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Fate/Eternum — Reboot

@PKMNB0Y

Servant sheet changed entirely. Will this one do?

Fate/Eternum — Reboot

IS EVERY POST I MAKE CONSIDERED TOO WIERD HERE!?

For real though, that's a bummer. Alright, I'll come up with someone else.

Fate/Eternum — Reboot

Awesome! Now, I can move on to the Servant. I'm gonna do one, cause I feel like I won't be able to maintain two very well.

She really needs a break...

Medusa

Appearance: "She's a pretty snake."
Class: Rider
Personality: Silent, ever watchful and at times....slutry, Medusa never hesitates when it comes to protecting her Master from harm. Even if they treat her terribly, she is always loyal to her Master, willing to put her life on the line if it means ensuring her Master's safety. She's not one to start a conversation, preferring to hang back and observe others and their actions. Never one to act out on anger or instinct, Medusa is can be quite level-headed and rational, even in times of peril.
Stats:

• Strength: B
• Endurance: D
• Agility: A
• Mana: B
• Luck: E
• Noble Phantasm: A+

Class Skills:
Magic Resistance B: Any magical spell, offensive or defensive, ranked B and lower will be nullified.
Independent Action C: Enables Medusa to exist for a couple of days without needing the Master's mana to maintain her.
Riding A+: Any mount, whether it be man-made or animal, is easily mastered in Medusa's hands.
Divinity E-: One's mind, body and spirit are that which are beyond the human realm. Originally being a Earth Mother deity, Medusa is granted protection against mental spells, plus gaining some offensive power. At the rank of E-, though, it's not a lot.
Personal Skills:
Mystic Eyes A+: Medusa's legendary eyes of petrification. Will turn anyone within her sights to stone.... which is why she will only use this skill when absolutely necessary. It's also why she wears a blindfold in her battle uniform(or wear specially made glasses when she's in her casual outfit).
Monstrous Strength B: Increases her overall attack power. It should be very noted to the Master that Medusa MUST be careful to not overtax this particular skill....lest her worst fears be made real and she transforms into her more destructive self...Gorgon.
Blood Fort Andromeda: Blood Temple B: Usually a skill that requires the blood sacrifice of a large group of unfortunate victims, Medusa instead will use a percentage of her Master's mana pool to boost her combat prowess and performance. Due to the rank and demand of this skill, she will use this sparsely.
Noble Phantasm:

• Name: Bellerophon (Bridle of Chivalry)
• Rank: A+
• Type: Anti-Army
• Appearance: "Look at this horse! This horse is amazing!"
• Effects: Using her own blood as a catalyst, Medusa summons the winged horse of legend, Pegasus, to her side to serve as her mount. On her own, she is already a fast and nimble combatant, but when paired with her beloved child, her speed becomes nearly godlike, as well as powerful. This Noble Phantasm can easily devastate a large group of enemies. Pegasus can also serve as a means of transportation for herself and her Master, though she tries not to put that much burden on her dear mount.

Alignment: Chaotic Good (She was NEVER evil to begin with)
Changes: Using the F/GO version of her and her skills, as well as making it so she isn't THAT much of a danger to the general public.

Aaaaaand done. Waiting for approval.

Fate/Eternum — Reboot

@PKMNB0Y

Edited again. How about now?

Fate/Eternum — Reboot

@PKMNB0Y

Okay, the master sheet has edited a fair bit. Is this good?

Fate/Eternum — Reboot

Hmmm....

Alright, I think I got this. Give me a sec...

Fate/Eternum — Reboot

The history part? That's an easy fix.

The abilities? ...I could just scrub the 'magitech' idea all together and just have the bracelets/gauntlets and anklets/shin-guards be magical family artifacts passed down from generation to generation. Would that work?

Fate/Eternum — Reboot

So, in other words, you want me to:

A. Revise the history; Cut out the 'heresy' and 'taboo'.

B. Revise the abilities; Either keep it simple, come up with something entirely different or change it to something more tangible and would make sense in the setting.

Fate/Eternum — Reboot

@PKMNB0Y

Hmmmm....Okay. I understand. I can edit this out, and I would love to have some of your input to help in ironing this out. What do you propose?

Fate/Eternum — Reboot

Okay, I've been meaning to do this a LONG while ago, but my laptop "ran into a problem" and restarted itself and I've just been putting this off for too long. So, (hopefully) WITHOUT ADO:

Master

Name: Conner Griggs
Age: 17
Appearance: This boy lookin' fresh AF!
Personality: To those who don't know him, Conner would most likely come off as "lone wolf". He's quiet, reserved and mostly keeps to himself most of time. Hell, he'll rarely interact with anyone he doesn't know. And he DOES interact with others, he's polite and professional. However, this side of him is known to strangers and the public, in general. To his family and friends(and, by extension, Servants), he is a kind, friendly and intelligent young man. He is also known to be quite observant, seeing things people would usually either dismiss or ignore and noticing moments others have when they think no one is looking. This rather nosy quirk of his was often the source of joking and chagrin to those close to him, the phrase "Conner is always watching." was something he often heard from others throughout his life yet he always took it in stride. Not his fault people are careless about what they're doing around other folks. Conner has also been to be reliable and trustworthy, especially when trouble rears it's ugly head. He knows he's not the strongest or the best, but he's not afraid to do the right thing.
Abilites: As far as mages go, if you asked Conner where ranked among his peers, he'd tell you, "Solid mid-tier", and he wouldn't be lying. His magical circuits(both in terms of quality and number) are decent; Nothing spectacular, but not terrible either. Along his Water affinity and "hit and run" focused set of spells, Conner is quite capable of defending himself in a fight(As long as it's not against a Servant, of course). Additionally, he brings to the table some special equipment. Family heirlooms passed down from generation to generations: The Armis de Superbia.

• Armis de Superbia- A set of magically activated gauntlets and shin-guards. Through a ritual involving the Family Crest be placed on the recipient(in Conner's case, a tattoo in the shape a eagle in center of his chest), these magical artifacts become bound to the wearer and ONLY the wearer. When not activated, they appear as blue colored bracelets and anklets that one carries on their person at all times. However, with a uttering of his aria "Torrent, Course!", the seemingly harmless pieces of jewelry become active, transforming into protective azure colored gauntlets and shin-guards that encase the person's arms and legs in armor, enhancing their physical capabilities and performance. Due to it's nature, the durability and longevity of the armor depends on the the strength of the wearer's soul. Naturally, because of this, Conner is a close range fighting mage.

History: Conner is the eldest of six in the fourth generation of the Griggs magus family. Hailing from a long line engineers and inventors, upon discovering their aptitude for magecraft, the family quickly became acclimated in a world they didn't even think existed. Utilizing the mechanical know-how from their industrious past, the Griggs garnered a reputation of being of producing various magecraft tools and equipment, one of these being their closely-guarded Armis de Superbia. Being the most promising of his generation, Conner has come to Fusang City to learn and further develop his skills as an aspiring mage. At least....that's what his FAMILY wants for him, anyway. As for what Conner wants....well, that's up to HIM now, isn't it?

I'm gonna wait for this one to get approval before moving on to my Servants.