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@Kal-El

1. Well discharging it for punches and kicks is the primary reason for the whole quirk. Be honestly worthless without it. I can take out using it for far range attacks tho. Discharging in an explosive manner makes sense as in loss of.

I don't see why it would be worthless, but I get that you wanted kind of a melee hero that strikes with Lightning enhanced attacks. However, simply having electricity in your fists or kicks don't make them stronger, it take makes them a taser. If by "enhance" you meant exactly that, then no issue. If you also meant to upgrade the strength of, then the explanation of the Quirk is lacking. Regardless, it makes more sense if he learns to control it rather than start controlling it.

2. Never had the idea for him having an actual turbine on his body. Just another way his body processes air. As said power wouldnt work with an actual turbine on his body cause clothes.

If his body process air, then it's a mutation within a regular human body, agree? Because no one else can. Therefore, his Quirk is a Mutation type. If it was an emitter, he's just spew out electricity. Since it's a Mutation, there need to be an explanation as to how to body does it if he has no actual an easily identifiable way to show it. Noxious, the villain's leader, has Poisonous skin - although I didn't put it on the sheet, there's a biological reason for it. See what I mean? It's lacking in explanation. I need to know how it process the air, or at least how it transforms it into electricity.

3. Idk if im okay with Kaminari weakness of short circuiting the brain. Cause well powers arent the same technically. Prefer the weakness I placed.

It was an example from KoL.

Although I also think his drawback is too little to what potential he would have. Empowered melee attack, powerful AoE, Ranged attack versus limited energy. You go on about long lasting battles, but in MHA battles tend to be quite short compared to other stories of the same type. I'm ready to accept it, maybe, but under a watchful eye.

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@Kal-El Power is Ok with me, although I also agree that the Quirk feels more like Mutation than Emitter. The physical alterations don't need to be major. Something like Iida's engines can work fine, but I,d expect some fort of Turbines or something somewhere on his body.

@Weird Tales Accepted for me as well. Watch the mistakes, though. Take it from someone who also makes a bit too much. ^^''

@Spike Accepted, too. Watch the rust. :3

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@Spike I'll say the same thing as Windel about efforts. x) Quality over Quantity, as I said in the first OOC post, so I don't look at size much. Anyway, moving on.

Super Strength was a problem for me, but you seem to have edited it and now it's minor. So it's okay.

As for the weapon, I personally don't need to know where it came from or how he got it to eventually accept it, but it's true that it seems a bit random with he general theme. If he have a love-hate relationship with his Shark theme, you might want to write that down somewhere on his sheet. P.S; For a Shark, I would have imagined a Hammer as Weapon. Or a Saw. Or a Chainsaw. Because Hammerheads and Sawsharks. i know you wanted the Scissor theme, and I don't mind that you keep it if you can find a way to make the Scissors more relevant to the character.

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@Weird TalesI'm agreeing with what Windel said. He's too young, and the Quirk feels less like a MHA Quirk and more like a pure Werewolf. There needs to be modification in this sheet before it can be accepted. As Windel said, most Animal Quirks in MHA are perma-changed. *point to avatar*

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@Mangrale I dig. It has that MHA feel for me. Seems like you balanced it well, with lots of room for future improvement. I am not the hrash critic though. x) Wait for the other GMs to approve, then you're fine. :)

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Hero's Opening

All Might's appearance over in Japan sure didn't go unnoticed, as it created waves through the medias all the way back to the USA; and at U.S.J most of all. As a hero Academy founded by the number one hero himself, U.S.J was the target of media attention for a while after All Might joined U.A's teaching staff. A few weeks went by, however, and eventually things calmed down for the School and everything went back to normal.

By that time, the school's semester was at it's third week. U.S.J students did their tests, were accepted or refused, split into groups, met their classmates, homeroom teachers and got to studying. Up until now, except for a few physical tests and activities, the classes had mostly been academic. Today, at last, the class would be taken to one of the school's many complex for a proper, practical Hero training exercise. Real action.

By the beginning of the afternoon, they arrived.

The complex was a closed one, with a dome for a roof. It span the size of multiple football fields, but once the group was finally inside... it was completely empty. A whole lot of space, nothing more. Ignoring the puzzled looks on the faces of his students, Mr. Hayes - Class A's Teacher - turned away from the students.

Mr. Hayes was a very serious looking man. Most of the time he would be seen wearing clean, but comfortable three piece suits complete with tie. The only part of his appearance that could be considered less groomed was his constant look of tiredness and boredom, which might have off put students at more than one occasion. Hayes was known to be dedicated to his students, but he had a tendency to approach teaching with a very disciplined approach. For this, he was nicknamed 'Redcoat' by students before, teasing at his near-obsession with discipline, and his English origins.

"Everyone gather." he said without looking back at his class. As he did so, Hayes walked over to a lone console close by the entrance, working on it a bit before finally facing his students.

♫

"Welcome to your first U.S.J Hero Combat Practice. This place is simply called the Sheltered Training Area, or STA. Now, this might not be the only existing building of the type; but it might just be the more advanced." and with the click of a final button, the ground over by the large, empty space began to open and, slowly, the life-size replica of a city the size of a few blocks, at least, rose from the ground.

"Today's training will consist of both combat and rescue. When the timer starts, everywhere inside that training area will appear various different objectives such as; fires; robberies, traffic accidents and villains. All victims and enemies will be represented by various robots. You are all expected to stop and solve as many of these incidents as possible in the given time limit, while causing as little destruction and saving as many lives as possible. How you do so depend entirely on you."

Hayes raised his arm, holding a command of some sort, and pressed a single button on it in the direction of the city. Immediately, noises of explosions, cars crash and general chaos could be heard coming from the fictive streets. A large screen in the middle of the ceiling of the complex, facing four directions, displayed a timer: 20 Minutes.

Such events most often struck at random time, giving pro heroes minimum time to react or plan to them, after all. "Good Luck."

Villain's Starter

Alcatraz; a now completely abandoned building, more than half of it reclaimed by the rising waters of San Francisco Bay. Rather, almost completely abandoned. With a little ingenuity, funds and manpower the few remaining chambers were turned into the perfect hideout for the branch of the League of Villains operating in San Francisco. To be more precise, the branch that will be operating.

Picture; a room with a long table in the center and a few chairs scattered about. Lit only by a few light sources on the ground, their wires running to the many generators laying about. At one end of the table, an amalgam of screens, keyboards and computers forming one big console, papers scattered across it. On the papers were profile of certain individuals. Individuals which had been invited at this very location, at this very moment. A meeting which would be hosted by the presently only present member of the league.

Sat on the chair as the end of the table was a woman. She had long, dyed purple hair and deep purple eyes you could lose yourself into. Her skin was extremely pale, yet she did not look sick. At most, she had a lazy, but serious, look about her. Dressed in loose clothing and wearing a hood, the most prominent feature about her was the gas mask she was wearing. The woman seemed to be contemplating a potted plant which was laid on the table. Removing one of her glove, she gently ran her fingers across the bulb of the flower, and down the plant's body all the way to the tip of a leaf. Slightly following the movement of her fingers was a change of colour in the plant pigment, followed by it's swift death. Putting the glove back on, the woman brought both of her feet onto the table, kicking the pot away in the same movement, sending it crashing down on the floor.

It was about time everyone arrived.

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@slackpack @Mangrale

Are you two still with us, working on characters? :)

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No. I am working on the IC first post. I'll accept others if others join, but we don't need 20. :)

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@LuckyBlackCat Fine with me. :P Poor Freya.

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@McFazzer Accepted from me. Pretty sure KoL and Windel will too, but I still have to mention waiting on them. :P