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Current Away from home between October 26th and November 10th. Contests will return when I'm back home!
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Don't forget to vote in the writing contest! The link is in the sidebar <3
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Hello everyone. I'm Dutch, a mother of a 8-year old boy and I love both rp-ing and writing. Since May 2020 I'm one of the contests mods.

I started with writing Dutch stories in 2002, I was already 19 at that time. I joined a writing competition and that got me started. Soon I started to write down all the stories my over-active imagination came up with. I had my first forum rp experience in 2003 on a Dutch fantasy forum. While I continued to write, I stopped rp-ing when the particular rp and forum slowly died. In 2011 my love for rp's rekindled when I joined a site with a forum and I started to RP solely in English since that is the language of the site. This is also when I wrote my first story in English.

I've got a few 1x1 rp's going on this site and a couple more on another site. I've always been a fan of writing competitions and I joined a lot several of the ones that were hosted on this website. Now I get to host them myself and really enjoy that too.

When you come here to check if I'm online, know that even when I show as online I might not be able to respond to RP's. I open this site so that when I have time I can spend some time here, but I don't always end up with the time to do so.

If I haven't replied in a while, feel free to poke me. I don't ghost on purpose, sometimes I just forgetful and if I read your reply and accidentally closed the tab I might forget I was supposed to reply T_T

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"We have to meet Ethan at dawn," Mike said.
"And I have a breakfast appointment," Benjamin added, after which glanced to Mike. "You can come along."

Benjamin was about to say they didn't have a place to stay when Mitch answered the second question before he could.
"They will stay with me."
"Mitch, you really-" Mike began.
"Did it sound like a question?" Mitch snapped. "You two are staying with me." He finished up the stitching. "Done. Keep it still; the stitches will tear with a wrong move and I don't want to do this again. Use an arm sling."

"I suppose..." Mike began after a sideway glance at Mitch. "We should discuss what we're going to do now. It's one thing to leave an agency that is skilled in tracking down dangerous creatures, but to break into one of their facilities. I mean, I can spy without them seeing me."
"And I can do nothing special at all," Benjamin added. "I have had no training with weapons, espionage, IT. I've got strong legs and that is all I can offer."

Mitch pinched the bridge of his nose as he heard Mike and Benjamin talk about what they could contribute to the mission. He had broken into high-security places before, he knew exactly how to avoid detection. Those two would most likely be caught and overtaken by armed guards in less than five minutes.




"We'll find out, won't we?" Lily replied cheerfully. "You will get normal, human food. But not the other sustenance Succibi generally need." She smiled broadly. "It's not starving in the human sense that will happen. Succibi, as far as we know, need the energy that comes from strong emotions, love in particular. Sex is actually an energy boost for your kind, whereas for humans it takes a lot of energy to do so. Men have died from exhaustion when having sex with Succubi, and they couldn't turn the Succubus down." She observed Steph, taking in her horns, her boobs, her bodyshape and her tail. "If my predictions are correct, you will get weaker without that extra energy regardless of how much you eat, and one day you won't have the energy to keep your body going and you die. That is what previous research suggested."
"Maybe we can talk about him after Star Fall," Andy suggested as he walked with Frosiien to the gates. He wanted to know about her life, including the parts of it that weren't happy. Just not just before a party.
He looked back to see if Michael was still with them. Maybe he didn't need to as his nephew was old enough to look after himself, but old habits died hard.

Michael stood by himself as Niccia was being greeted, but soon Illia gripped his hands. "It's a pleasure to meet you," he said to her. "I heard Penalopy say we're ready, so I guess it's time for Star Fall now? Where do we go?"

Mindy smiled at Anylia and then at the Bonsley that was being lifted. "It's nice to meet you both." She glanced only briefly at the Decidueye that approached hers and the woman who was now hugging Gavin. She tried not to laugh when she saw the look in his eyes.
Timothy nodded to the other Decidueye. "I am, thank you." He noticed Mabel joined them. "This Dragonite is a friend of mine," he told her. "This is Mabel and I am Timothy. We are with the human Mindy." He nodded to their trainer when he said her name.

Benjamin turned to Ari when she mentioned air in her lungs. "That happened with Dia too," he recalled. "She could suddenly breath." He offered his hand for Ari to take, to check if she would go through or not.
But he already thought ahead; if she was tangible and visible now they had to get her into the system too, as staff or patient. Preferable staff, of course. Patients had the tendency to mysteriously disappear. Which would mean they had to find Dia.
Welcome to the Voting and Feedback round for MFP#3!


Voting and Feedback guidelines

  • Please take your time to read through all the entries before voting for your favourite work. The reasons you base your vote on are up to you, as long the vote isn’t based on whether or not you like the author.
    It would be nice if you could share why you voted for a specific work.
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    Make sure to point out what you liked or what appreciated in the entry too.
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  • You can vote for entries and post your feedback in this thread, but if you rather have your vote and/or feedback be anonymous you can PM it to @Calle.
  • The voting period deadline is December 23th, 9:00 CET, which is 8:00 game time (both times are in a.m.).





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That's it for this contest. We have a total of 6 entries.

I will make the voting and feedback thread soon.

Edit: voting and feedback thread is up:
https://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/184350-mfp-3-wish-voting-and-feedback/ooc
Mitch did not return the smile, nor did he give any indication he even cared for her gratitude. He opened some sterile packages and put them close to him. After putting on some sterile gloves he injected some local anaesthesia and glanced at the clock.
"I don't know any of them," he stated curtly as he looked at Dante, after which he shifted his gaze towards Benjamin and Mike. "Nor am I interested in breaking out demons from an official facility."
"But you could," Benjamin said.
"Given time to prepare, yes." Mitch poked the needle in the edge around the wound and when he saw Freya didn't respond he began sewing the wound. "I would be a lousy assassin if I couldn't get into places where my targets hide."




Lily looked at Rose and put a hand on her chest. "Ohh, she needs a moment to adjust. We'll come back to her later." She beckoned her assistant. "Let's see if the other two darlings are awake yet."

The first cage she reached was the one where Steph was. She only looked at the timer for a moment before she turned to Steph. "Hello darling. Out of professional curiosity: when were you going to feast on that handsome boy you bewitched. Benjamin, right? I read the file and I saw his picture. What a catch."
Last 24 hours have begun!
We have 5 entries and less than two days left before the deadline.
"Between you and me," Andy said as he glanced at Mitch. "I think he just gave up."
"That's not what he said," Benny reminded him.
"That's true," Andy said with a sideways glance to his Butterfree, "but that conversation was between us and I will keep it there." He looked from Frosiien to Nygari. "And Mitch isn't that much of a grump, he just takes his job seriously and I'm honestly grateful he does." He put an arm around Frosiien. "Because I love her."

"That's okay," Chifferi said. "I wouldn't want to miss Star Fall. It's nice to be up again and see everyone." He grinned when Penalopy almost shouted out her enthusiasm and slowly more people were gathering here. Slowly but surely everyone would arrive.
Most of them in human form, but that was okay. They were still themselves beneath that disguise.

Ilios waved at Niccia when he felt arms wrap around him and a kiss on his cheek. He turned around. "Ilias," he greeted his sister. "Did you come straight from Alto Mare?"
He had left earlier because a Corsola had requested aid and he had expected she would have arrived before him. Maybe he had travelled faster than he had thought.

"We are ready!" Penalopy replied to the Medicham, in human speech so all humans could understand her too. She wasn't aware it was only Mindy at this point who couldn't understand Pokémon speech. She floated to Gavin and Mindy. "You look almost as gorgeous as Niccia in that dress." She took her hand and pulled on it as she floated back. "And now I will introduce you to my sister. Anylia! Come meet my human friend!"

"Another human friend?" Tater chuckled. "You have a new human friend every time I see you."

"I don't know how it happened," Benjamin said as he sat down on the bed next to Ari. "I was in my isolation cell, she came in and collapsed. Then she couldn't get out. We met Josh later and he didn't know how she had become human either. But they knew each other, from before. He called her princess and if she was a royal mage, they might be able to figure out how it happened. And if it can happen to other spirits."

He rubbed his temples. After the light-headedness came the headache. Just like had happened earlier that day. "I hate these pills," he muttered, rubbing his face. He turned off the light in the hopes it would lessen the pain.
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