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The OOC will be up soon, like, today soon!
@Buddha I'm at work you clinically retarded cuntwaffle. No skype here, even on break.

Yes, do it.
@Buddha It's ALWAYS for my pleasure.
@Buddha Yeah, I'm still going to give a thorough review. For that I need a history no matter which one.
@mochin Was going to review but I realized you're missing the history.

I only review complete CS'.
@Raijinslayer Yeah I'll check if everything is in order, I'm super tired right now.

Though Ryo brought something up: Charging Thunder Dragon Jutsu

You replaced a jutsu with this, which is fine and dandy, but next time warn us.

I'll let Ryo and/or Vuur handle your CS while I'm gone, I'll approve if it's all good.
@Superman Mostly dedicated weekend to getting some work stuff done plus completing a couple of things for the other RP I'm GMing. (I'm actually GMing two more RP's so I am taking on quite a load) But do not worry, I said in a few days, and it'll come shortly!
Review is in Green.

@Buddha@RyoRyoRyoken@SavatoDecided to forgo PM stuff because I simplified everything well enough. Most of it was just adding unneeded improtance to the Ryuuga clan. good
Here's my character, so have at him and I'll address all the concerns when I can. just something to I feel like I should mention, however, is that I originally planned to include the clan sheet with this, but right now, I just want to get the judging done with, plus I lack the time to write it in time because i'm going fishing and I ahve to meet up with people at 4 in the morning . . . and it's Midnight, so this'll be fun.



Most of it is fine. Check with the remarks I made on the jutsu and don't spam the custom bomb tags. Otherwise I'll have to ban some usage, and that'll be boring.

Approved when these are resolved.

@Grey It was cool, just a massive risk of Ayato and Hinami dying. Or Mougan and the bitch idk. I like Mougan, he looks fabulous.

The funny jailer is dead, boohoo. Father cunt is the boss of the clowns or something.

Yah p tame compared to main antag killing himself.
@Renny Most of it is fine, if issues come up ICly we can always deal with them accordingly case by case. Poison is always a bitch to deal with, yes.

But one thing bothers me: The clone jutsu. Basic kage bunshin is B rank. I've ranked Goo clones as B due to their more passive secondary effect. However your secondary effects allow them to use most jutsu in your arsenal PLUS deliver a rather game changing infection. I'd argue it to be A rank while the Sasori-tail rip-off would be B rank (I mentioned it'd be either high B or low A, so yeah treat it as a B rank technique in terms of strength if you go with this proposition).

I approve with this done.

Vuur will judge personality and all that BS.
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