The voice continued to screech, wretched thing that it was, but she disregarded it. What more needed to be said? What more needed to be heard? Nothing; nothing at all. Let the fire do the rest of the talking for her. Each of the vast wooden posts would stoke the righteous light and she strode across the building’s threshold confidently. Outside was a mounted host- men and women dressed similarly to her, illuminated by the flames rising up from the rest of the building’s houses.

Wordlessly, they watched as the supernatural light faded from her lantern. Past the wards, there was nothing to keep the souls away from their most deserved enjoyment of the Embrace and they would dart away, their last mission completed.

“On snow white streams the spirits fly, towards the veil beyond the sky. Take up with you our souls to keep, lay with them in Eternal Sleep. Preserve them well throughout the night, watch over them with blessed sight.”
The host would utter the prayer in respectful murmurs, and by the time the prayer had finished and the words had been washed away by the rain, the church was fully engulfed; a holy pyre to drive out the infernal rot that had grown into the roots of the building

Untying and mounting her steed, the woman would close the shutters carefully to preserve the now-natural flame. “We carry the faith,” the man next to her would say, the light reflected in his eyes even as he urged his horse to turn, the group trotting past the burning hamlet and beyond, to the next blighted grove.

“We carry the light that leaves no darkness behind.”
No last-minute votes, so it's time to announce the result:

The winner of this contest is: The Light That Leaves No Darkness with 3 votes. This entry will be added to our hall of fame.
Runner-up is Violence with two votes.

Well done everyone.

As I said in the previous post: I will leave this open for any late reviews and to give the anonymous writers a chance to claim their story or respond to the feedback if they wish to do so.
It's an impressive list. How long did it take you to come up with all that?
The deadline is in 30 minutes and I'll announce the winner then.

@BrokenPromise the thread will remain open after the deadline, so you'll have plenty of time to finish your reviews.
Rudrig picked up the papers and flipped through them. He only glanced up when she mentioned 'crush', but brought his attention back to the papers, skimming over the words. When Freya talked about the spiders he nodded to show he heard what she had said. Finally he put the papers on his desk again and picked up his drink, looking at the liquid.

"I don't miss being a field-agent," he said, "but we were a good team. I liked working with Rose and you." He took a big sip from the drink, enjoying the feeling of the alcohol as it burned in his throat. "They assured me she wouldn't be hurt if she would cooperate," he said, finally looking up from his drink. She didn't choose for this and she is in control. She will be protected under article 12."




Ethan jolted up when he heard Gaia.
"Gaia?"
It had sounded as if she stood next to him. Rubbing his face he walked to the door and looked outside, but she wasn't there. He walked back into his room and peered through the window, but he couldn't see her there either. "Huh..." Had he imagined it?
Maybe the guys had seen her. He left his room again and walked to Ben's room first, it being closest to his. After a knock he just walked in.

Apparently Mike was here too. "Dudes, do you know where Gaia is?" He frowned when he saw their faces. "What's wrong?"
In a few words, they explained what was going on.
"What the fuck. And you guys are letting that happen?"
"We're not exactly equipped to deal with trained agents," Benjamin defended himself. "Or handle being locked up very well. We're weak, okay?"
"Fuck..." Suddenly something dawned on him. "You think they'll go after Gaia too then?"
"If they are, they haven't told me," Mike said. "I only knew about Steph."
Ethan stormed out of the room and rushed through the mansion to get outside, Benjamin and Mike followed him after a moment of hesitation.




With the beast subdued the agents pulled the net with Gaia in it to the van, where others were waiting to help put her in the van. Her body furrowed the ground as they pulled it along.
"I will mention that people don't treat you like a person, as they should," Marc said, "but I can't do much more than that. I can't prove it and I certainly can't tell a psychiatrist to take action. She outranks me. But I will bring it up, I promise."

At least they would see each other the next day. That was nice; they didn't have to work together. But her being a patient did complicate things. Wasn't he supposed to keep a professional distance with the patients? He decided it didn't matter and he wouldn't bring that up. They hadn't walked far from the car; they soon passed the place where they had gamed and then the tea-room where he had bought that book for Sara.




Benjamin nodded. "I'm not an expert, really, but it sounds like they are drugging her and her mental state affects how you can function. As if she needs to be aware of you in order to have a form." At least he understood now why Dia had reacted like that; she had been in the same state as Ari.

He felt something on his shoulder and looked to the side, surprised to see Ari leaning on it. She had barely any weight, not more than a piece of clothing, but he felt her. "Ari, why aren't you going through me?" he asked.
Andy happily let Frosiien take the lead and walked alongside her. "You know," he said as he leaned a bit towards her, "I suspect your feathered friend is a little bit unhappy." He glanced over his shoulder and then quickly to Soul who had the keystone, before returning his attention to Frosiien. "If glaring daggers was a real ability we would be dead by now."

"Thank you for the offer," Marie said as she crawled to Mindy. "I'll be fine."
As she said that she got picked up by Mindy and got placed on her shoulder.
Mabel followed her trainer, who stepped up a bit to join Gavin.
"Hey, has it happened before humans attend Star Fall?" she asked him.

Michael gently squeezed back and winked to her, then he took a moment to see if his Cyndaqyuil was okay, and by the looks of it he enjoyed riding on Soul's back. The other Pokémon were in his Pokéballs; he'd let them out once they got to Star Fall.

Above them Benny and Merlin flew with them, but they soon got ahead. Merlin had lived in the woods and knew where the shrine was. Unlike Andy he still remembered how to get there.
You're doing great, Stormflyx!

I'm at 12498 words and I'm able to keep up my 2k words average per day. Getting ready to write the next chapter of my story and I hope to end around 14500 today. I could have written more yesterday, but I decided to do some RPs instead.
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