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RICO

Brandishing a bottle of vodka, Commander Lindsay grumbled, “You’re a damn fool you know, just like all my men who charged at you thinking they could handle your Fruit powers on their own. Hope none of them ended up dead because of you.” Drawing a hefty knife, its blade more than half a foot long, he pried the bottle open, peeling the seal off and swishing the content around. “Having a will to move will only get you so far on the ocean. Thinking you’ll always be lucky enough for your recklessness to pay off is childish. What you really need is strength and wits.”

Pacing about, Rico admitted, “Well, I’ve got strength at least.”

Lindsay shook his head as he held his knife against the bottle, pulling out a piece of wood with his freed hand. “To think a stupid party trick would help out in a real fight like this…” he muttered, taking a swig of vodka and charging forward. Striking the wood against the deck, it caught alight. Whipping it out, he raised it to his mouth as he closed in on Rico, who took on a look of panic and turned to run. A gout of flame erupted as Lindsay let his fire breath roar. The ball threatening to engulf Rico, it streaked into his side. There was a burst of noise and motion as his body exploded into action, sparks and rockets firing off from his body. The remaining half of the boy was blasted back, crashing into the railing, which cracked under the force of the impact. His right side reforming with a hiss, once his mouth was back to normal, Rico cried, “You trying to kill me man!?”

A smirk came to Lindsay’s face. “Knew that’d do the trick. Couldn’t do that below decks of course: fighting fires on the sea is a bitch.” Eyes lighting up, Rico gawked, pointing at Andou, who waved for him to focus. “I’m not trying to kill you kid, you can surrender at any time.”

Slipping to a kneeling position, Rico smiled, “Nah, not interested.” Kicking against the ship guardrail, the wood cracking from the blow, Rico’s feet were cast alight, the young man gliding across the ship deck right at Lindsay’s feet. Hectic Feilong! The man scrambled to take a swig of vodka, but as he moved the torch to his face, Rico made contact, shifting his course to roll into the Marine’s legs. His evasion action came too late, the Commander getting caught on the boy’s shoulder and crashing to the group, spitting up the sip he’d just took as he coughed it out, having slammed onto his stomach. He managed to keep the bottle and torch raised, even as some of the liquor spilled out on the deck, even if the knife clattered to the ground.

On all fours, Rico scrambled to his feet, taking a fighting stance. Lindsay jammed the torch into his mouth, biting down on it from the side, while he took the knife in his hand, rushing forwards. Rico barely reacted as the blade slashed through him, doing little more than shed pink and gold sparks onto the ship deck. “Huh? Did the fall rattle your head? Rico asked, raising his fist.

“Off courshe not, I toltd chou, didin’t I?” Lindsay said, words muffled through his torch as he raked his blade across Rico’s eyes, the boy blinded for just a moment. “Whaht chou kneed on shis sea-” Lindsay jabbed his knife again, cutting through Rico and charging onto the opposite side of him, barreling down on Andou, who’s eyes widened, “-is strength-” the knife dug into Andou’s shoulder, the man dropping his cigarette and staggering backwards with the weapon stuck fast. Pulling the torch from his mouth, he backhanded it against the still reforming Rico, “-and wits!”

Another explosion rocked the deck, leaves of a firework shooting into the sky and glancing off the deck. Rico’s body once again splattered into the same point of railing, the wood nearly given completely. Reforming with his elbows against the deck, he grimaced in pain, eyes spinning from the fatigue of having to forcibly expend so much energy for his powers in the face of the flame. Coughing, he moved to his feet, only to see both Andou and Lindsay also knocked to the ground, the former bloody and the latter messy with a fine layer of soot. ”Oh no they’re dead!”

Reaching to Andou’s side, the middle aged man grumbled as he tried to get up, “I’m not dead, idiot. And chances are we’re not so lucky on his account.” Sure enough, Lindsay started to stir, his grip still tight on his torch and liquor. “Dammit, that’s what I get for letting my guard down.”

Standing tall as Lindsay got back up, Rico insisted, “Don’t you worry, Andou, I’ve got this.” Stepping forward, his foot slid a couple inches on the deck, the boy’s arms flailing as he managed to keep his balance. “Hey, can you stop bleeding everywhere!?”

Andou glared. “I’ll try.”

Swishing around the vodka, the fall he’d suffered had cost him more uses than he was comfortable with. Letting out a long sigh, he said, “Sorry kid. I’m sorry that the world failed you; sorry that whoever raised you failed. You’re just a dumb kid who doesn’t know better, holding a damn arsenal in his body with that Fruit power of yours. If you don’t get stopped here, you’re going to run headfirst into a wall you can’t overcome somewhere down the line. You should’ve been taught better, and I’m not good enough to whoop some sense into you.” Getting the bottle’s neck near his lips, he finished, “If I kill you, don’t blame me.”

Rico wasn’t smiling, his eyes narrowed in focus. “I don’t care that the world failed me: what I do from here on out is my responsibility! Don’t you dare talk about the people who raised me like that!” Fists up, he took a fighting stance, facing down Lindsay head on. Mouth full of alcohol, cheeks puffed out like a hamster, the Marine charged forward, casting the emptied bottle aside. Rico turned tail and ran away. “Oi,” Andou grunted, unimpressed, before rolling out of the way himself.

Rico peeling out towards the edge of the ship, there wasn’t much room to run. Jabbing his fingers at Lindsay, a few small rockets shot out, careening off just enough that the man wasn’t even fazed by the explosions at his feet. Stuck, Rico jumped onto the railing, stuck between the threat of water and the impending flame. There was a crackling of wood. Lindsay planted his feet, torch raised as he shot out another fireball. The side of the ship was engulfed in light and heat, only for it to fade away, Rico missing.

Eyes wide, Lindsay bounded forward, noticing that a portion of the guardrail had broken away. Just as he reached the part where the deck spilled out into the ocean without the barrier, a hand clasped onto the edge of the wood. A face appeared, grin wide, blue sparks bursting from Rico’s legs, shoulders, and arms. A sharp uppercut slammed into Lindsay’s gut in the same motion as Rico pulling himself onto the deck, spittle launching from the man’s mouth. Putting his whole body behind the blow, his elbow ignited. Sunny... Whole forearm launching off, Lindsay was carried into the air, his passage marked by the sound of a whistling rocket, his face panicked. Rico’s arm reformed, two fingers stuck up in a V for victory. Zhulong!” High in the sky, the firework detonated, green and purple sparks barely visible in the sunny day.

Eyes raised, watching the faint light fade into the bright day, Andou looked back down at Rico, the boy stretching and dusting himself off after a fight well done. Andou didn’t yet know how he pulled it off, but he did. Glancing at his shoulder, his suit coat tied around the wound in a makeshift bandage, he knew they weren’t quite out of the woods yet. Picking up his fallen cigarette, still barely lit, and took one last drag before flicking it off, his flame being extinguished in his own blood. “Guess this round goes to you, kid.”
Hey, it’s the weekend, and I’m finally working a job where that means something!

I will be aiming to post today, though if it doesn’t happen I have until tomorrow. @Yankee and @LostDestiny should be looking at the day after (the 27th), and @Daxam the 28th. Glad to see the first posts by @Hillan and @Restalaan yesterday, so their next expected post date is the 31st! Also, I do want to eventually give more substantial thoughts on the posts we've gotten at some point (beyond just the Like), but I'm not very good at that! It'll be easier for me to talk about them when there's more of the individual stories to discuss, so I might reserve that for whenever I do the first IC News Post.

So, as for the OOC topic, I want to know a few more details about your characters! But not just any details: in the manga SBS question corner, Oda has shared a lot of tidbits on the Straw Hats and other characters through questions. What animal do you associate them with? What would they smell like to Chopper’s heightened sense? What are the typical thoughts in their brain (as per the Volume 59 SBS)? Blood type? Symbolized flower? Bathing habits? Season (in the Grand Line)? Favorite and least favorite foods? Birthday? Hobbies? You don’t have to answer all of them, of course, but if you have them in mind (or would like to come up with them), feel free!

Rico’s birthday is August 13th, which is the date of the Kachimai Fireworks Festival in Japan (the largest one), also sharing a birthday with Hoe (Neptune's whale mount). Shockingly, he smells like gunpowder (though on days he uses his power less, he might smell faintly of sugar/candy). His favorite season is Summer, and in the Grand Line he’d like Summer on a Summer island the best if he’d been. His associated animal is the flying squirrel. His blood type is A (represented in One Piece as X). His flower is the gomphrena. His favorite foods are liver, pot pie, hard candy, and prune juice. He hates mushy, greasy, or soggy foods (but eats them anyway). He doesn’t really have any hobbies aside from getting into trouble/playing pranks. He bathes daily (when possible). And the thoughts in his head are: dreams hope fireworks laugh goof-off. Silly little bugger!
RICO

Keys clattering to the ground as they were dropped, Rico’s red eyes flashed as he charged right for Ensign Torrent. “Just because you’re a kid doesn’t mean we’re gonna keep going easy on you!” Sticking two fingers in the corners of his mouth, he let out a shrill whistle that echoed down the halls of the boat. Within moments, voices and boots against wood could be heard throughout the ship.

“Call for help all you want, I’ll take you all on!” Rico called, reaching out his hand, red fur trim rustling in the air. A fist flung out, only to stop in midair, Torrent flinching. Rico stuck the fingers out, the tips catching alight in flames of green and red. Panicked Fuzanglong! In a burst of smoke and light, five rockets fired off, whizzing about in scatter shot directions, bounding off of the planks of the deck and leaving singe marks and smoke trails in their wake, the senses quickly overloading in the cramped quarters. Torrent took a step back, disoriented, while Rico shot his other fist out, catching the taller man in the face, blood spurting from his nose as he fell to the ground.

As the fireworks fizzled out, Andou waved away the smoke as he approached, coughing, “Why the heck didn’t you just punch him in the first place?”

Readjusting his black coat, Rico insisted, “It worked, didn’t it?” Andou just shook his head. Storming off, the two worked their way through the halls, path rather aimless.

“If we could grab my stuff, that’d help,” Andou suggested, taking over the course. One turn later, they ran face first into a squad of Marines, cutlasses brandished. “Well shit.”

Rico laughed, “Man, you weren’t kidding about your luck, old man!” Before Andou could retort, he felt a pressure on the back of his neck, Rico vaulting over him driving his knee into the lead Marine, knocking him into the wall. Bringing his foot down, as it fell, a number of firework rockets launched from the heel of his dark boot. Raging Hong! Whistling through the air, the fireworks exploded with a bang, cracking wood and blasting Marine soldiers in all directions, light in blues and yellows filling the air with the smokey residue. As the air cleared, so did the path.

Andou let out a low whistle. “You may be the second dumbest human being I’ve ever met, but you sure can throw down. Try not to torch the boat, fighting fires on the sea is a bitch.”

“Well now I gotta know who the dumbest human you’ve ever met is. And the dumbest non-human for that matter.”

At Andou’s guide, the pair found the Marine’s storage area, a number of cubbies and shelves arranged for the personal effects of prisoners, kept temporarily to be returned, or snatched up by soldiers and passed off as misplaced. Andou started sifting through while Rico stood by, leaning his hand against one of the shelves, only for it to snap under his weight, sending the young man stumbling, where he bashed his head against the wall. Andou glanced back, “You good?”

Getting up, Rico rubbed his head, noticing that the spot he’d grabbed was already cracked, the other shelves being completely fine. “I think your bad luck is starting to rub off on me man.”

Andou shrugged. “Just how it is. Get used to it. A ha!” Pilfering one of the cubbies, he pulled out a pack of cigarettes, sticking a metal piece over his right index finger, wrapping a leather strap around his wrist to keep it in place, the nail of the finger guard sharp and ridged like a screw.

“Ready to go?” Andou turned about at Rico’s question, knees buckled, eyes narrowed. Rico barely had time to react as Andou blitzed right at him faster than he could perceive. The sharp implement went right through Rico’s body, the sizzle of ignition following Andou’s strike. There was an intake of breath from behind Rico, the boy turning his head to see Andou’s finger lodged in the chest of a Marine solider with a rifle, the firearm clattering to the ground as the man did once Andou twisted his wrist to pull his weapon out.

Arm free, Andou brushed at his singed sleeve, bits of smoke wafting off. “Man, you’re fast. Also could you warn a guy?”

“Eh, didn’t feel like it,” Andou said, pulling away. Slipping out a cigarette, he propped it into his mouth. “Got a light?” There was a whistle as the small red flame of a rocket whizzed by, Andou’s face marred by a trail of soot, the end of the cigarette glowing orange. Taking in a puff, he met Rico’s gaze, pride evident in the lad's cocksure smile. “Thanks pal.”

Door to the deck slamming open, Rico and Andou spilled out into the open. “Dang it’s bright out here! How can we find a rowboat if we can’t even see? Oh wait, it’s getting better.”

“Took your time, didn’t you?” came the voice of Commander Lindsay, stiff mustache still bristling like it had something to prove.

“Hmm? Yeah, we kept getting lost, I guess. Oh and we ran into some of your guys but that didn’t slow us down too much.”

Lindsay’s brow lowered into a glare, the man dropping from the forecastle deck, facing off with Rico and Andou on the main, casting his justice coat aside. “Sorry for going easy on you. This time my discipline isn’t going to be so casual. You’re not just a shitty brat, you’re a menace, and it’s about time you learned the difference between right and wrong on these oceans.”

“Oh, don’t you worry, I know plenty of right and wrong, I just don’t mind being wrong.” Rico put one leg out, his neon green slacks catching the sunlight, the boy ready to rush forwards.

Plip.

There was a light flash of white. The two older men had their eyes drawn to Rico’s shoulder. Rico spotted a small white bit of sludge on his coat, partly streaked over the raised collar, smearing the black and green skull shaped decal. The cry of seagulls above was like a mocking howl of laughter. Jabbing his finger at the offending mess, Rico cried, “You see, that is wrong.”

Andou started to chuckle. “Hey Commander, you might wanna grab that bird and give it a medal. It just shat on the man who’s going to become future King of the Pirates, apparently.” Jaw agape, Rico’s eyes bore into Andou.

“God dammit, that was so good I can’t even be mad.”
@Hillan I’ll turn down your characters any time buddy. <3

Also I remember one iteration of Kai having the name ‘Phreel’, which still just sounds so funny to me. Kai, for real?

@LostDestiny I totally agree on improving characters over the years! Especially One Piece because I have so many, and new ideas continue to come. I’m looking forward to see how the story of this take on Annabelle plays out!

@Daxam Whoa, neat to hear that this is your first OP RP! Let’s hope it’s one to remember. Thanks for sharing the art, though I doubt that Luna and Sol’s interactions here will be so wholesome...
I got a couple announcements for you guys this Saturday! I’m very excited for the interest picking up, and I continue to love the characters and ideas being shopped around. I myself have stuff I’ve so excited to write it’s hard to stand.

I’ve been updating the OOC and character roster every so often, but today I did a somewhat more substantial revision, trying to add some bits for topics discussed and things I’ve thought about myself. Check the following sections (added and revised) if you want to stay up to date (that’s right, this RP has patch notes):


Names and Name Order
Handling Season and Time
Power Restrictions (Voice of All Things)
For Great Justice – The Marines
Devil Fruit Clarifications (Another crack at defining Paramythia/Logia distinctions)
Races of the World (Fishfolk species)
First Come, First Serve


Regarding post dates, @Hillan and @Yankee will hopefully be posting today. @LostDestiny and I need to get one in tomorrow, while @Daxam has until the day after. @Restalaan has a little less than a week, or course. No penalty of course: you’d need three weeks of inactivity (without warning) to be labeled inactive and have your character removed from the roster, this is just a friendly reminder! Also, if anyone’s worried about post orders or the like, don’t. I’d rather not have double posting, not because of any thread related issues, but more regarding energy. I’ve seen a bunch of enthusiasm from players so far (mostly on the discord), and while I think it’s great, I just don’t want anyone to burn themselves out and lose energy/interest. The RP should be more of a slow burn than a flash in the pan, right?

Lastly, I’m going to try and do a weekly OOC question, to poke and prod you guys if you feel like answering. What I want to know is: do you remember your first One Piece OC? And/or the first character you used in a One Piece RP?

My first One Piece OC I came up with in highschool. Ryu was an old guy who fought with a quarterstaff. We was a veteran criminal with a whopping bounty of 240 million beri (it was massive when I was in high school and the Water 7 arc was still ongoing, at least). I think later on I added some Cipher Pol stuff that he ran away from but I don’t even know. Slightly more interesting was the character I came up with as his captain, Ricoh! He was nothing like the firework himbo I’m using here, I just mostly kept the name lol. I think Ricoh used a sword and lost his hand at some point but kept using the sword anyway or something. He was also an asshole but not really in a fun way, and none of the characters minded. I actually kept developing this potential fanfic for years, and while it never saw the light of day, it was interesting to see my ideas evolve. I wrote like 2 chapters total and have probably rebooted the concept more times than I ever wrote chapters lmao.

My first One Piece RP character was a shipwright! He was pretty bland imo, but I think he was inspired by Fire Emblem (7, the GBA game), with the focus on him being royalty and all. I think he fought a character with a bone Devil Fruit? Idk it was over 15 years ago.

I’ve opened my closet and showed off the skeletons so you guys better open yours. >:[
Kurozumi Haku



Sorry for the delay but accepted! The mixture of a Wano born lad and a Marine is already a curious mix, but their firm personalities and familial relationship only adds to my interest in seeing what you have in mind with such a mixture!

Also, I opened the hider showing the image chosen for Haku, only to see...Haku. I’mnotsurewhatIexpected. Drop him in the character tab!
There is theoretically infinite room to join, so absolutely! And anyone is free to hop into the discord.

Was that RP you recall One Piece: Revolution? Hillan and I were in that one, actually.




Not accepted! You see, I’m not allowing second characters until about a month into the RP. If you’re still interested in playing Maxwell by then, you’re absolutely welcome to! But until then, you’re welcome to continue brainstorming the character.

However, I do have a bit of concern. While I think the character has a lot of potential to be endearing and enjoyable, I want to bring up a canon comparison in the form of Buggy. I love Buggy, especially the direction his character has gone from Impel Down onward. And in regards to a character finding success in no small part due to luck, Buggy and Maxwell share the similarity. However, Buggy is a tertiary character in Luffy’s story, dozens of chapters separating his appearances, where writing Maxwell as a PC would have some risks in part through virtue of just having more of him. How much of the concept can be spread across a larger story? How long until it risks getting old?

The best way to find out of the concept has staying power, I think, is to sit on it for a bit. Where might his story go? What might his arcs look like? If you try envisioning arcs and feel they’re getting a bit samey, then it’d be better to find this out before they’re accepted rather than 12 posts with them into the RP. And this doesn’t mean that you have to compromise in a way you dislike. Maxwell doesn’t have to become a more serious character if that’s not the way his story should go, for instance. Even if the concept can’t be stretched very far, I have no problem with a ‘one shot’ character, or a ‘limited run’, of sorts, where the character is meant to have a briefer story role (as long as it’s made clear in the Character Goals). And of course, you’re welcome to communicate any hopes or concerns with me while we wait until you can have the character accepted in the first place. I do love the idea of a character in part inspired by OOC conversation following a throwaway gag in the first IC post, but I want it to have the staying power your enthusiasm and energy for it deserves.

I will add, since limiting the character unnecessarily weakens the concept, I’ll note that you don’t need to limit the Whisper-Whisper Fruit to rodents only. I just don’t see the sense in cutting off potential RP opportunities by limiting his Fruit where it doesn’t need to be. How will he be able to mediate the Crow-Rat War for Shiny Baubles if he can only talk to one side? Find ways to expand on the concept in service of its spirit, rather than limiting it.
RICO

“Bruuum bruuum bruuum. Dededele whoooOOOOP.”

“Oh my god would you please stop you’ve been making random noises for the last THREE HOURS!” came a cry from elsewhere in the brig. Following was a cacophony of agonized agreement.

“When we get to jail I am going to beat the shit out of you!” “Let us rot in peace!” “Yeah, I keep losing count of the wood grains in the floorboards I’m counting, prick!” “At least keep it down."

Rico, eyes wide to the point the red blood vessles were visible at the edges, raised his arms, seastone cuffs clattering to the ground. “This is my hell.”

A couple days ago, Rico had made it to the town of Tolsom Fold, a regular old place with a Marine battleship nearby. Out of sheer boredom, he tried to make the place a little less boring, and this was where he ended up. For a little public disturbance, he was being shipped off to prison. That was hardly fair! Indignant, he sat up, “This is bullshit, I didn’t even do anything wrong! What’s a couple poppers, huh? Oh no I scared a big tough squad of Marines, boo hoo.”

“Yeah, and when they were letting you out, you headbutted some Navy guy in the face and gave him a bloody nose.”

“He was muttering under his breath! I dunno what he said but it sounded rude. If you don’t speak up no one can hear you!”

“And then later when the big guy came to take off your cuffs, you shot fireworks everywhere with your dumb magic, so they threw you back in the cell.”

“That wasn’t magic, it just happens whenever I get excited.”

“Trust me kid, I feel like you’re safer in there. You seem like the kinda guy who’d bring himself to ruin if left unchecked, like an addict in the casino. Maybe a week or so in prison will do you some good.”

The warning went ignored as Rico flipped himself over, cuffs banging against the brig’s wood flooring again. “One of the old guys on Cannon Island told me he escaped cuffs in the war by dislocating his thumbs, so I’ll bet...owie! Nope.”

“Do you do anything quietly? Escape is the one thing you really should-”

“I just said you gotta be loud so people hear you doesn’t anyone listentome!? Rico hiss, throat getting gravelly with the last words.

Throbbing vein forming on the middle aged man’s forehead, he snarled, “Ignore me again you little shit and I’ll kill you myself.”

“I’d like to see you try! Anything to be less bored here.”

“QUIET DOWN ALREADY!” boomed a hefty voice, just following the slamming of the brig door. Stepping in, a bulky Marine Ensign with curly brown hair walked between the various cells in the hold, occasionally rapping his knuckles on the bars. “You’re all prisoners, so be good and quiet until we get to where we going, or you’ll be skipping another meal.” His threat was met by a rare silence, so the man left satisfied.

Well. Good to know something shuts you up.”

“Gotta eat so you can grow up to be big and strong.”

Hand brushing through his shock of white hair, the man leaned against the door of his cell. “I can’t place a bead on you at all.”

“Well, that’s good, ‘cause I don’t want any beads. They’re for crafts and stuff, not whatever you want to give me one for. But I can get you as many beads as you want if we get outta here. Food too.”

“In the middle of the ocean?” the old man let out a long sigh. “Better sooner than later.”

Rico sat up, eyes on the man in hopes of gleaning a bit more of his intent, but instead he grabbed a glint with his eyes, followed by the dull clatter as a ring of iron keys plopped on the floor of his cell. “You’re free to go. Jump in the ocean and don’t come back, you hear?”

Rico chortled, before undoing his seastone cuffs. Keys in hand, he walked straight through the bars of the cell with a hiss of fizzy flame and sparks of light, the smell of burning gunpowder filling the brig. Putting the key in the door of the man’s cell, he insisted, “And you’re coming with me!”

As the cell door opened, another voice mentioned, “Didn’t you hear him? There’s nowhere to go, idiot.”

“Where there’s a will, there’s a way. You helped me for a reason, right? You can sense it, I bet.”

“I did, actually,” Rolling his shoulders, the man said, “My name’s Andou. I’m a bit of a gambling nut, you see. Seen my share of games, paid my price.” He held up his left hand, where his pinky and a portion of his ring finger were carved clean off, the wounds healed long ago.

“Well, I’m pretty sure you picked a winner.”

Andou clapped his hand on Rico’s shoulder, “Kid, I am the worst goddamn loser you ever heard of. I can’t even win a game of rock paper scissors. Slot machine handles tend to break under my touch. I got sick of losing on the roulette when only betting red and black, so after putting it on both out of spite it hit a 00. I'm here because of a debt I couldn’t pay back, because I can’t help but to gamble in spite of all that. I’m pretty sure a black cat pissed on the leg of my mother as she walked under a ladder while she was pregnant with me. I bet on you because I wanted to pick a booger, not a winner. It’ll be the best use I’ve ever gotten out of my luck, trust me.”

Rico’s shoulders slumped, falling under the weight of expectations. “O-oh. Man...that’s really funny actually.” Knocking his arm away, Rico stated, “How about this: if you win, I’m going to prison, but if I win, you join my crew!”

Andou’s mouth went slack. “No, I’m betting on you, not-”

“Then it’s settled! Besides, no matter what happens to you, when I escape, you’ll be the man who helped the future King of the Pirates. That’s the bet I’m making.”

Andou stared, face long. Then, he cracked a smile. “Heh. Heh heh. AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! AH HA HA HA HA HA! AH HA HA HAHAHAHAHA! HOHEH HOHEH HOOOOO HEHEHE HOOO!”

The door crashed open. “WHAT DID I SAY!?”

Patting his stomach, Andou caught his breath as the Ensign gawked at the open cell door, keys blatantly in Rico’s hand.

“Looks like the bet’s on, kid.”


Accepted! With a sample post where the ending made me laugh out loud, I have to say you nailed making a ‘fun’ character! There’s some neat tidbits in there about the current state of Fishman Island and Miss Dread that I know I’m going to have my eyes on.



Accepted! While I know you aren’t able to get into Sol quite yet, the duality motif between the two is already very clear even not knowing much about Sol, and I’m looking forward to how you share their parallel journeys!

Throw those ladies in the Character tab!

Man, seeing all these characters is making me excited. The lack of a backstory section is only making me more antsy to know what everyone’s deal is. Y’all better get posting! I know I want to, might even have one by tomorrow if I get into it~
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