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@Kage: Yep. With that, he's accepted!
@Kage: He looks good to me for the most part. However, while I don't have a problem with the old fashioned clothing and don't mind there being a place where it's considered normal, I'd prefer if it wasn't an entire country.

@Peach: That's fine.
@Diggerton: I can't think of any changes that would be totally necessary. Although I will say I find it a little comical just how many characters have dead/missing fathers.

@Zombehs: Should still be fine. Accepted.
Sorry, but those changes really aren't much better. Honestly, I'd recommend removing the whole "got knocked out and was pregnant when she woke up" bit and going with one of the suggestions people have made. Have her get seduced (not just knocked out repeatedly until she decides she likes it), get pregnant (without the aid of getting knocked out) and then have the father abandon her afterwards.

Also I feel I should point out that "those that requested them" is literally everyone else in the thread except for one person who hasn't said anything on the subject. It's not like it's just a vocal minority complaining about it.

And honestly, "he doesn't enjoy beating people up and breaking things, he enjoys hanging out with his gang, it's just that they enjoy beating people up and breaking things" doesn't make me think any better of that part of the profile. And honestly, the whole "leader of the notorious biker gang" bit is probably going to make most interaction not work.
@Dead Cruiser: Okay, there are some things about this profile that I'm a little concerned about. Firstly, while I'm not going to say there's no way for a delinquent character to work, someone whose main sources of enjoyment include beating people up and breaking people's stuff who doesn't get along with anyone outside of his gang doesn't seem like it would fit in this RP.

Secondly, I don't like the idea of shinigami being invisible rape ghosts. In part because that basically shuts them out if anyone wanted to play one, but mostly because I just find the idea really disturbing.

@Roxas: Accepted!
Looks good to me. Accepted!
The city of Shinkawa is located on the western coast of the main island of Himoto. To the east of Shinkawa lies the Inoue forest, which is home to a variety of flora and fauna. Mount Tomari to the south-east is the tallest mountain in Himoto, making it a popular destination for hikers from across the country. As for the town itself, its architecture is generally fairly modern, aside from a few streets of more traditional buildings around the Shinkawa Shrine, a large Shinto shrine on the northern end.

The town's main attractions include its beautiful beaches, a number of cafés and restaurants, including the Budou café, where the staff's uniforms tend to resemble typical maid or butler outfits and famous Ravissant patisserie, which is known for both the incredible quality of its products and the fact that its owner and head chef was once a powerful monster hunter, Izumi-san's Funland, an amusement park with a variety of rides and the Shinkawa shrine itself.

Though there are options for those seeking adventure. Monster dens, mysterious locations that dot the planet and contain...well, monsters. Their occupants seem to "respawn" when left alone, though neither science nor magic can explain why this happens. The creatures in these dens range from dangerous beasts that must be killed to cute things some people will pay for as pets to delicious ingredients which high-quality restaurants will give top dollar for. It's worth noting however that no matter how long they're left, the monsters rarely, if ever leave their dens and have never attacked a built-up city.

The area around Shinkawa contains several of these dens, with monsters sighted deep within the Inoue forest, in caves on and around Mount Tomari and in the waters around the small island of Akugashima, roughly half a kilometre off the coast.
So, yeah, basically this is going to be a fantasy sandbox RP set in the city of Shinkawa in the Japan-analogue country of Himoto. There's not really going to be much of an overarching plot, although player created plots or events are encouraged. Tone-wise, I'm aiming for something light-hearted for the most part.

Oh, and VitaVitaAR will be helping me out with GMing.
A couple of notes:

- The standard fantasy races are present and player-created races can be submitted. Just don't go too crazy. If your race is basically kryptonians or something similarly godlike, they probably won't get in. Also, I'd prefer if we could avoid having any sapient races that are always evil.
- Mages don't have a monopoly on logic-defying craziness. Ki attacks, destructive shockwaves or beams from swinging a sword and the like are all acceptable.
- Keep the tone in mind. While serious plots are fine with me, I don't want things going too grimdark.
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Name: Vampires
Description: Vampires are fearsome creatures of the night that turn those they drink the blood of into their slaves...Except when they don't. The actual traits of a vampire vary greatly from case to case. Some turn others simply by drinking their blood, others need to feed the target some of their own and others still are completely incapable of siring new vampires. Some burst into flames when exposed to sunlight while some just get exhausted or sunburnt quickly. Of all the traits commonly associated with them, the only one that seems to be consistent is a need to drink blood to survive.
I'm sorry to say, but it's becoming increasingly clear that people have misunderstood the premise and intended tone of this and honestly, I'm struggling to write anything with people wanting something so different to what this was meant to be. As such, I'm going to have to call the RP off.
You mean the weapon belonging to a character that we didn't get around to actually giving feedback on because the player left?
Sorry, been kind of busy the past couple of days. I'm going to try to get the IC out some time this weekend.
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