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I... I managed... Guys, I think I managed to somehow avoid all mention of the fact that he is a mouse.


I know I've covered all the necessary information, but my mind is still telling me I'm missing all of the everything and I would like it to stop. That, or someone needs to tell me more specifically what I need to add, because ARGH! I just wanna write 'im!
When I tried asking people for a word instead of the generator, they gave me things like fishing, mammaries, and kumquat. And that definitely stole my focus from argh how to start, to uhhh sure, let’s just go with that.
I’ll probably be doing the same thing, Fading Memory.
Haha, my go to for posts I can’t figure out how to start is to find a random word generator and try using that. Just write whatever stupid sentence comes of it and follow up, since at least then the post is started, even if it’s coming from way out the left field.
It’s never you’ll manage t’please everyone…

Lol, I’d be good with it if it weren’t so long since I’ve written one. I was stalling out last night just trying to figure out how to start. But the good fallback is always backstory, so eventually I got the old noggin sorted and firing right.
I haven’t written a CS in an age and a half and here’s Wraith making it free form just to spite my brain. I wanna make it so much fancier than I know it’s gonna be. *flails forlornly*

Finally thought of a name though. Got it halfway written with barely a mention of it, haha…
I apparently can’t even write a mole accent on my phone. It says no, every word is wrong. But are you sure we’re not tragically deprived of mole accents?

I have finally decided on the idea I’m going with! Not a mole, though it was close. A young mouse, instead. Though methinks he’ll have tried on a number of hats, growing up.
This answer entirely depends on the scene and your and your partners' preferences. If you find yourself hesitating how much to include or how far to move things along, ask them if they have a preference. That is, I think, one of the best things you can do because everyone has different preferences. Talking it out between you can ease up on that uncertainty far more readily than anything else can.

For 1x1s, I've noticed that as long as there is something for the other character to react with, most people can come up with a post. And even if there isn't something directly in the post, provided you both know where the events are heading, they still have a direction to push the character in. But, as with most things, if they're stuck, talking about it is a great solution. Offering to edit your post or add something in is probably always appreciated.

For me, I go by the rule of how slow and intimate do I want this scene to be (as in how much detail and character emotion and internal processes do I want to include)? And what is the scene's purpose? If you want to delve into those details, then you don't need to make a lot of stuff happen or even move things forward by more than a minute at a time. If you are writing in order to move things along or because it's fast action, then there's really no need to linger and you can roll on through the scene until your next slower moment. Unless your partner (or you) would prefer otherwise.

Another good rule of thumb to work with so that you can avoid that unintentional character control is that if you're writing and suddenly think that the other character(s) would definitely break in on the conversation or the action or just have a big enough reaction to whatever has been said or is going on that it might derail the rest of your post, that's usually a good spot to either pause and ask your partner what their character might do if your post feels toooooo short to post or just post it. As you write with someone and get to know their character(s), you'll more often be able to guess how they'd respond to various things you stick in your post, so this does get easier to judge between a casual reaction, like answering a simple question, or them suddenly throwing a tantrum because your character mentioned the wrong name... You've probably felt this already.

Also, if it just starts feeling like an infodump, feel free to stop at the next feasible point or go back and take some out before posting to save it for later, because information is good, but too much at once will have something being missed and your partner possibly going cross-eyed.

It's not a perfect science and most of us are probably at least a little concerned about this question no matter how long we've been writing. The key is to be sure that you are satisfied with the information you've conveyed, and that your partner is happy. If they're happy with the post, who cares if you think it was long or short or uninteresting or overly complicated? They liked it.
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