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7 yrs ago
Current Ok, so sorta back. Net still sketchy, but I can't resist roleplaying after being gone so long. XD
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7 yrs ago
In case anyone is wondering I am not officially back yet My internet situation is sketchy at the moment and I don't want to make promises of being back when I might vanish again due to circumstances.

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@Oni_
I haven't gotten to reading everything yet I'm lazy, sorreh XD
But so far, I like what I see! :D

@Tenma Tendo
I have a huge issue with your character.
'Glass' is a type of crystal, as such, your character to me, seems like a copy of Oni's. I don't know who came up with their idea first, nor do I care, Oni's character went up first, thus they have dibs on the crystal element, and making a sub element dragon slayer to get around this isn't acceptable. You either need to not be a dragon slayer, and just use normal glass magic, or pick a different element.
With that, @AngelofOctober has some issues as well.
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I actually meant that he was taken care of by the guild and then joined them through the tournament later in the year... I do admit that it was a fairly vague statement and hardly explained the process of him joining though. I'll just go ahead and expand this part of the sheet to include more info.


Another thing, if it's not too much trouble, could you possibly expand upon the history. We're perfectly fine accepting a character with amnesia, but just because the character doesn't know what happened, doesn't mean we can't. It helps us know more about the character, and connect with them better. :3
@Spanner
I have to say you're character isn't accepted. It's a great character, and I love them, I really do. So, why am I not accepting them? Well, reading their history I have this suspicion you didn't read the information on the first post. Now, I hope I'm wrong, and maybe you just spaced it, but there's only one way into the guild, and your character's history makes it seem as if they broke the rules to get in another way, which isn't possible.

History:
Aleister is, above anything else, a mystery even for his guild mates - a person with a past so awfully hidden that even himself doesn't really know where did he come from, as he has roughly six years of memories from before the present day and even those start with wandering by the outskirts Magnolia without a single memory other than a name and covered by blood until being rescued/captured by members of the local guild, Dragons Cry, that took care of - and ultimately adopted/recruited - him due to his use of Dragon Slaying magic - by which the guild was widely recognized. Even now, 6 years after the occasion of his acceptance into the guild, Aleister has little to no knowledge about where exactly did he come from and why he was covered in blood when he was found by the guild, with all his attempts of investigating his own past ending in frustration.

That being said, the person himself is far from being concerned about his mysterious past, valuing the lifestyle of a mage in a guild away too much to care about how he could've been someone else had he not forgotten about his identity and deeply caring about the guild who gave him a new home - a family earned through his own actions rather than given him by destiny - being fairly satisfied by his lifestyle of taking it easy, occasionaly doing missions when he takes a break from messing around with others in Magnolia.


Edit:
@Natsume Honnaji It's perfectly fine for him to be joining as a newbie, however there's only one opportunity to do such. If this is the case it will be assumed he's already participated in the first portion of the tournament, so this needs mentioned in the history. Also, he needs guild mark location and color in his appearance.
Well shoot, @Rune_Alchemist, our dragon slayers are like...two opposite sides of the same coin. While this could be very fun to play up, I do also understand in terms story there are certain similaties. Perhaps to similare...

Well I'll go ahead and give ya'll Klisa's CS, and if you Rune or @Neo Is Delight think that my character is to similar to your already accepted one I'll construct a new one.


Looking over everything, I have to say there's a few too many similarities. Sorry. ^.^"

Okay, so, I'm an awful GM. Bunnies are not made for such powerful roles. We are meant to be adorable, not all powerful bunny overlords, as much as I love such a title. xD
So, I've elected to promote @AngelofOctober to Co-Gm, because they help me with stuff in discord anyways, so it might as well be official.
Name: Victor Lionstone

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Apperance: {removed to take up less space}

Guild mark: blue, on hand

Personality:
Victor is quite quiet when in battle because he is used to working with someone who knew him very well. But when he's at the guild bar or on the street, you cant do anything to stop him from talking, and he would never feel tired talking about himself. However, he isn't good at teamwork and the word 'plan' is never in his mind. He always wants everyone else to pay attention to him and he thinks everything happening is about him. He is caring, and has a great spirit, knowing how to cheer other people up rather well.

History:
No one knows where he came from. 2 years ago, he appeared in Fiore with a friend. He used a magic staff while his friend used a transformable umbrella. This team traveled around Fiore and fought with a bad guy everywhere they visited. Unfortunately, during a fight Victor's friend was killed while trying to save a kid from being killed in the crossfire. After that day, Victor used both his staff and the umbrella to kill all the bad guys he met. As his friend's last will, he went and joined in the tournament to show everyone the power of this weapon.

Magic: Moonlight magic and Enhance weapon magic
-Moon Blast: Shoots a magic bullet that explodes when it touches the enemy.
-Moon Shadow: Casts a strong magic to help increase its user's speed and weapon. But this skill require a lot of magic energy from the moon to cast.
-Moon Arrow: Casts a magic that generates two magic circles that shoot light arrows to the user's target (each circle can only shoot 3 arrows)
-Moonlight armor: Cast a magic that generate a light armor help its user to remove dark effect and have chance to negate physical attack. (This skill spend very much energy from moon)
-Transform: the umbrella has 3 forms; A spear, magic gun, and a shield.
-Moonlight cannon: only in magic gun form; Shoots a cannon ball made from moonlight.
-Moonlight spear: only in spear form; Enhances the spear and allows it to attack from a longer range.
-Moonlight Shield: only in shield form; Enhances the shield and allows it to protect the user from 1 attack.

Magical items carried:
-Staff of Moonlight
-Shadow Umbrella
-Moonlight dragon claw

Extra information: Maybe nothing


Okay, so everything's fixed.
So, do know I will expect better grammar in character. Using language barriers is a valid excuse, however there is auto correct, so there shouldn't have been as many errors as there were, unless you ignored the squiggly red line.

Now, with that out of the way. I have to ask you describe the magical items.
We do not know what the dragon claw is, and at the moment, it seems irrelevant without description.
@Neo Is Delight
I have already fixed it, is that ok


Okay, great! You fixed the major issues I had, and I appreciate that.
I just have a slight concern.
Grammar.
Now, I'm not a huge Grammar Nazi, and I don't mind an error here and there. But there's more than a little error here and there, and I'd like to politely request you clean it up a bit.
@Rune_Alchemist
well, with that, I officially accept your character, and as a mark of such, will issue their guild mark!
@Neo Is Delight

Aha...whoops.

Forgive me, it's been awhile since I've done anything Fairy Tail related. My memory may be a bit fuzzy xD
I'll remove that bit about the healing. Simple mistake on my part.

As for the whole newbie thing - I think your previous statements in this thread about a character not starting as part of the guild may have confused me slightly. If it's acceptable for this to be her first tournament to get into the guild, that is perfectly fine and what I'd prefer.


Sorry for the confusion. The previous statements were more one character is described as a lone wanderer, suggesting they aren't interested in joining the guild, and the other was simply lacking guild mark location/color ^.^"
This will be starting off at the tournament, and if your character is a newbie that's accepted, it is assumed they finished the first part. The second part, where they fight a vet for a chance at the prize will actually be where we're starting.
@Rune_Alchemist
I like Eira, I really do.
However.

Like most dragon slayers, any ice-based magic will find themselves falling short against her, since she can just eat the element and regain magic and heal wounds of all kinds.


This is not how element consumption works. Well, not technically.
Dragon Slayers can consume their respective element to replenish their magic, yes. However, this action does NOT heal wounds.
It is the God Slayers that consume their respective element to restore health, but they can't replenish magic.

To make things clear if its not, she's been part of the guild for only a short while.


Okay, so I have to ask because it's not clear, how 'short while'? Either she's a complete newbie joining in this years tourney, or she joined in last years.
@vn2202
Okay, so I might come off as a little mean here, and I really hope you don't hate me for it.

First off, I've noticed you plan for your character to be a newbie participating in the tourney to join the guild, but you still need to have guild mark location and color, I'm positive I've stated this was a necessity in the first post.

Secondly, this might be in casual, and I know I'm new and all and don't know how the community usually does stuff here, that personality is unacceptable to me. It tell's us barely anything about your character. I will not accept it as is.
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