Savato

Naruto: True Peace. [ALWAYS ACCEPTING] [Cool guys club inside]

@GrafRoy Zeppeli No, no, you can post him in the character bin. When you do I'll re-read it, but I'm sure Savato made the right call. So just post it there.

@Partisan

I always make the right call.

Asshole.

Multiverse Rising (Always in need of New Friends)

Eto

Cybtertron, Transformers Universe

@Lmpkio@Mtntopview@Absolis

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Well Ultron was sur being particularly feisty for a robot, which made Eto chuckle. It didn't matter, the lackeys were being dealt with by Cyano and Grimlock. Not a hard task for them, at least they could provide her with some cover as Eto engaged the main body, the only real problem to deal with. He had retreated and the ghoul flung the arm she snagged in the air a couple of times, her hand easily healing in a matter of seconds. There were more units, but she'd leave them to the two to handle, and in any case, she had four massive Kagune to annihilate any distraction. She'd grin with satisfaction.

When Ultron removed the piece of the Kagune with his hand, he'd unknowingly cause it to latch onto his remaining arm. Sure his concussion beam would be strong enough to remove the portion on his palm, but a Kagune didn't care about that. It swiftly stabbed its many "roots' into the crevices of the arm's machinerie, clogging it ever so slightly until the mouth gnawed on the joint, making connection between Ultron's brain and the arm very unsure and glitched. As such, his concussion beam would be immensely inaccurate.

"You're such dumbfuck, Ultron~ You know you're outmatched. Satsuki sure got into your techno head. Bitch."

She'd say as the massive debris was flung at her and she'd simply retract her monstrous Kagune to release her original Ukaku Kagune. It was essentially a mass of spikes on the level of her neck and shoulders with a long, muscular appendage sticking out of the shoulder cap like a naked wing. With that, she'd jump high and essentially fly through the debris, dodging them with ease thanks to her speed and momentum from the jump. Because the concussion blast was inaccurate, she'd easily see it coming and simply move out of the way. While the Kagune kept gnawing on the joint to attempt to leave Ultron devoid of arms, Eto simply stepped on one of the last debris, allowing her to propel herself toward Ultron.

With her strength and general speed, it would seem as though she practically appeared in front of him, her right eye black as the abyss that was Ultron's life prior to being free and her red pupil just hungry for his soul. Her grin translated pure malice at this point, he worked her up good. In any case, either the Kagune would keep his arm completely helpless or Ultron would have been too occupied trying to purge it, Eto would be standing before him her hand stabbing into his core.

"You know, I'm not really going too kill you. You're too ... Precious."

She held a tight grip on the core, allowing it to burn her hand but at the same time is was leaking power fast. She simply stared at him, taunting him to do something about it while she held his severed arm on her other hand. With each tug, she severed a few cords linking his body to the energy core he needed, clearly threatening to kill this precious body of his. It didn't matter, she could just reanimate him after all since he was a robot and stuff.

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Bambietta Basterbine

Eastgate City, Kaiju Rumble Arena - Arcadia-2

@Archmage MC@Absolis@The_written_John@dirty slime@Lmpkio@Flamelord

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Light's response was interesting to say the least, not the least bit curious as to what Bambietta was or why it seemed ritual to do such thing. Of course all Bambi saw was that Light was just another bitch who'd get massively fat in twenty years. The Quincy kept a somewhat warming smile to the crew as she chomped on the delicacy she had just robbed.

"Yeah, name's Bambi. Sorry, I thought it was okay given we're saving your friend and all."

She said with a whole lot of sass. Of course, she'd ask a question regarding the 'joke' she made, though it wasn't really a joke, the way she formulated it would make what she'd deem common people react strangely. Well, she wasn't one to attribute the title of common people given she was pretty below average on the neuron scale. However, this blonde gay lord would add a layer that would make Bambietta's eye twitch. She couldn't decide whether to obliterate him on the spot or diss him to absolute shame in the upcoming seconds. Especially with his smug bullshit that seemed typical of what she'd do actually when she'd be bored herself. Though she'd add her breasts to it to make it even more convincing. Luckily, Biollante's Kaiju form was fast enough to choose for her.

Bambi would grin, forming one of the smuggiest smiles of all time as she'd present the big bad Biollante by pointing her flatted hand toward her. Indeed, she was the biggest Kaiju in the field and probably the most creepy too. As such, the joke they made a remark on gained so much credibility that it earned a Bambietta tongue sticking out.

"Can't call you a whore since you've practically let me fuck you for free there, buddeh. It's okay though, but my non-existing dick is probably bigger than yours anyway, homo~"

He wanted to play ball after all, so she gave him what he wanted, sort of. She didn't have to fight him, especially with Kolon around. Speaking of which, she'd stare at the critter that seemed in awe toward Light. Bambietta didn't see much in her, she actually looked like one of those weird ass creations Gremmy would make to satisfy his childish needs and tendencies. What a damn creep that guy was. Then again he had a power that surpassed almost anyone in the Multiverse until now, so being a creep was probably a small payoff. She'd flick the cat thing's forehead in order to get its attention.

"Ey, don't make a scene, we're not here to piss on these people too much either."

She'd say completely shamelessly before looked back at Light.

"So you guys are from another world huh? I bet some of you are even from the other Arcadia. Well today's your lucky day, 'cause I got all the answers you need."

She'd say with an attempt to look somewhat stylish by closing her eyes, cool grin and pointing at herself with her thumb.

Naruto: True Peace. [ALWAYS ACCEPTING] [Cool guys club inside]

@GrafRoy Zeppeli Post-wise it seems about right. You have my seal of approval.

Just an FYI: In naruto, on average, 2 posts is like 5 seconds. But yeah, real time loses relevance when it becomes a problem most of the time.

Naruto: True Peace. [ALWAYS ACCEPTING] [Cool guys club inside]

@GrafRoy Zeppeli It seems generally better this can be worked with. I say translate the time duration to posts. It's simply easier that way for a lot of people (I could work with time, but by experience we've seen it be a problem).

Naruto: True Peace. [ALWAYS ACCEPTING] [Cool guys club inside]

@GrafRoy Zeppeli Problems with swearing? o;

Also yeah I don't mind the min really, J8 agreed that it was weak enough to be irrelevant. It's only really the max that matters.

Naruto: True Peace. [ALWAYS ACCEPTING] [Cool guys club inside]

@j8cob Minimum output has the strength of a pretty average sword used by an average shinobi. It's like saying walking on water should drain you after an hour cuz it's continuous. With enough chakra control it's pretty negligible.

Naruto: True Peace. [ALWAYS ACCEPTING] [Cool guys club inside]

@GrafRoy Zeppeli Okay this seems a lot better. Now here's the deal:

-Normal output, it's fine. It's not strong so even if it lasted longer I wouldn't care all that much. One hour is fine, keep it.

-Medium seems fair, as strong as a chakra enhanced weapon. Seems good.

-Okay, here's the deal with this. Something that can cut through anything or pierce through anything with rare exceptions is insanely high tier. Lust from FMAB or The X-Axis from Bleach can attest. 5 Minutes is loooooong. I recommend putting it into post, and something rather short given it makes you cheese through any skill requirement. It should probably have trouble with chakra enhanced weapons, sure it's stronger but can't cheese through through. Plus it would likely cut you even more chakra to get through those.

Yeah I'm a bit uptight with this but cutting through almost anything is pretty damn stronk.

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Review is in red as always.

me character

“Who might that handsome guy in the mirror be? Ah, it's just me.”

Meet Amatsurahashi Mikoto. A young man standing at 1.79 meters who probably spends more time looking at himself in the mirror than actually fighting. I smell the homosexuality already.

His long red hair made into a ponytail is probably the one with the best care in the whole army, even among the women. Don't ask, don't tell plz.

His fair skin has so many layers of creams and other chemicals that some men think he'll explode if there's some fire near him. Someone's going to have a bad time.

His blue eyes have never been seen in another state than their almost always perfect one in which Mikoto keeps them. There are some rumors going around that say his eyes can't actually be that pretty alone, saying that they MUST be using contact lenses.

He is so picky with his food and training menu to keep his slim, yet strong build, that many come to take his advice on how to take better care of their own physique. Making me hungry.

Amatsurahashi Mikoto, the man who spends a lot of time trimming himself and is actually very gay. That is the man standing before you.

Personnel files.
Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.

【Full Name】
Amatsurahashi Mikoto tl;dr

【Alias】
That one not-gay guy that seems gay AKA Homosexual.

【Affiliation】
Red Sages. k

【Age】
20

【Sex】
Male

【Sexuality】
Homosexual. Might be willing to change in the future.

【Birthplace】
Kirigakure. The Village Hidden In The Mist. Must be homesick.

【Rank】
Chūnin

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Psych. report.
Medical secrecy applies.

【Personality】
Have you ever met that one person that just seems to sing everything when he talks? We call those fruits, yes. That's the kind of person Mikoto is. A lot of people think he is annoying, but he just shows no signs of changing.

Ever since he was a child he's had one rule with which he lives by. To never change himself even if others want to change him. Always remain true to the desires of his heart. He is that kind of whimsical guy. As long as he doesn't watch pony porn I'm ok.

He loves art, music and just about anything that expresses the true desires of the heart. He spends a great deal of time in unnecessary and excessive grooming. He also seems to vastly prefer the company of men rather than the company of woman. These are just some of the reason as to why a lot of people think Mikoto is actually homosexual. Very valid thoughts.

Mikoto is only really picky when it comes to women, not to mention that he isn't popular with woman either because of how effeminate he seems at times. Several of his close friends actually know this, and still like to tease him about that.

Having sparked several misunderstandings, Mikoto has made an habit of introducing himself with his sexuality in his introduction line.

Despite his love for his beauty, Mikoto is neither an stranger to fight nor is he scared of them. He is not a ninja just for show. Mikoto's will to fight is just as much, if not even more, than other ninjas. He will never run away, nor will he ever admit he is outpowered. That's why he believes it is wrong for shinobi's to only be after money and not to follow their heart's desires. He's not following his heart by wanting women. Hypocrite.

He does, however, protect his face a lot more than any other shinobi does. That's better.

His reason to be one of the Red Sages is simple; "Doesn't freedom sound like a beautiful concept to you? I'd very much like to see what true freedom is like." k

【History】
What can you expect from Mikoto's story?

Yes, he was bullied as a kid. Yes, he was beaten up a lot as a kid. No, he was not mentally scarred or traumatised by this. Cyberbully 2 Shinobi Boogaloo

Mikoto actually fought back. He's never been afraid of getting his hands dirty. Though he's always been a dilligent student, more than once has he been scolded by his teachers because of how many fights he got himself into. During elementary school, he had to fight his way through bullies and smart-asses who thought he was nothing more than a sissy.

It wasn't until he started going to junior high school that he discovered a better way to deal with bullies instead of fighting them. Completely ignoring them. Why, there's nothing more infuriating than the sissy you are trying to piss off completely ignores your very existance. It ended up either with the guys giving up and moving on to their next victim or them trying to beat up Mikoto, which ended up badly for them. Again. Did he at least block them on Facebook?

By the time he entered high school, Mikoto had created a reputation for himself. Never again did he have to deal with idiots trying to piss him off. Just retarded GM's calling him gay.

Sadly, it was... boring. Extremely so. How could he ever relieve this boredom? Already studying to be a ninja and a Chuunin, and the Hamajo Confederation didn't seem eager to start a war any time soon.

Then, what could little old Mikoto do to relieve his thirst for fighting? The Red Sages was the only thing that came to his mind. k

【Family ties】
The Amatsurahashi family. Harsh in their ninja training, lax in their concept of what a man should be. Why you ask?

Mikoto's father died when he was 4 on the way to the hospital when Mikoto's sister was about to be born. Bawwww

So, Mikoto had to quickly grow up and become the man of the house and so, he had no time to have his lunch handed over to him by some guys who taught were better than him. Not to mention he had an example to set for his sister.

Amatsurahashi Haruka | Mother | 42, Kirigakure, Reitred Shinobi
Amatsurahashi Kanata | Sister | 16, Kirigakure, Shinobi, Chuunin

【Dreams and fears】
His dream is to see actual freedom. To be able to see what it truly means for a shinobi to be able to be free. He'd also like to learn how to play an instrument, ANY instrument. Is that a metaphor for peepee desperation?

His deepest and darkest fear is for all that is beautiful to him, including his family, to be taken away from him all at once. To leave him at the mercy of a world where nothing can no longer make him feel alive. Basically, being alive but dead inside is his biggest fear. He is so fucked.

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Combat reports.
Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.

【Fighting style】
Many describe Mikoto's fighting style as refined and entracing. They say it is like watching him dance instead of fighting. Still, Mikoto's taijutsu is deadly and precise. There is no wasted effort, no wasted moves. Everything is made to be a beautifully perfect fighting style for Mikoto. Sounds interesting.

Rhythm and tempo are the bases for his taijutsu style. He always tries to imitate a song playing inside his head as he fights, trying to match the timings of his strikes and the timing to avoid and counter-attack. Thanks to his being knowledgeable about several types of music, it is easy for him to change gears in the blink of an eye.

He tends to use bojutsu, a fighting style through the use of a staff, when he thinks taijutsu is no longer enough to defeat someone. He usually combines bojutsu with ninjutsu to make an even more lethal style. Interesting.

He is more of a physical fighter rather than using ninjutsu and genjutsu. His ninjutsu acts more as a support for his fighting style and he tries to avoid using genjutsu, mainly because it isn't his best subject.

His ninjutsu focuses on the use of water as a high speed waterjet to cut through things.

【Kekkei genkai, or bloodline limit】

Bloodline limit name:
Mizu Funsha (水噴射)

Description:
Mikoto's Kekkei Genkai allows him to use an special type of Water Release, the 'Water Release: High Speed Jet'. The Amatsurahashi in the past used this jutsu in their own hands to create high speed cuttings waterjets. They can cut through just about anything and thanks to their original water form, it cannot be broken. This is really weird. Okay that it pierces lots of stuff. But it sounds like the high pressure water move Tobirama used: naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Release:_W.. Except a bit cooler. Could it cut through almost anything except diamond or w/e? Eh, I'd say it REALLY depends on how much chakra and intensity you put in it. Tbh I'm not sure if I'd consider this a KG as much as a specific art in the usage of Water release.

When not active, the Kekkei Genkai manifests in the finger tips of the user as an slightly blue-ish tone. The more powerful the user is at handling their Kekkei Genkai, the larger the spot in their fingertips becomes, with the most elderly ones having their whole hands covered in blue. This isn't very relevant is it?

Strengths:
It can cut through just about anything, though not through diamond or crystal release jutsus. Refer to previous statement.

The only way to make it stop is for the user to deactivate it or to render the user unconscious, otherwise and thanks to its formless water state, it cannot be stopped, broken or otherwise. Wait, can't be stopped as it like can't be blocked? Because this technique can't last for super long if it cuts through anything. Can't be broken? Erm, if you meant its robust because chakra sure, but I'm sure someone with superior combat skill could. I need you to elaborate this a bit more really.

Weaknesses:
The use of this jutsu hurts the user as well, since they need to keep the jutsu coming out of their hands, which in turn cuts them as well. k

Using it in weapons is also not effective, since it will also wear the weapons down. k

Since it is a pretty aggressive and hurtful jutsu, even for its users, it is only a one time ace in the hole to be used in battles. How long does it last?

【Ninja techniques】

A rank techniques:
Water Release: High Speed Jet

B rank techniques:
Water Release: Water Beast k
Water Release: Hiding in Water Technique k

C rank techniques:
Water Release: Water Gun k
Water Release: Water Whip k
Water Clone Technique k

D-E rank techniques:
All basic Academy E ones.

【Custom made techniques】

Jutsu name:
Water Release: High Speed Jet

Rank:
A

Range:
Short Range, can only be use in hand-to-hand combat.

Description:
The user releases a high speed stream of water from their finger tips and envelops both of their hands in a water jet that can cut through just about anything.

This technique, however, is as harmful to the user as it is to their opponent, and can only be used once in a fight to avoid further damage to their hands and/or weapons. Refer to previous comments.

【Weaponry, tools and objects.】
Weapon Name:
Sonatta

Weapon, tool or object type:
Staff

Description:
A large white and black staff that is about the same height as Mikoto himself. It is made out of wood and has two metal plates at both of its ends, so it can withstand Mikoto's High Speed Jet Jutsu. Sounds cool!

Alright, your KG needs some specifications. That's the only real thing because of how extreme and vague it is. Seems promising otherwise.

@GrafRoy Zeppeli

@Blue Demon Seems all good to me. C:

Naruto: True Peace. [ALWAYS ACCEPTING] [Cool guys club inside]

@Blue Demon Medics are always a pain to build.

The Lightning Clone is fine as it is in A rank.

Naruto: True Peace. [ALWAYS ACCEPTING] [Cool guys club inside]

Too lazy to quote CS' like I do with Vuur. Gonna go normal for now.

@OneWayOut Okay going with your char first.

-History and Personality are great, nothing wrong there.

-KG seems balanced enough. I actually like it. Gives good synergy with the general kitty cat.

-For your A rank, just a precision. If there are toxins, I assume they just make the suffocating more unbearable, no super nasty surprise side effect you forgot to mention?

Yeah it's great otherwise. Approved.

@Blue Demon Okay your turn. C:

-Firey older sister is all good.

-For medic middle sis. To be honest I'd judge Mystical palm as something that can be gauged. A rank being perfect mastery, you can heal even a bite from a Walking Dead zombie. Yeah top tier. I suppose that's about right?
Poison mist is pretty nasty. Instant kill gasses are a no go. I heavily recommend having a different effect or simply nerfing it.
And yeah Game only moves should be custom. We're not fan of those.

-For tryhard younger sister. Okay the Body flicker thing won't do for all three of us you get the point.
Dendou Bakuhatsu no Jutsu (Electric Detonation Technique) - There's something called Lightning release clone that does that. It's A rank/ I assume the electrocution is much weaker?
Rest seems fine.

I don't know if I'm being a hardass, I'm mostly pointing out details because I'm a tryhard scrub. They're all good though so approved if you quickly address the dumb things I say. C: