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My old nemesis...
Did someone call me?


sorry about the double post...

@Mao Mao Would the Sole Survivor have gone to Far Harbor? My idea for a faction is the Children of Atom under the leadership of Synth-Tektus.

I'd imagine the Sole Survivor visiting to find and bring Kasumi Nakano back home during the main story. But instead of the standard ending, they decided to blackmail DiMA into convincing Kasumi to leave with them. They could've installed Synth-Tektus as an additional favor for DiMA. So, DiMA's secret was safe while the Sole Survivor completed the objective.

If that's alright with @Andronicus23.

Also, my first arc will deal with Nuka-World.
@Andronicus23 Looks like the Sole Survivor and the gang are in need of a field trip...

Since everyone else is doing it, I might as well as present my concept:

2290. The Commonwealth Minutemen emerged as victors of a bloody war that consumed all of Boston. First, the Prydwen was bought down by a hail of artillery fire, effectively ending the Brotherhood of Steel's presence in the region. Then, the underground headquarters of The Institute was destroyed along with the ruins of C.I.T. All while the Railroad was spared but ultimately bent the knee to the Minutemen. And it was all thanks to a pre-war relic: the Sole Survivor.

The Sole Survivor emerged from Vault 111 and found themselves in a whole different world. If it weren't for Preston Garvey and his charity, they would've not survived a day longer in the post-nuclear world. And after helping out a few settlements, Preston promoted them to the rank of general and became second in command. Eventually, with help from newly recruited minutemen, the Commonwealth Minutemen took back their former headquarters, the Castle, and began rebuilding.

But as tensions between the other factions heightened, rumors surfaced that relations between Preston and the Sole Survivor were declining after retaking the Castle. And things only got worst once the War of the Commonwealth began. After that, arguments between them became more common and known by other minutemen. Then, while fighting the Institute, the Sole Survivor didn't activate the emergency relay and knowingly pressed the detonator. Upon learning that the General essentially murdered the Institute, Preston cursed them for "leaving a black mark on the Minutemen."

Now, a few years since the destruction of the Institute, critical individuals throughout the region met and reestablished the Commonwealth Provisional Government.
Also, I didn't have time to properly read the other page. I will be open to modifying the ending since I have problems of my own with it.

EDIT: @Andronicus23

You could have some of the Institute leave as a measure by the Father after banishing the Sole Survivor as a precaution.
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Oh, don't worry. Totally canon. I get the vibes that Preston hates the player character and is trying to get him to fuck off and go away every time in FO4.


I plan on making Preston hate on the Sole Survivor by making him not activate the emergency relay in the Institute. Also, no objections on my end.
For my plans with the Commonwealth, I plan on doing the Minutemen ending where the Sole Survivor kills off the Institute and Brotherhood of Steel. Preston Garvey and Sole Survivor hate each other. And the Sole Survivor is still around.
Interested. Could I have dibs on the Commonwealth?

Thus, I vote for the east worst coast.


When the whole team was on board the shuttle, Jorge made his way to the cockpit. From his omni-tool, he pulled up coordinates towards a parking area near the villa. It was the closest that the shuttle could've land without drawing unwanted attention. So, that meant they were forced to walk to their objective. Jorge sent the directions over to the driver screen via his omni-tool and glanced at Key. "Follow the coordinates and get us there quickly."

Even after reading her file, Jorge was still surprised to see Keesin'Godda rather open with her thoughts and feelings. And with the incident at the apartment lobby earlier, he didn't exactly know if it was going to jeopardize the entire operation. But, regardless of her psyche, she was too valuable (as an infiltrator and quarian) to pass up for someone else. Perhaps all she needed was a reminder of the consequences to straighten up.

Then, while Jorge made his way to the last empty seat inside, Lantea T'keli asked a question regarding the mission. "So, how are we going in? Loud and fast? And what sort of resistance do we expect?"

If it wasn't for her time as a prominent mercenary, Lantea's file would've been turned down instantly. Jorge thought that having an asari that was still going to their maiden stage would've endangered the operation. However, her talents and mercenary background ultimately got her a spot in Kingslayer. Jorge only hoped that he wasn't going to regret it later on. Then, he pulled out a hologram projection of the villa from his omni-tool to answer the question. "Actually, we are doing the opposite because of Daezike's servants. Not to mention she acquired prototype security mechs from Saren on her birthday. Sadly, I haven't been able to find anything on them. So, we need to be careful around them."

"Well, it is the Presidium. I'd be surprised if we ran into an army of mechs, and home security systems should be a cinch to get past," Lorena Negasi mused, "but we should expect her to have some kind of panic button on standby - if she hasn't already started mashing one. Any idiot who feels C-Sec bearing down on them can wipe files from off-site, right? Do we have a backup plan for retrieving anything if that happens?"

Unlike the other squadmates, Jorge had somewhat of an issue with Lorena due to stealing from the Alliance while in service. It was only fortunate that her "services" were required to deal with batarian financiers after the Blitz. Her time as a Corsair was something unavoidable to him, along with her talents in engineering. Still, it was good knowing that Jorge wasn't planning on making friends during the operation.

"That's why we need to be quiet; otherwise, we would be in a tough spot. Still, if things went south, we have no other choice than ransack her office and devices for anything about Saren." Jorge closed up the projection and felt the shuttle taking off. "We will be meeting with an insider that has been assisting the operation. Hopefully, she'll provide us with something useful."



Eventually, the shuttle made its way to the parking lot and found an open spot to land. Jorge was the first one to stand up for his seat as the doors opened. He got out and looked around for Salany, but she wasn't anywhere to be seen. Then, however, she was seen running towards him with something in her hand. Jorge made his way to her with a look of concern. "Is anything alright?"

"Yeah, for the most part. I have the code to the entrance." Salany took a moment to breathe after running from the villa. "Also, I decided to risk my ass to give you this."

Jorge examined the device and then looked back at the asari. "What is it?"

Salany shrugged. "I didn't have enough time to examine it, but it was stored in the security room. So that means it had to be important."

"Security room? Wait, Daezike has guards in the villa?!"

"Not right now; otherwise, I won't have been able to enter the room. They go wherever she goes." Salany answered while hailing a taxi on her omni-tool. "And if that's all, I will be taking my leave. I expect the credits soon."

"You'll get them and a little extra for the device. Good luck, Salany." Jorge nodded and then made his way back to the shuttle with the device. While he also had no idea what it was, it seemed helpful enough for Daezike to keep around. Regardless, the mission was his priority.

"Follow me." Jorge ordered his team and began walking towards the villa. It wasn't a long distance from the parking lot, but still quite a walk while wearing armor. Soon enough, the team made it to the gate entrance of the villa. Jorge approached the key box and entered the code. Fortunately, it was accepted without issue and the gate began opening. And while it was opening, Jorge turned to his team and told them.

"We need to find a way to get to Daezike's office without drawing attention. Any suggestions or questions?"


I am working on someone and hopefully will be able to post them by the weekend.
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