@Rabidporcupine Alright just a couple things.
Firstly, your brother AND your character going to the police force? There are other jobs in the world aside from crime-related work, and I think having 1 major NPC (your brother) and 3 PCs and several other NPCs be involved in that area is a bit much. Perhaps your character is fine with continuing their bend of fighting justice, but has an unrelated job?
Also, I doubt Connor, a mere mortal, would ever really ever be able to stand up in a swordfight with your character, unless your character specifically isn't using their powers to enhance their endurance/movement/ect. along with not using the petals. Truthfully, why would he bother learning how to use a sword than use a gun?
Otherwise, assuming you discussed the relationships with the others everything else is fine. Post it.
Firstly, your brother AND your character going to the police force? There are other jobs in the world aside from crime-related work, and I think having 1 major NPC (your brother) and 3 PCs and several other NPCs be involved in that area is a bit much. Perhaps your character is fine with continuing their bend of fighting justice, but has an unrelated job?
Also, I doubt Connor, a mere mortal, would ever really ever be able to stand up in a swordfight with your character, unless your character specifically isn't using their powers to enhance their endurance/movement/ect. along with not using the petals. Truthfully, why would he bother learning how to use a sword than use a gun?
Otherwise, assuming you discussed the relationships with the others everything else is fine. Post it.