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6 days ago
Current Me today: *writes action sequence* ". . .actually that doesn't work." *rewrites action sequence* *pauses* *has a good leisurely think* "Actually, if I just change it like that, the first way works."
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24 days ago
Writer's famous last words: "Oh it shouldn't take long." -3 hours later, it's constructed to satisfaction.
26 days ago
Mutant Monday is back, X-Fans! Get caught up before the new releases start comin'! roleplayerguild.com/topics/…
1 mo ago
Those times in every writer's life, when they read over something they'd written in time's past and go: "What was I *saying*?!"
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Anyone else who uses Wix: If you ever duplicate a post then start editing the copy but don't finish, make sure you publish it *before* reverting to draft. Don't let what happened to me, happen to you.

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It all never happened ~ but in your mind!
It all never happened ~ but in your mind!

Aspiring Screenwriter. Imagination whiz jumping between many 🌎s.
Self-taught Pic/🎶 Editor, VFX Coordinator & Mixer.
Independent student of 🎞; ever learning.


'The Reality Is: X-Men woke something up in me.
'The Reality Is: X-Men woke something up in me.

The Reality Is: It's getting me through.'
The Reality Is: It's getting me through.'


The comic book world is such a rich sandbox! Perhaps none richer than the X-Men -mutations to mix, slice-of-life elements to turn into anything but ordinary -the lines are drawn but the colours exceed them ~care to embark on the eXploration with me?

*cue 🎶X-Men Animated Series theme🎼swelling into Fox Movies theme🎵*




Interest Checks:
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DeoXys: A next gen X-Men/Comic Superhero RP

Cache of other X-Men concepts.









X-Men Envisionings: one passionate fan's riff on the FOX X-Men franchise.
Call it a fanfiction, call it what you will, but don't miss out!!


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The X-Men continues to be this excellent odyssey
The X-Men continues to be this excellent odyssey

Where ever it takes me.
Where ever it takes me.


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Hi. : )
I'm currently on an X-Men track with my RPing, which would check at least your supernatural box if you don't mind RPing existing properties. Doesn't have to be canon characters or such. I'm currently still looking for joiners for an OC based one: DeoXys: A next gen X-Men/Comic Superhero RP

I've got other ideas that are canon or could be OC or a mix: Cache of other X-Men concepts.

You can check out my profile for some writing samples and feel free to PM me. : )
(I've also got a non supernatural, slice of life drama idea I haven't put into an interest check yet, but just to say I may be branching out from X-Men soon. That idea would have potential for romance elements, too).
Jaclyn "OfAll" Chreyz

Location: X Mansion
Skills: Power Mimicry
Current Outfit (magic): two piece gown + embellished collar




To Max's eloquent words, Jaclyn assumed her character by outwardly giving him a superior sort of look, as though she thought him rather a dramatic sort. Inwardly, she smiled. He was a compelling actor. Another in-character glance was cast to Perry, as though to say 'what are you carrying on about?', though this was followed by a brief smile so Perry would know Jaclyn was just playing.

She had nodded to Mira's rundown of how the game would function, and subsequently watched the other three go off to the Museum, Pub, and Hyde Park respectively.

Making her decision of where she wanted to go, she shifted glances back in Max and Mira's directions, as though suspicious that they might be of the mind to slip off in other directions. It would appear at first as if Jaclyn were following Perry, though she would then continue past the pub with only a glance through the window.

Jaclyn's destination was the dock; what seemed an excellent place to find a wayward clue.
She could already imagine some crate being craned away and a clue revealed underneath, or an accident causing crates to break open to the same result. Who knows, maybe she would even encounter the two computer-controlled players -she was certain where she found one she would find the other, Watson and Mr. Holmes being what they were. Though now that she thought of it, if she encountered only one, would that be a clue in and of itself?

Jaclyn "OfAll" Chreyz

Location: X Mansion
Skills: Power Mimicry
Current Outfit (magic): two piece gown + embellished collar





Jaclyn smiled at Perry and Max's antics. People getting into a game like that made it all the more fun. Their rivalry was sure to play out interestingly once "the game was afoot". She was glad they'd settled on Sherlock Holmes. For one thing, she wasn't into the beach scene. For another, Holmes was an easy setting to fall into. The Hound of the Baskervilles leapt first to her mind and her imagination blended the image of a mansion with misted grounds.

Clearly Perry was excited for this setting too, given the low squeal Jaclyn heard from her.

Jaclyn accepted the electronic pad from Mira, smiling with excited contentment at the locations and bearing a little grin at the inclusion of Sherlock and Moriarty. Imagine if Sherlock were the killer!

All that was left was to step inside the Danger Room proper, onto the streets of "jolly old London" and the White Chapel Murderer -- fortunately not literally in that latter case.

Jaclyn only half registered what Perry was saying, as she took in the surroundings in tandem with consulting her screen again. If not for it reminding her this was VR, it could be mistaken for time -and universe- travel. That had yet to get old for Jaclyn, and a fleeting thought was given to if it typically did for X-Men, or if the impressiveness of the Danger Room's technology never completely waned.

Now, where to begin?


Logan actually seemed amused at her calling him an ass and actually expecting him to fall in line after her, but the feeling didn't last. It affected him to hear this sort of stuff coming from a kid. To have a kid's life be what it was to have her be this way.

With any sort of reasoning her out of it seeming to be pointless, he settled for eying as she continued the construction portion of her machinations, while he turned the situation over in his mind. Though, honestly, he already knew where he was going to go from here.

His mouth then twisted into a questioning sort of smirk at the Cyclops-esque eyewear she added to her kit. The only thing he was really interested in about it was what Scott would think of it; Logan got Ryder's vibe and couldn't blame her for it.

More serious interest was in what she planned to do with the sentinel core, but he wasn't about to ask. If it turned out to be something that shouldn't see the light of day, Logan had six solutions for that waiting in his forearms.



Xavier wheeled out of Cerebro. One task done.
Onto the next.

As the best he could do in regards to telepathically detecting Ryder, was to detect a mutant signature, he was rather hampered in pinpointing her at the X-Mansion.

True, she would be, in essence, the signature that lacked, to him, signature waves. But even the void was tricky to pinpoint amidst so many mutant brainwaves.

His better option was to peer through those most likely to be near her. Share their senses for a moment and so, he rose the blind on his window, and stared into the open windows of the apartments across the way, so to speak.



Scott and Jean by now were sitting on the sofa together. Following her pause of movement, Jean had felt gradually overcome by a feeling similar to that which she had experienced after rising out of the disconcerting depths that had been Ryder's containment chamber; an unsettling unraveling of sense.

Or was it a rethreading? Jean couldn't tell. It was akin to the odd sensation when you're a day removed from having been sick to your stomach, and you're unsure if you're hungry now or still feeling nauseous.

She needed to sit down, or lay, again. Leaning into Scott checked both boxes.
She could feel his profound concern- "I'm sorry"

"I'm sorry," -and hear in his voice how deeply this was true. "You told me what's been going on with you and I--"

Jean felt him turn his head away.

She didn't hear Magneto's words from before echoing through it.
Scott was holding her in a way that one of his hands was laced over hers on her center. With his fingertips, he could just feel the movement of the life inside. Maybe it was the positioning, but it seemed less strong than it was. Or more tentative. Not even born and already afraid; an irrational thought, but one that still rang through his mind.

"Jean. . .After -or now. . ." The X-Men needed to head off the fallout, but where was he most needed, now? Cyclops didn't have that answer. "There's something I think we need to talk about."



Xavier didn't hear these moments. Though he felt the remorse and tenderness of them. . .These two had endured so much in their service to mutantkind, as his X-Men.
He hoped they would be able to know a family apart from hardship with the arrival of their own. . .Hoped, denying an inner self that knew better.

Then he found her. In front of Logan. And here, Xavier did listen in. the X-Man having gotten some psychic-resistance training in his time as one, Xavier found it easier than it ought to have been to get into Logan's mind like this. Though, Logan's consent to Ryder probing his mind served that effect.

Soon, the door to the room Logan and Ryder were in opened, revealing Xavier.
"You will have time to reconsider what Logan is offering," he stated to Ryder. Though with a look cast to Logan that said quite plainly he wasn't any more keen on that scenario.

"I have granted us a window. As far as the Umbra agents who came here are now concerned, they never did. It was a fruitless search on their part, to find the home of Professor Charles Xavier. . .I was unable to maintain connection to gain anything more than time, however that will do for now. Without a doubt Umbra must be neutralized. Though to face them as the weapon they made you, is to allow their definition of your life to persist. You can choose, now, to be something else."
Jaclyn "OfAll" Chreyz

Location: X Mansion
Skills: Power Mimicry
Current Outfit (magic): two piece gown + embellished collar





At Max's comment to Perry, Jaclyn decided to try and flex a little more of her character persona, and put on a fake snooty look.
This turned to mild puzzlement as she didn't quite catch Max's drift when he responded to her, but never to matter.

Attention was turned to the programming of the sim. Jaclyn liked how Mira seemed to be speaking to the computer as though it were a living participant in this, too.

When Mira asked about the setting, it was news to Jaclyn that Clue didn't always take place in a Mansion. She knew of different character sets and objects, but not of a differing location among the versions.

"Well it seems you've thought of most everything," Jaclyn remarked, speaking in a tone of voice with such an accompanying manner that it was clear she was putting it on as her character, "personally I've no preference for whether the events will be 'in the cards' for us or not. As for setting though, I do," -at this she placed her hand in a slow, dramatic gesture upon her own chest- "think I'd like a break from Mansion living." At this closing remark, she gestured in a loose reference to the very Mansion they were presently in.
Jaclyn "OfAll" Chreyz

Location: X Mansion
Skills: Power Mimicry
Current Outfit (magic): two piece gown + embellished collar





This game of Clue was sounding better and better as Max suggested the Danger room assign who, if any of them, were the murderer, and that person then try to throw a wrench in the works. It seemed a more fun not to mention logical way to play.

A slight, though friendly laugh then escaped Jaclyn's throat at Klara's response. Jaclyn understood what she meant. With a nod to Mira's comment of the offer standing, Jaclyn then waved to Klara. She would've said "nice to meet you" except that Klara was still engaging with Perry, so you could say, Jaclyn said it with a smile, as she took a step into the portal Max had opened up between the hallway and the Danger Room.

Jaclyn's listening was then divided between Mira's voice and Perry's, and Perry's excitement won out. A "wiping the floor with their opponents" personality always added something to a game. This seemed like a good group to make things doubly entertaining. Who knew what would the Danger Room would add? "We better make sure to program things correctly so this doesn't turn into 'Danger Clue'," she added to Max, herself still straddling the portal.

Though her own words seemed to land in her head just then, along with some from earlier regarding magic going wrong. She stepped through the portal with her other leg, then, properly standing on the Danger Room side of it.
I don't know that I can commit to another RP at the moment, but just wanted to say I love the concept / pitch for "Case Closed". And now I envy your pitching skills, too. xD
Jaclyn "OfAll" Chreyz

Location: X Mansion
Skills: Power Mimicry
Current Outfit (magic): two piece gown + embellished collar





Turning her eyes from Max's newly opened portal, Jaclyn sported a mild smile at his comment of them making it sound so mysterious. She was acting under the assumption an Asgardian wouldn't know what "Clue" was, which Klara confirmed later.

First she caused Jaclyn's smile to shift to shared pleasure at Klara's delight of Perry's costume, and Klara's own sparkle mentality. To herself, Jaclyn had to disagree that messing around with magic was "always fun" and that controlling water and the oceans was lame. While she personally wouldn't want to control the oceans -she could disrupt the underwater environment and marine life, to say the least- she thought controlling water in general had all sorts of potential.

It seemed to Jaclyn that Edus was maybe considering potential too--in the negative and as it pertained to their game.

"It would be no intrusion, she added welcomingly to his spoken thought of Klara wanting to join them. Reflecting on the two different first impressions she just received of the Asgardian: the one when she didn't speak, and now when she did.

Logan kept up, all right.

Thinking at first she wasn't even going to acknowledge him, as if he were some annoying stray that if she just ignored, maybe it would leave her alone.

But for one thing, Logan knew Xavier -to say nothing of anyone else- wouldn't be too pleased if he did just say "screw it" and left the kid to her own devices. For another, he was interested, for his own reasons, in where exactly she was going and to do exactly what.

"Her own devices" was the correct phrase.

Logan soon found himself observing a cavalcade of would-be contraption pieces as she finally gave a response to his question about Umbra. What she was making he couldn't even fathom to guess by the parts. Though he had an idea what type of object they were going to become. Probably, it wasn't a good idea. But if Chuck didn't want his kid manufacturing her own weaponry, that was his problem to sort out properly next time.

Though, if Logan was being honest with himself, there was something unsettling about the display. He knew at any moment those blitzing drill bits could be turned his way, but that wasn't it. The thought landed as her project settled into form in what seemed both effortless and instantaneous: this kid was a weapon in more ways than he was. She could vicarate you same as he could, except she could do it gut-by-gut, knowing exactly how everything fit together--or could be torn apart.

Or maybe not. But she certainly had the mind for it.

"Which brings us back to," standing with his arms folded, he shifted his eyes from the rifle to its maker, "you lookin' to do it all yourself? And is it really what you want? Now if I was Chuck that question would be some character test, but I'm really asking. In case I didn't make myself clear, I don't have a problem makin' sure those fucks choke on their last breaths. You can scan my mind and see my track record, then leave it to me and put all that behind you already. Start tryin'a piece together what it means to live as a person after you've been a weapon." On the words 'piece together' he nodded towards the "rifle". It would take a similar act of assembly, though with far more effort. Far more time. And it would begin with a disassembling. She could scan his mind for his experience on that, too. Not to relate to him in any way -he was possibly the only one here without relating on the mind- but to know he was legit.
Xavier had been observing Ryder. For his own part, he could sense an indescribably strong output of psychic energy had occurred here, and had the feeling Ryder received, shall we say, much more than a sense. That was something to pursue, whether in thought or conversation, later. More pressing were the emotions stirred thereafter. He watched his daughter stalk after Cyclops, though trusted her emotional state, for the moment, to his X-Men -Wolverine having also headed inside; in part knowing how Jean would be feeling right now, and in part because he didn't like the aggression emanating from the younger psychic.

"Hank, how long ago was the departure?"

"Long enough that we would be looking for fog in a cloud, to turn a phrase. It was Jean who sounded the alarm, not our airspace surveillance system.
If both our aircraft weren't in the field at the time, pursuit could've been considered."


"Very well. See to the students with Ororo," he gave a directing nod to Storm.

"I'd been about to deliver the all-clear when I heard the blackbird's approach," Hank responded by way of affirmation as he went off with Storm.

At as best a pace as he could, Xavier then headed into the Mansion.
Though he had a different destination in mind than the library.



Cyclops, while still on the way there, removed the upper -blood stained- portion of his uniform, then slowed his pace once he came to the door so as not to burst in.

Jean was laying on a sofa with one arm across her forehead.
The other almost clutching her midsection.

She looked up from her muttering as Scott came to kneel in front of her.
Jean didn't need him to say anything to know he knew what she was talking about. She saw it in his face.

She opened her mouth to say something,
but it was Ryder's voice that was heard.

"That wasn't the pla-" Jean -easing into a sitting position- started to assert, but Ryder wasn't giving her a chance to get a word in edgewise. Instead Jean listened with a bothered expression that clearly conveyed she didn't need Ryder to throw these words at her: they were already exactly what were going through her head. A lion kicked when it's down.

Scott couldn't take it.
In one motion he was up and facing Ryder --you didn't need to see his eyes to know he was glaring. The contortions of his face, tensing of his muscles, closing of his fists. His emotions were clear. Yet figuratively he bit his tongue. Wrestling, in the span of seconds, with what you could call an imagined chain of reaction. "You don't know a damn thing you're talking about!" he wanted to close the distance between and say straight to her face. Yes- Ryder certainly did when it came to the Umbra agents. But no- she certainly did not when it came to Jean. Nor "these people", had he been able to know what her present thoughts were on them. Fight for survival? Have everything held just out of reach until it was taken by force? Her life and theirs weren't painted by so different a brush, only in different shades.

But next in the chain would be Ryder's reaction to his, and honestly where would that go?
No place productive. More likely counter-so.

Ryder's parting words shifted things, however, and he did begin to stride after her-

Wolverine, knowing as better as Cyclops, hadn't stopped Ryder despite wanting to sort her out himself for calling Jean stupid.
But he did get in the way of Scott -"Get off! Ryder loose on a revenge spree is the las--"

"I'll head off whatever needs to be. Take care of your own business." He cast a look of certain care towards Jean, and left.
He had a feeling about something that he blamed Scott for. Forget about "it takes two to tango".

"I didn't mean for this outcome--I. . ." Some mix of desperation and anger flashed in her eyes. "I just wanted this all to finally stop."

He looked down to where both her hands now clutched, bringing one of his to hers and the other to her upper arm at the same time he looked back up to speak, but his lips hardly had a chance to move when Jean spoke again: "There was zero sense to my actions! This will become a wildfire." Her eyes shifted back and forth as if the scenes were already playing out before them. "-I don't know what came over me. . ." she admitted in a whisper. Fear flooding over her previous emotions.

"Jean, listen to m-"

"It was like years ago. . .though I didn't feel the Phoenix with me. . ." finally, she met his "eyes" again. "Maybe that was more me than we'd thought."

In an instant he was holding her close. "That was never you."

"This was."

"-was not the same. You kept in control, here." He could feel her shaking her head against his. "We're going to. Ryder has the right idea making the next move ahead of theirs." Jean pushed out of the embrace.

"We can't let a confrontation between them happen again."
She fought to interrupt the memory of the last time, already feeling sick.

"Without question. Which makes Ryder herself the fallout we'll be fighting against."

"There's no way we can convince her we'll handle this." She was speaking around how they'd likely really be fighting Ryder. Her hand rising to her forehead as she stepped aside from Scott, needing to move yet halting right after; her thoughts manifesting in her body: where could they move from here?



"Hey, kid!" Wolverine caught up with Ryder. "If you're thinkin'a recreatin' that scene you left back in the forest, you should know: it could've been mistaken for one of mine." He gave her a significant look. "You're not the only one who's got a penchant for exacting revenge. And I don't got Jeannie's moral compass, either. So, anything else that might be good to know about Umbra? I mean if that prison of yours was only one facility housing those 'roaches, you can't be in two places at once. . .Though I wouldn't put it past ya'."
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