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No. I am working on the IC first post. I'll accept others if others join, but we don't need 20. :)
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@slackpack @Mangrale

Are you two still with us, working on characters? :)
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Yes, and in earnest as of late. I should have something by tomorrow.
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I finally finished my CS

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@Spike

Before you finish your CS be aware that that Quirk isn't a quirk at all. People can't simply create objects out of thin air, even Momo whose sole ability was creating stuff had to "pay" something (body fat) for her creations.

Furthermore, a quirk should have one function and one function only. Whether or not you can use it for other (related) gimmicks, depends on each character's ability. I can accept he dividing his weapons (after an explanation on how he creates them in the first place), but not the power nullification part. It makes so sense at all that a creation quirk would be able to do that.

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Denied.

There's just too much wrong with that CS for me to bother to elaborate. Just know that this idea won't work here.

Do something else if you still wanna play. Period.
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@Spike

Before you finish your CS be aware that that Quirk isn't a quirk at all. People can't simply create objects out of thin air, even Momo whose sole ability was creating stuff had to "pay" something (body fat) for her creations.

Furthermore, a quirk should have one function and one function only. Whether or not you can use it for other (related) gimmicks, depends on each character's ability. I can accept he dividing his weapons (after an explanation on how he creates them in the first place), but not the power nullification part. It makes so sense at all that a creation quirk would be able to do that.


Fair enough. Mm I'll make it so that he can like unfold them from maybe his arm then. I can ditch the nullification too, sure.
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I most assuredly want to continue working on the sample post, so this is technically a WIP. But at the same time, I may have plenty more time on my hands if the rest of it isn't accepted, so I'd appreciate knowing one way or another. If it is, I still won't put it in the CS tab until it's actually finished.

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@Mangrale I dig. It has that MHA feel for me. Seems like you balanced it well, with lots of room for future improvement. I am not the hrash critic though. x) Wait for the other GMs to approve, then you're fine. :)
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Your ideas for quirk and gear are ok, if that's what you want to know.

Also, you are going to get a free star for allowing me to learn how to do something I've been thinking about for months/years that's working with these god forsaken BBCode tables.
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As long as you don't look at it on your phone. Then the Quirk Description gets cut off half way over the edge of the hider.
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@Weird Tales

To be specific; if he's going to be attending the hero academy, he needs to be older. Furthermore, your Quirk is doing too much, especially for a Transformation Quirk. If you want to have the full advantages of being a wolf, then just have his Quirk be a Mutant wolf Quirk, in which he's a wolf all the time. Furthermore, I don't see how him being berserk fits with an animal Quirk, as most if not all people with animal Quirks have control over it. That, and I don't see many ways he can grow and improve his Quirk aside from controlling his berserk nature.

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I'll wait for your edit changes before looking at your CS.

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So far she's fine by me.
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@KoL ouch
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@Weird TalesI'm agreeing with what Windel said. He's too young, and the Quirk feels less like a MHA Quirk and more like a pure Werewolf. There needs to be modification in this sheet before it can be accepted. As Windel said, most Animal Quirks in MHA are perma-changed. *point to avatar*
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@Weird TalesI'm agreeing with what Windel said. He's too young, and the Quirk feels less like a MHA Quirk and more like a pure Werewolf. There needs to be modification in this sheet before it can be accepted. As Windel said, most Animal Quirks in MHA are perma-changed. *point to avatar*


What age? There wasn't any specific in the cs
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@Weird Tales

It's an MHA RP. IE, high school for heroes. Your character was a few years too young for the setting alongside a power that doesn't suit the setting as it was.
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@Spike

Quirk-wise, he's fine. Super strength for a shark is iffy but seeing as you don't go in-depth with it, I suppose it's fine. As for his weapon, I'm willing to accept it if you can explain to me what it has to do with his shark theme. Finally, the sample post is fine enough. I know the quality of writing you can and have produced so I'll only say this now; put as much effort as you can when concerning IC posts.
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@Spike

Quirk-wise, he's fine. Super strength for a shark is iffy but seeing as you don't go in-depth with it, I suppose it's fine. As for his weapon, I'm willing to accept it if you can explain to me what it has to do with his shark theme. Finally, the sample post is fine enough. I know the quality of writing you can and have produced so I'll only say this now; put as much effort as you can when concerning IC posts.


Ah thank you. Mmm the strength is mostly a growth option. For now he's capable of more than the average person but he's not going to the Olympics or anything. My thinking is most of his training is martial arts stuff. If he started body building with like protein and weights he could eventually get to a notch or two above what is normally possible for humans, but it would take at least a year or two.

Mmm does as for the weapon need to have something to do with his shark thing? Ryan probably isn't the type to go around biting people most of the time so I figured he'd need a weapon. I don't think that Ryan is really the type to adhere to a theme, he's got a love-hate relationship with his sharky side. He needed a weapon and he started looking for them online and saw this Etsy store with a lot of crazy weapons and that's what he spent his tax return on. OOC I just really like the imagery of a dude with a giant pair of scissors that he can kinda transform. Mmm if it's really necessary I dunno maybe I could give him a chainsaw or make the blades serrated or something? That has "teeth." Or like I dunno he could maybe paint some sharks on it?
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@Spike

The weapon doesn't have to be shark-themed. But it sounds like you just wanted the scissors to be random. Seeing as he's a villain, I suppose this can slip by since he is being chaotic.
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