Renny

Academy Wars: Rituals and Technology in the Modern World, a Magitech School RP

Hehehe, sorry about that.

I didn't particularly mean for them to seem disgraced. Just for Jian-Yu's original school to be renowned too. Intially they would have preferred he be sent the weakest school in all of Japan but when Otsuki bidded in for him, considering their track record, they thought it'd bring out his will to win if he was an inch or so from it.

Didn't put it in the App because I felt I was already making it a tad longer than I wanted.

So am I accepted?

Academy Wars: Rituals and Technology in the Modern World, a Magitech School RP

@VitaVitaAR Well I've made it clear that Ryui Bang, now Innocent Ryui Bang ^-^ is a replica.

I've also taken away the ability to use it hands free. Don't know why really but it seemed appropriate. I kept everything else because I felt it was okay in the realms of Divine Gear. I feel like I grossly underestimated the real, legendary Ryui Bang. And if he ever obtained it, that it'd make him a demi-god or something lol.

Also I just wanted to be made clear, that I realized we didn't have to base them off mythology. I just kinda fell in love with the idea of having Jian-Yu based off of Sun Wukong.

Academy Wars: Rituals and Technology in the Modern World, a Magitech School RP

@VitaVitaAR Oh... well I based my character off having some correlation with Sun Wukong. Really that's the only reason I had for having it but I can just change it to a replica. I'll conjuror up a believable story for his birth parents having enough interest to want to give him a replica Ritual Tech made of Ryui Bang.

I don't wanna ruin any plans you got in store.

Academy Wars: Rituals and Technology in the Modern World, a Magitech School RP

@VitaVitaAR Ahh, I get it. I understood the basics but I understand it even better now.

So while instead of having Ryui Bang, I'll modify it to being a weapon based around it. Created to bear a resemblance and hold a spirit akin to Sun Wukong. Basically the person who made it will be thinking of Sun Wukong when he made it.

I'm just assuming you don't want me to have the original Ryui Bang. So which part of my abilities was it that threw you off? If any had?

Academy Wars: Rituals and Technology in the Modern World, a Magitech School RP

@VitaVitaAR I thought I had described it as been made into a Divine Gear. Divine Gears are most noticeably recognized by their Light Engines right?

Should I give it a new name? That might make it easier.

I'm not really sure where I went wrong. But I can def switch it up and make it some kind of replica or something? Just thought since no one else had tried that I'd attempt it.

Academy Wars: Rituals and Technology in the Modern World, a Magitech School RP

@VitaVitaAR So I finished the revised Seiichi, now Jian-Yu Sun. I'm prepared for grading. I was going to just edit in the last character post but I felt like this would be easier for you.

Jian-Yu Sun, Miracle Exchange Student

Student:

• Name: Sun Jian-Yu
• Age: 15
• Gender: Male
• Appearance: Jian-Yu walks shoulder to shoulder among the average person. His stature is typical, at about 5’7” he’s neither imposing or noticeable. However, his rich green eyes deceive his timidity at times. His heritage… his blood defying his perceived nature.
• Personality: Firstly, one should know that Jian-Yu was an orphan. He fought for survival for several months before being found and placed into government care. This brought about a kind of feracity when it came time to be screened for adoption. When he was finally chosen, it was a surprise that a former general had taken interest. His feracity would prove to be a requirement for the man due to his intensive regimen. The regularly timid Jian-Yu was not berated outwardly though he could sense his father shied away from the condition. So in compensation, Jian-Yu would work hard during training and when enrolled into a Ritual Tech Academy was a furious competitor. That was until he nearly killed someone out of anger. That sorrowful moment sent Jian-Yu into a depression, suicide almost. After months of unsuccessfully attempting to coax his beloved son out of it, his father came to the end of his rope. The illustrious Academia he attended and his father made dealings to exchange him to a lesser school. Otsuki Academy was not the intended place but it would have to do. Now he, shamelessly wallows. An unrelenting gloom over his incident continuously prodding at his abilities. However, he has bouts of empathetic sensory. Whenever endangered or looked down upon, he rebels. Its as simple as that and it runs in his blood; a stream of diluted yet always present tendencies that leans towards a thuggish demeanor.
• Skills: Jian-Yu is the only protege of his adoptive father’s martial arts. Quite accomplished at it, his flexible kicks and open-palm strikes can deal heavy damage to anyone. This coupled with his masterful use of a staff can be compared to a beauteous, graceful dance. He is also disciplined and very physically well off. When it comes to literature he excels and while mathematically impaired, its due to a physical condition, perhaps phycological, that induces headaches when trying to work through an arguably complicated problem.
• Equipment: Divine Gear: Innocent Ryui Bang. A mysterious memento and replica of the greatly admired Ryui Bang. Jian-Yu has had it ever since he could remember, wrapped and tied to a woven bracelet. He assumes it was left to him by unknown parents.
• Abilities: Jian-Yu tends to take on a unnatural appearance when using Ryui Bang. Innocent Ryui Bang is a steel rod devoid of colour; a trio of golden bands, each embedded with light engines are wrapped around its form near the middle. A plethora of natural abilities are granted. A significant boost in physical strength. The ability to crush stone, dent steel, and move the length of five feet in a single second is all that Jian-Yu has been capable of jotting down without equipment. Along with these abilities comes Innocent Ryui Bang itself, which can shrink, grow, and expand. When not in use, Jian-Yu conceals it as small pendant dangling from his bracelet.
• Brief Backstory: Jian-Yu is the adopted son of a Chinese military general. Through an exchange program he was granted Japanese citizenship and transferred from his original Academia to Otsuki. He was raised by his father, who was an adept practitioner of several martial arts. The Sun man has passed down his artform to his son. It was Otsuki Academy’s drive that had them outsource for Jian-Yu. And Jian-Yu’s fear that drug him to the shamed Otsuki Academy.

Academy Wars: Rituals and Technology in the Modern World, a Magitech School RP

@Polaris North Welp, I wish you best of luck with it :)

Academy Wars: Rituals and Technology in the Modern World, a Magitech School RP

@Polaris North it's a good idea though. Him being faculty changes my opinion a bit. I like the idea a lot more now.

EDIT: Also Vita, if you can hold off on grading my character: Sei that'd be awesome. I wanna rework him a bit, I got a couple of expanded ideas for him. More over, I'm contemplating changing his Divine Gear and If I do, that'd mean a complete overhaul.

Academy Wars: Rituals and Technology in the Modern World, a Magitech School RP

@Polaris North It's an interesting concept. I've seen something like that before, never really seen it being used though. Like characters are made but its impact on the Rp are always non-existent to me.

Academy Wars: Rituals and Technology in the Modern World, a Magitech School RP

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