Parallel Hearts

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

@Moonlit Sonata@Rune_Alchemist@Reflection@Cu Chulainn@1Charak2@SubjectVision@floodtalon@Breo@Froppy@GreenGoat@SSW@DocRock@Pyromania99@Player 2

Apologies for the sudden disappearance. Circumstances beyond my control happened and made me unable to continue this, or even come back here until just about now.

I apologize for getting your hopes up and not being able to deliver anything, as well as hope to see you again in the future at some other RP. Though I suppose I should refrain from trying to GM anything for the time being.

Sorry again and thanks for having tried this with me.

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

@Crusader Lord

Fickle Fortune: EX is a bit too strong, taking down others' Luck by two ranks is way too much for a skill that's always active and can't be resisted. Applying a minus modifier is already enough.

The rest is pretty alright, I think.

EDIT 2: I'll be sticking with Fierro in the end, and shelving this character to work on further along the line @Parallel Hearts. Apologies for the inconvenience

@SubjectVision

No worries. As said before Fierro is alright so you can move him to the CS is you wish.

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

I'm just login in to say that I'll review these new CSs over the weekend. Apologies for the delay in this reply.

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

Scáthach

“The passage is open, Assassin, Hanzo. It has been all this time. Like I said before, I’m just a guide, waiting for your decision. Not a gatekeeper, halting your progress,” Scáthach said as she looked towards the uncomfortable Assassin. “However, you should be aware that this is a one-way path only. Once any of you have crossed the gate, you’ll not be able to come back to this theater until the key has been secured and the sector has been freed of any threats as perceived by the Moon Cell.”

“That said,” she said in a serious, commanding tone while looking towards Phaea. Even if the Rider wasn’t looking right at Scáthach she would still be able to feel the pressure of being glared at by the red-haired Caster. “Do not shorten my name or refer to me in any inappropriate form ever again, Rider. This isn’t a liberty you have earned the right to. If my True Name is too hard for you to pronounce correctly, you can refer to myself as Caster, Guide, or any other appropriate title like Queen of the Land of Shadows. I expect you to remember that from this moment onward,” Scáthach finished, speaking in the same way a stern mentor would to a pupil that can’t remember their place.

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

Scáthach

Scáthach sighed as she sat in front of the podium, barely touching the crushed red clay below with the tips of her bare toes. If the Moon Cell expected her to scold these “legendary heroes” as if she was their tutor, or order them around as a Ruler would, it was very wrong. If these Servants couldn’t even agree on setting their egos aside and to work together, it would be better that they killed one another here and now. At least, like this, they could begin anew with a fresh summoning or continue the quest with only those really willing to participate.

The Queen of the Shadowlands only turned her eyes towards the seats, instead of the dirt below her feet, once Ford made his questions known. “You needn’t worry about resources, Mister Ford. We are being sustained by the Moon Cell itself. We’ll have enough Magical Energy to perform at our best, this I assure you. And, as far as resources are concerned, I believe you shall have plenty in our destination, according to the reports of our scout programs,” she said before tapping the ground with her staff, causing a holographic projection to appear in front of them. It showed what looked like a mix between the Appalachian Mountains in their virginal state and some old Hellenistic ruins, carved off pristine white marble and granite, with the sea extending away from the shore being easily recognizable as the Aegean, to any who ever braved its waters even though an eerie aura hovered over it like a thick, intangible mist.

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

@Crusader Lord

While most of your character's idea is alright, there are a few important details that need to be addressed.

- While it's not very important (since Arthur had a ton of knights serving "him" on Camelot, anyway), the Original Round Table only had 13 members: King Arthur, Percival, Kay, Gaheris, Palamedes, Tristan, Gawain, Lancelot, Bedivere, Mordred, Galahad, Agravain, Gareth. So, she probably isn't right in considering herself one of them. You can do it, just know that's likely something that would be considered highly dishonored by most knights who know the truth.

Now, for the important bits:

- King of Men is an exaggerated skill if it allows for both instinct and Charisma at the equivalent of a Rank A. If both are at B Rank or lower, then it's acceptable.

- A Shielder shouldn't have a Saber level offensive NP like that Sword. It kinda defeats the point of the class system if you have both. You can either make her a Saber and keep the word, or a Shielder and keep the shield, but the other part that isn't being used will have to be sealed.

@Pyromania99
Shuten-sized Empress is alright. I hope you don't worry if I imagine her dialogue in Aoi Yuki's voice.

@Player 2
I see. I knew he ate people before because well... there wasn't anything else he could feed on. Anyway, I don't follow Japan's FGO so that's rather new for me, but I suppose it's ok.

The only thing I'll ask for is to change that last NP. The idea behind it isn't bad but being able to ignore both the disadvantages of being a Beast and of being Divine is a bit disappointing from a storytelling PoV. It's not exactly that strong (since there are few things that really target these weak spots) but it's underwhelming narratively speaking. He keeping both advantages is ok, but (just like the Gorgon) he should keep both weak spots as well.

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

@Player 2

I'm sorry but I'll have to ask you to rewrite that Asterios' CS from the beginning. While I understand that Servants that are featured exclusively on Fate/Grand Order can feel rather incomplete sometimes (lacking some base consistency and trait that Servants from other works in the Franchise would normally have, not to say anything of over-inflated skill ranks just for mechanical gameplay purposes), this CS lacks some basic understanding of how Asterios has been portrayed as a character through the whole of his appearances in the story/events.

I'm just asking that, if you are making him in the same class and all that, you keep him a little closer to his canon portrayal.

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

@DocRock

I don't think that there's anything wrong with Ford. You can post him on the CS tab.

@Parallel Hearts

This is a note that I'll be switching from Assassin Fierro to a Ruler George Orwell.

@SubjectVision

Very well then. Just like I said to the others, be sure that you are picking something you really want to, before making your final decision.

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

This wouldn't happen to still be open would it? I've got some character ideas that would be great for this.

@Scallop

Yes, we are. You'll be the last new player slot I'll be taking for now.

Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

And the IC is up. Anyway that has an approved character is ok to begin posting.

I'll assign the places in the character's list sometime during this week, to see how far we are from maximum capacity.