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Current Sail on a sweet silver mist

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Player; DK
Age; 23
Sex; Male
Occupation; Air Force
Location; Alnilam
Race; Rakshasa

Dead men tell no tales
So listen to this story from a whale
She sailed the silver river
But only found a purple butler
There was a grey parrot, and the crane both agree
That the turtle should search for the one manatee
Now you see your monster
Or maybe your insanity
The pirate needs more ales

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Ohh, I thought we had to use one of the suggested weaknesses, I might rework him and just add my own weaknesses then.
I just realized you have two threads, should we post in this one or keep posting in the other?
@Slendy
Reese and Landon going to Dej for a party? Sounds good. I'll get a post tonight I think.
@OtomostheCrazy
Ahh, I was thinking more like hear her prayers. Like when Landon's people called out to him, he heard them, but it was more in his mind, if you want to play that way though, go ahead.
@OtomostheCrazy
If Landon and Reese start a party with the Imperials, would Claire hear if they yelled out to her. I'm sure the Imps have good music, but Claire has the best. There will be lots of wine and drinks as well. Landon will make sure of it. He wants the Imps to be very loose.
@Banana

2. If they were created with human intelligence, they'd be as advanced as cavemen. Technology and understanding comes with time, not intelligence. second it sounds like they created entire civilizations as well, which also takes time.

4. Sure that would fine and fun.

@OtomostheCrazy

I do look forward to the seven deadly sins thing, which is why I'm trying to turn Landon super sexual.

Like I said, I like this RP, and it has had some chaos, which turned others off already. I'm nota fan of the chaos either(by chaos I mean writing inconsistencies and impatience) but I'm willing to get past it for the story, but now even that's dying. We have great ideas, but their being executed poorly. I love the story chaos, but not he writing chaos.
@Rai

Does that mean it's good as is, or you're going to look at it soon¿
@sakurasan
Might not be, it seems like it's taking a few days for just a first post, so we might have deserters before we even began.
@Banana
LoL Tlevran cries over losing a finger. Landon says "Don't worry about it," when he loses an arm.

@Cuccoruler
So seriously for the sake of the storyline (If there still is one)
1. Was there a two week jump and are there two times going on now because Landon hasn't jumped yet.
2. Have the Mycelings really developed 3000 years worth of technology and civilization with a population of 1000 in an afternoon? Because if so the Tari have just made leaps and bounds in technology thanks to them. The Tari are technological scavengers and will assimilate any technology.
3. I haven't mentioned this, but the Tari travel long distances, by Akhlut through Landon's realm. It's too dark for any normal mortal to pass through, but the Akhlut have a special sense to allow them through. So they have seen this development if it is happening.
4. Landon is still controlling the moon.

Don't know if anyone really cares about any of this, but I do care about storylines and congruity, and as Slendy said, this could be a great story, but right now, it's a bunch of random writings, about whims we want to happen, so it's just sort of suddenly there. All of the elements of the story can be kept, but a little thought and consideration to the setting would help.
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