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Deadland Wasteland: The Beginning

@Yunagi
Edit: Probably should clean up the top a bit

Zornitsa

Edit2: Cleaned it up just a tad

Deadland Wasteland: The Beginning

@Caits Glad I could be of assitance m'lady *tips hat*

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@Caits I do my best dear. You are very welcome.

If anybody needs edits I'm sorta handy. Scars are a pain in the ass but eyes, freckles, and other blemishes are easy. Just ask and you shall receive. I can also do a handful of other things.

Deadland Wasteland: The Beginning

@Caits I did the best with my meager skills, but this is for you.

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@Caits Welcome aboard, post her into the characters tab =)

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@ChaoticFox Sounds good.

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@DeprivedOfWords The problem I'm having here is Felicity is too "well-rounded", and that doesn't make her interesting. a rough-and-tough protester girl, who I would expect to be armed like she is, but you turn around and give her cooking, thieving, and charisma... and.. somehow, excellent vision despite missing an eye? It feels like you just picked the best traits you could. Despite being a heavily armed bruiser with a high pain tolerance, and "use to barreling through people who don't give her enough space" she's also very quick and agile?

I'm sorry but I this isn't the kind of place for "Action Heroes".

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@Yunagi Not long winded at all. I enjoyed reading it myself, I wonder who her "benefactor" is. *taps chin* hhmm.

@Caits No worries, just clean it up and I'll take a look at it again.

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@Caits inventory needs alitt organizing (use mine for reference) and I would like a little more detail on how she came to be an expert at hand-to-hand, and a profcient marksman while balancing school and a life.

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@Caits No sweat, that's fine.

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