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@Byrd Man That's fine, i'm going to do a you and say that i've pretty much given up on that one. Primarily because i think most of the stories that i had in mind didn't really work in a world that has only just been introduced to super's. As such:

Plan C (WIP)

C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T

Creature Commandos

_{John "Hannibal" Smith ♦ Elliot "Lucky" Tailor ♦ Medusa ♦ Vincent Velcoro ♦ Warren "Wolfpack" Griffith}

^{_{Project M ♦ Soldiers of Fortune ♦ United States Underground ♦ Formerly United States Marine Corps.}}

C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T:

^{"I love it when a plan comes together"}

10 years ago, a crack commando unit was been sent to prison by a military court for a crime they didn't commit. Several of them promptly escaped from a maximum security stockade to the Los Angeles underground. Today, still wanted by the government, they survive as soldiers of fortune. If you have a problem, if no one else can help, and if you can find them, maybe you can hire the Creature Commandos.

C H A R A C T E R M O T I V A T I O N S & G O A L S:

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The Creature Commandos are a crack team of super-powered individuals that have faithfully served the United States Marine Corps with valor and distinction since the Second World War that certain branches of the US Government wants to get their hands on to update for the modern age. Their main motivation is to find out who really slaughtered the soldiers that they were framed for and why. The other main objective is to find the other Creature Commando's that are still somewhere.

C H A R A C T E R N O T E S:

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Team Members

Cpt. John "Hannibal" Smith

A Veteran of the Gulf War, Somalia, Cambodia, Lebanon, Panama, Iraq, and pretty much every other major conflict from the 1980's onwards. Hannibal is one of the most notorious soldiers in the United States army, a master of disguise and guerrilla warfare, he can sneak into anywhere in the world and get out before anyone has even noticed that he has even left his home base. He took over as the leader of the Creature Commando's after the retirement of General Matthew Shrieve. He treats them much better than Shrieve ever did, he leads with authority and courage. He is never seen without his signature black leather gloves and Cigar.

Dr. Myrra Rhodes

Pvt. Elliot "Lucky" Taylor

Sgt. Vincent Velcro

Pvt. Warren "Wolfpack" Griffith

Allies

General Matthew Shrieve

Former leader of the Creature Commando's, Shrieve may have treated the Commando's with nothing but contempt whilst they were under his command, but he only did it out of his sense of duty in order to get the very best out of his freak-squad. Even though it's his job to hunt down the Commando's, he doesn't for a second, believe that they actually did it. He regularly leaks vital information to them in order to keep them one step ahead of himself and Waller

Enemies

Amanda Waller

The ruthless, cold and emotionless leader of a special Government taskforce called Project CADMUS, Waller is a woman of many means with only the President of the United States as her boss, she is charged with keeping America safe from Supernatural threats and she will complete that task regardless of who she has to step on. It is no secret that she has a dream of America having access to whole armies of super-powered individuals. Most call her insane, others see that that couldn't be farther from the truth, she is ahead of the curve in everything she does.

S A M P L E P O S T:

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A sample post that can be used in the IC if you so desire upon acceptance. This post should provide an example of your vision for the desired character. This sample post should meet all standards outline in the rules and additionally include dialogue, mannerisms and other actions representative of your intended portrayal.

P O S T C A T A L O G:

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A list linking to your IC posts as they're created. This can be used for a reference guide to your character or to summarize completed arcs and stories.

Yes, i know that there's a Non-DC character in this, but i think he fits the theme so well that i can't throw this in and not ask if i'm allowed him.

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Plan B

C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T P R O P O S A L

Detective Chimp

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^{_{Bobo-T Chimpanzee ♦ Worlds greatest animal detective ♦ Baker Street ♦ Her Majesties Secret Service}}

C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T:

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^{"I swear that i will jolly well slaughter anyone that makes a "Monkey Business" joke."}

Beloved pet of the famed explorer, Fred Thorpe, Bobo was once as any ordinary chimp. Found by Fred when he rescued the baby from some poachers on an excursion to Africa. Bobo was raised by Fred and became his faithful sidekick on many adventures, all the way up until his last one. During WWII, Fred worked for MI5 on a mission to prevent Nazi spies from locating and coming into possession of Excalibur. After a long and perilous journey, Bobo and Fred found their way to The Chamber of The Lady, who would grant the sword to whoever had only the purest intentions for the defense of Britain and her people. Just as Fred was about to step up and claim it. After Fred was deemed not worthy enough, the spies that were waiting for him to claim it so they could take it from him, saw no reason to let him live and cut him down with gunfire. Outraged at the death of his friend and father-figure, Bobo thought of nothing but defending Fred and his people. To which the lady responded and gave the chimp Excalibur, with which to defend king and country. As he took the blade, he was given intelligence and wisdom. He easily dispatched the two spies and buried his friend, before making his way back to MI5 and explaining the situation. Seeing that Britain's champion, by ancient rite, was a chimpanzee, they saw no other recourse but to begin training the chimp in all forms of espionage, detective work, combat. Bobo became Britains unknown champion, bodyguard to the royal family, Agent of MI5. But soon, the busienss of human affairs grew to bore him and he began to wonder about the animal kingdom, who would defend them. Retiring from MI5, he used his money to buy a flat in Baker Street and he has put out the word among the animals, spread the word far and wide. If a champion was needed to defend those that could not defend themselves, if an animal was cruelly ripped from its mother to be solf on the black market, if a dog was mistreated by its owner. Bobo T Chimpanzee would be there and on the case.

C H A R A C T E R M O T I V A T I O N S & G O A L S:

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Bobo is a fun character whenever he pops up and i do hope to have fun telling detective stories where he has to investigate animal disappearances, as well as maybe become the one to discover a number of super-powered animals around the world. The end goal would be for Bobo to amass such a status among the animals of the world that he is able to create a Legion of Super-Pets, using all sorts of animal heroes from all over the world with backstories that fit into their human counterparts new re-imagined story as told through the IC. But right now, i kinda just want to give a Chimp Excalibur and a funny hat and have him solve mysteries and have other wacky adventures.

C H A R A C T E R N O T E S:

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Stats

Equipment

Skills

Supernatural Abilities

Allies

Enemies

Gorilla Grodd

Grodd is the deposed ruler of the secret African civilization of Gorilla City. Originally getting into office due to his charisma, he began bringing incredibly dangerous plans to bare against the rest of the world, including a plan for human extinction, Bobo helped his own people overthrow him and ever since, Grodd has had a vendetta against Chimp, becoming something of the Moriarty to his Holmes. Grodd is always up to some evil scheme to eradicate humanity and give Earth back to the Apes.

Mister Mind

Once but a simple Caterpillar, munching his way through leaves, he had no idea that he was destined to become of the keenest criminal minds the universe had ever seen. Having the fortune to be in the area where a powerful wizard was casting a spell to try and enter the magical realm, the wizard thought he had failed, not realizing that he had succeeded, but the magical realm had opened itself only the the caterpillar hiding in the grass where he was trying to cast the spell. Falling through the bind eternities, the Caterpillar landed on the Throne of Metron, god of Knowledge. The caterpillar, not knowing what was happening, simply wondered what it didn't know and the chair began to teach it EVERYTHING. As it sat drinking an ungodly amount of knowledge from the chair, Metron noticed the creature and banished it from the realm.

The Caterpillar called itself Mister Mind and now has a single goal in life, to get back to the chair and obtain the ultimate knowledges and it has no care for what it has to do in order to get there.

S A M P L E P O S T:

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P O S T C A T A L O G:

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A list linking to your IC posts as they're created. This can be used for a reference guide to your character or to summarize completed arcs and stories.

Work in progress, but here's hoping it's liked.

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Makes it nearly as interesting as his comics. :

@Kaggs

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@Inkarnate Well, i'll take back my compliment and leave then.

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@Inkarnate Honestly, i KNOW the copious reasons why mine wasn't accepted but i don't see why your Lantern CS wasn't accepted. It was very much compatible with what Hillan and Bounce were doing. But that Aquaman looks good so far.

Now i need to figure out what my plan b will be. I have a few idea's, but they all seem to be falling under the catagory of "I really like this idea, but i'm not confident i can keep up the story for any great deal of time." Some that i do have are "The A-Team, but with the Creature Commando's", "The Legion of Superpets." and "Lobo: In An Adventure With Space Dolphins"

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Instead, it was Wraith who waltzed in and was buddy-buddy with Hillan to be handed the cape.

@Retired

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@Hillan Favouritism.

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I should probably say that I added Dex-Starr to my character sheet.

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Excuse the fuck out of you and your entire bloodline.

@Hillan