Could chat it up with Zhevon, he's a swordsman and likes swords. Agony the Frostblade would certainly be a point of discussion for him. As soon as he gets back into the safehouse that is, right now he's still outside standing by a recently patched up Cath and the Magos.
He felt a tug on his sleeve, looking back towards Cath, he found that she had moved. "You are the inquisitor!? Why did you send me here…" She managed to say, getting weaker. Zhevon grabbed her shoulders and helped her lay back down, "I didn't, but I'll figure what happened." He assured her, he turned back to Lilith. “Of course I put those melta bombs there! I was assigned to demolish that building and the cult inside - nobody thought to tell me of the Inquisition being here! I just sort of happened along Aviza, killed a bunch of guards, et-cetera. Would’ve been much more convenient if I knew there was artillery support available, I wouldn’t have had to sneak around that mansion for days and carry around all those explosives.” She went on, explaining her situation. "Mm, yes. If I had known there were allies in the area I would have contacted them. There was a failure of communication, and I apologize. I should have checked." He apologized, rubbing the side of his chin, checking back on Cath. “Is she…? She looks rather eh…” "Incapacitated." He finished her thought, "She probably needs a medic." Lilith looked back at Zhevon, “While I’m here, is there anything you need? You seem… rather reason compared to ah, your compatriots, shall we say?” He rubbed the back of his neck, "Some of them are rather passionate." He admitted, glancing down at the ground, "If you could quickly inspect these two vehicles, to check if they're clean or not, I would be greatly appreciative."
He looked over her shoulder and noticed Magos Natta approaching. "I hope that I am not interrupting, but the wounded within this transport appears to be perspiring, perhaps I might be of some assistance in this instance?" The Magos asked plainly. Stukov had then finished patching himself up, presumably, and had come back. Stukov spoke, Zhevon finding himself agreeing more or less with his orders. Stukov would certainly make a capable second in command. Zhevon put the note in the back of his mind. As the Magos worked on Cath, Zhevon looked on in curiosity, the man had little interest in becoming a doctor or medic but the actual process involved in healing was interesting. Once he seemingly finished, he spoke up. “My work would be more precise with a better environment; we must move her carefully to a more acceptable location.” Zhevon looked at Stukov, and then the Magos, "...Well that's better than what I ever could have done." He remarked, "Agreed, Magos Natta. We could use the makeshift stretcher I acquired earlier. It's... Basically a door, to move her into the safehouse. There should be a table or two there suitable enough for you to work with."
Cath turned her head to Zhevon, “If you are the inquisitor who's send me here... then my equipment shouldn't be too far. They told me everything I wanted will be send over to your location in the unlikely case I survive and am extracted... I have a sword in it... I don't care about anything else, but the chainsaber. It's a battle trophy from my first battle...” Zhevon nodded to her request, a package of... Stuff, containing a chainsaber, "Don't worry, I'll send one of my most trusted to retrieve your saber. Focus on recovering for now." He assured. He took out a communicator and sent a message, "He's already on it."
I imagine pretty much all of the party are here at the Inquisitor's request, either directly or indirectly :P Unless Zhevon has any rivals in the hierarchy that just want to mess with him and therefore assigns random dudes to him!
very possible EDIT: i mean perhaps
<Snipped quote by Rithy> I blame that lady inquisitor that Zhevon keeps making mention of but is oddly absent, as of right now >_>
maybe
--
Also @Natsucooldude and @Lunar try and write a little bit more? Writing more gives others more to go on, and then they'll write more content, giving you more to go on. It's kinda like a scratch my back I'll scratch yours sort of thing, and no need to worry about speed of posts, we're pretty slow on posting speed so take your time and try to write more. If you're not used to writing as much as the others, you don't have to do it immediately. Just do your best to improve, yeah? Sometimes I know that shorter posts are unavoidable, but try not to make shorter posts a common thing.
Ok @Skyrte I think I fixed it --------------------------------------
Name: Ansiel Fas
Nickname: House of cards (this nickname is ironic. She gained it because the other marines said if she was a house of cards you still couldn't knock her down and also because of her armor's color scheme)
Age: 24
Class: Adepta Sororitas
Equipment:
-Plasma gun she gained from her battle with the necron that she later painted Black with a blood red trim.
-Two modified bolters with increased magazine and fire rate. They were given to her as a gift from her old commander as he was dying that she later painted black with a blood read trim.
-A custom frost blade that is named Agony and is completely redesigned using sister of battle decorations for the handle. When turned on it's blades generate heat and become super heated which allows it cut through even heavier armor. It is made of a hardened material to combat the heat and to keep it from melting and destroying itself. It is painted Black with a blood red trim.
-A set of sisters power armor with the right arm and left leg painted blood red and the rest is painted black.
-4x krak grenade.
Notable Deeds:
-[battle of Tyranids] Ansiel has Ben in countless battles and has killed many enemies throughout them, but on one occasion the squad she had been fighting a horde of tyranadid's and her team had fallen and she was the only one left, that's when a large tyrandid attacked her. She had held it off with her bolters. And finally killed it with a shot to the head with one of her comrades plasma guns.
-[the day the field stood still] In a valley her squad and her commander were stationed in a camp surveying the area, there had been sittings in the area and they were sent to cherch it out. They were in camp when they were attacked by heretics. They had killed most of her squad, but a few managed to escape, but her commander and another soldier were shot and bleeding out, she managed to well, play dead if you will. That's when her commander gave her the bolters before he died. She put them both in hand and said "let the purging begin" as she flanked and shot the heretics down.
-[it was worth it] Anisel tended to well, flirt... With the other sisters of war which most of the time got her in trouble. Every time she did this they would up the punishment. It started run three miles and after a short while it became do 1,000 push-ups. Getting wors every time she still didn't stop, she had to much pride. She would endure rp the punishments knowing all it would do is make her stronger. And she still does it to this very day.
-[play ball] Once in the field she had Ben battling Orcs. After killing many of them and them killing many of her comrades it seemed one is f them got ahold of a crack grenade. When Anisel saw it grabbing it off of a fallen marine she pulled a metal pole out of the ground and prepared to swing. When the Orc threw the grenade she hit it back at it with a satisfying *tink* then a loud *boom* as she saw Orc giblets fly toward her. She had read about an old sport called base ball in a book once and she remembered something they said after they hit the ball with the pole. She said "Home run" making herself laugh.
-[the spoils of war Anisel was traveling with her squad over an old war zone and she spotted a long dead marine with a snow blade sticking out of his chest, Emperor knows how it got there. So when her squad moved a little further she stayed behind and recovered the sword "no point it letting it sit there" she said to herself as she pulled it out and cought up with her squad. Once back at base she almost completely redesigned it. She completely reforged the blade in a stronger alloy with realy high melting temperatures but kept the teeth for the saw part. Then she added a superheating mechanism to it to cut heavier armor, she redid the handle with decorations and straps that resembled the sisters of war and fitted a tiny metal skull as the butt and the sword turned out awesome. She liked to think of herself as handy.
Time with Inquisitor: two years
Appearance:
White hair, pale skin, deep blue eyes, 5'6, 126 pounds without equipment, even though she has seen many battles and has been in many life or death situations she still seems happy and a little cute. Her right arm and left leg of armor is painted a silvery blue.
40K Knowledge Question: how did necrons come to be?
Looks good, the only gripe I have is the reforging of the Frostblade. The modifying of a perfectly good Frostblade pains me physically, but otherwise everything is A-OK. It's just a personal little thing I have. No need to change your sheet if you don't want to. You can move it into the Character Tab and introduce yourself into the IC.
Well, I was gonna see if this was just made but, you guys got some miles.
Yes, we have miles.
I changed my cs a little bit, hope you don't mind... She really likes the color of silver blue °~°
After some discussion, here's some other stuff. Perhaps change the two Inferno-Pistols to something less powerful? Bolt Pistols maybe? Inferno Pistols are sort of like this, think of it like End-Game legendary gear, and we're still in Chapter 1 of the RP. Gear Progression is something that I encourage, and starting with the best stuff isn't that fair to the others, nor is it that amusing when you can just speedrun through a column of tanks and kill all of them because you're dual wielding two anti-tank weapons in pistol form.
The nickname isn't exactly necessary, but if you do have one that isn't a bastardization of the characters full name, how did the character get the nickname?
You could also beef up the Notable Deeds. It's your chance to show off what sort of character your character is. Which is primarily why we don't have a personality section. I think that was the reason.
I'm new to 40k and I don't know if my cs has enough meat, so I'm sorry if I'm not to experienced with the lore and such and I hope I can still join
Name: Ansiel Fas
Age: 23
Class: Assault
Equipment : Plasma gun, two inferno pistols, chain sword, Mk VIII Errant Armour, 4x krak grenade, jump pack
Notable Deeds: has killed a large necron solo. Has Ben through many battles but still seemes "happy"
Time with Inquisitor: five years
Appearance:
red hair, right arm and left leg is painted orange.
40K Knowledge Question: how did necrons come to be?
Sure, you can join, although your sheet will need some tweaking up. I also recommend brushing up on 40k lore, which is extremely expansive and almost unending. The links below go to the Lexicanum.
It seems like your character is a Sister of Battle/Adepta Sororitas , they don't have Mk8 Errant Power Armor, those are for Space Marines/Adeptus Astartes. They use their own series of power armor, linked here.
Inferno Pistols are extremely rare weapons, having two is nothing to scoff at. Perhaps the reason why your character has two of these weapons, when there are only a few in each sector of space, could be put in your Notable Deeds.
Like Monochromatic said, reading some of the other character sheets in the character tab is a good way of getting a feel of what kind of sheets we're looking for. Aside from that reading up on pages in the Lexicanum is a good way of finding inspiration, understanding the universe, and knowing generally who has what and who can do what.
