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I think in at least another day. In the meantime I can drop this, pretty barebones discord let's be real. I've mainly been working on the main points of the story so it may seem quite slow for the time being.
@Vertigo That kind of thing is possible. The sand ships and boats already do something similar, so you'd just be using a much more compact version of the technology. How does the technology work you might be asking?

I... I don't know, I never thought about it, just that the thing exists.
Probably just my fault for not making an example character, which I will probably do, and make it for an NPC we will meet in Al-Marabar. Anyway...

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Probably best you just read what I just said about fighting style. Yours is pretty easy at least, it's kind of everything in a regular cowboy's skillset short of lassos and rifles. Everything else seems fine so far.
@EnkryptionMain Weapon and Secondary Weapon types have to be more specific. If melee, what class of melee weapon, and if ranged, what class of ranged weapon. Just to give an idea of some of the ranged weapon classes, here's a few; handguns, long rifles, bows, crossbows, heavy ordinance.

Since you've got a rail-shotgun that fires beanbags, you might as well be using a sniper rifle. So that'd be a long rifle.

Your fighting style should also be defined. I would like to note it doesn't have to encompass all your weapons, but if you can do it then go ahead. All you have there are the boons but not what the fighting style actually is.

Next is techniques. Shock and Awe is fine. Kirin's Eyes though, I wouldn't say are too powerful, because I can just slap a limit on it but it's just that clairvoyance is a whole other thing. Such precise clairvoyance even if it's just a dozen seconds into the future is pretty much in a different realm of power that she shouldn't have, even if it's via a curse from birth.

My suggestion if you want to keep an eye power, is that it's not her default state as described, but must be activated. The effect can be something like hyper-perception, where she can perceive incredible speeds, or... Something else if you have other ideas.

Ionizing Purity in a more practical sense would allow you to resist poison, you're free to add that if you like.

Anyhow, I do like a lot of the things here like the coven and such, it's actually not too far from what I'd consider a well-established coven seeped in tradition. My only note is that visions are rare, and masterless ones even rarer, as it's typical that a vision would disappear with the death of their user. And even if you found a masterless one, there's an incredibly slim chance it would resonate with a new user. So I actually suggest she had simply been granted one naturally via a pivotal point in her life.
I've added the playable races to the first post. Including their independents.

Just a reminder, the other 2 Independents are decided by me, based on your character's backstory and personality.

I also added a few more firearm-based technologies for those interested.
Then you're basically like 90% done because I actually decide the two other independents for you.

Anyway they're mostly done. I'll have them up later in the first post with all the races.
@Enkryption Almost done. It's been delayed because FFXIV.

Anyhow, depends. I suppose it comes down to shooting technique. Things lile stance, breathing, grip, and even cqc. Given it's a railgun, you might focus on accuracy and rely on landing the shots above all else.
That is a playable half race, so perfectly ok. They are a large stone-like people, so the parentage will be interesting. I'll leave that to you. You'll be a big guy but not as big, or as stony.
@Animal Why yes it is.

Still technically WIP but there's enough to start making a character. I will most likely make a discord for it when it's ready to climb out of interest check haha.

Which shouldn't be too long by the way.
Just the character sheet, at the moment I'm not sure what to do about Elemental Bursts, but it's probably not going to be a specific skill. Considering characters in this can get stronger and expand their skillset, Elemental Burst will most likely be a kind of "super" mechanic, turning one of your Elemental Techniques into a Burst, which is just a much more powerful version of it a limited number of times in battle.

Anyway. It's just a google document right now, but you can start reading it and working on it.

EDIT: Independents will come later, I realize I gotta make one for every race lol.
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