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You said I shouldn't change the post?(considering the reasons that I should)


Well, you could possibly alter the ending that Mishka is no longer floating or anything like that, else we'll probably be stuck for atleast two posts with Mishka not being able to do anything except for floating and getting more upset... :P

If you want to alter the post then that's fine by me, no one responded to it yet anyway. But dont feel forced to do so, alright? :)
I pretty much agree with DFTBA. Godmodding is basically performing actions without taking into consideration how someone else would react or ignoring basic things. Like you did 2 small cases of godmodding imo. One was lifting up Mishka without allowing me the opportunity to counter it and the other one was you overpowering Mishka and freeing Graham, again without allowing me to react.

Tbh I wouldnt have minded that much if you had informed me in advance. It are both really small examples and it's not like what just happened would have really ended in a different result. But there are some other problems I have with the post though...

One is that you lift a person. Not specifically Mishka but just being able to do that. For balancing I would preffer you wouldnt do that. Yes, technically the CS states that you can lift objects and technically people are objects. But lifting up people is kind of OP. As it renders Melee characters totally useless and gives them no way at all to fight you. We have already turned down several characters because of this power. We probably just missed it in your CS.

The other problem I have is that your character was able to overpower a character based on strength. Considering that your character already has a broad array of powers including air manipulation, levitation, flight and construct creation, having the ability to actually overpower strength based characters like you just did is abit much doncha think?

Sorry for the long reply, just some things I was thinking about. Also, this was not a rant. I'm not upset or anything but I'd like to appologise if I came across as aggressive or condesending, that was not my intention.

If you dont agree with the points I mentioned then please tell me. I'm not a totally unreasonable person... Not completely atleast :P

Edit: Also, I am not demanding for you to change the post. Just to take it into consideration in the futute :)
Alright, I got one character's post up, the rest I'll do tomorrow. I'm really exhausted (This could be why the post might be abit too violent or something) and need to get up early tomorrow.

Cya guys tomorrow.
-Mishka Demidov-


Mishka continued grinning at the little guy as he was practically begging for his life. It was funny considering she had no intention of hurting him. Well, not physically atleast. She wasnt that mean. Atleast, not always. Wait, was he actually praying. Now that's just sad. Mishka looked around and saw that they were gathering a small crowd. What? Were they expecting a fight or something? She was not going to harm this little guy, she wasnt a schoolyard bully... The only thing she wanted from him was just an appology... Okay she might have been teasing him a tiny bit and-

Suddenly a loud crack was heard. Luckily for Graham Mishka wasnt phased at all by the loud noise. This meant that Graham would be able to pray to his gods another day.

Apparently the cause of the loud sound was a teacher, the teacher for Mishka's first class. He didnt seem to pleased with her holding Graham like this. He too thought that they were fighting. Mishka looked at him in a slightly disinterested fashion as she sighed, still lifting Graham. "I know that fighting is not allowed sir and so we are not fighting. I am just asking for an appology and decided to lift him up so we could talk face-to-face. Nothing wrong with that is the-"

This was ofcourse the moment where Graham decided to open his mouth and make a comment about Mishka's Russian roots. Now, dont get me wrong, Mishka was quite patriotic about her country. She was not ashamed to come from the Russian Motherland, infact, she was proud of it. But the way Graham replied made it almost sound like he was mocking her, mocking Mother Russia.

Even as Graham was claiming that he didnt mean it like that, Mishka just froze for a moment, almost as if she wasnt really able to process that comment. Her grip on Graham's head, which had been gentle up until now, tightened. After a few seconds she slowly turned her head to Graham, her eyes which were first filled with a mischievous shine were now hollow. If looks could kill, this one would have the effect of a tactical nuke.

She blinked several times and started grinning. This grin seemed far more sinister then the one she had before. "I beg your pardon?" was all she would say to him. Internally Mishka knew that this would not solve the problem. Hell, she knew she overreacted. But somehow she lost control over her actions.

And deep down, she kind of liked it too.
Good afternoon everyone. How are y'all doing on this great monday...burn it with fire!
Sorry for the double post... but I'm heading off.

Work on your posts people and cya guys tomorrow or at a later date :)

Goodnight!
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You do make a valid point with the noise bit. I did that because Geoff isn't really someone who'd raise his voice over the crowd.


Well, luckily it wont really impact her all that much so Graham's neck is safe...

Well, as safe as it can be in the hands of someone like her...

I would also like to emphasis that she is not choking him. She just lifted him up by grabbing him just below the back of his head. Just wanted to say that incase there was any confusion :)
XD She picked up a student outside of the classrooms!? What is a responsible teacher supposed to do? (Looking at Meredith)


Although a responsible teacher would break up a fight... this wasnt really a fight. :P

Plus, making a loud entrance is probably not the best way of dealing with this particular incident. Imagine if the loud noise starteled Mishka, then Graham's neck would probably have some problems :P

And ye I know... Teachers gotta interfere :P
Damn you @Melkor! Why you gotta be such a party pooper :|
-Mishka Demidov-


These damn hallways, they're way too narrow. There was barely any room to manoeuvre for normal sized students so you'd think that bigger people would have a really hard time navigating through the small corridors. Although Mishka did have some people bumping into her, most people moved aside. Just imagine that you're walking in the same hallway and suddenly you see a person walking towards you who's one or two heads taller, has a very broad built and seems to be in a slight hurry. Would you continue on your same path and hope the other person steps aside? Yeah, not really would you?

Still, the people bumping into her were getting quite annoying. She did her best not to accidentilly push people but it didnt seem other people tried nearly as much. Seriously, if one more person were to bump into her she'd make him regret it. Mishka was close to her classroom. Atleast, if she remembered the school layout correctly. So now just around this corner here an-

Then she got bumped into.

Mishka let out a low growl as she shot an annoyed glare at the malefactor. He was rather small and looked abit frail. He also seemed really pale, but she couldnt figure out if that was his natural complexion or just because he didnt really react well with how she looked. He seemed to be in some sort of shock as he didnt move any part of his body and all he did was just stare at her. Seeing him like this almost made her pity him... Almost. But this was too great an oppurtunity for some fun to pass up.

Mishka looked down at the small guy and a grin fromed on her face. "Well well, what do we have here? She said in a playful tone. Mishka frowned, "Dont you know that it's rude to suddenly bump into people?" Mishka leaned forward and grabbed the boy by the back of his neck as gently as she could and raised him up to her eyelevel so they could talk "face to face". "I think you owe me an appology, dont you think?" she said as she was still grinning at him, quickly followed by a chuckle.




-Anouk Dijkstra-


Wow, her roommate was in a hurry. First she got up out of her bed and then she got her clothes while also making up her bed and... Hang on a second. A few seconds ago she only had one roommate and now she had one, two, three roommates! They were all running around and being quite chaotic. It took Anouk a couple of seconds to realise what was going on. This wasnt possible was it? Euhm... Ooh right, super hero school... Derp. Ofcourse this must have been the girl's power... And it was awesome! Like, you could do so much with this... Anouk, get back on track!

Yes euhm... Speaking about school, Anouk had the feeling she was kind of forgetting something... Important. As Tabitha was introducing herself the penny dropped. Ooh yes, school has classes and her classes start in... Ooh crap. As Tabitha was just finishing Anouk held her hands in the air and started smilling. "Hang-on-be-right-back-k?" she said really fast.

Without waiting for a response she ran to her bags and pulled out some random pieces of clothing. She quickly ran into the bathroom and started dressing, brushing her teeth and styling her hair. As she walked out of the bathroom she changed into a AC/DC crop top, a skirt reaching to mid-thigh level with a Scottish kilt motif on it, wore a pair of black boots with red laces and she had her hair modeled into her mohawk. All done in the space of 20 seconds. She could have been faster but the hair wasnt really cooperating.

As she ran out she grabbed her bag and hoped it would have the right books in them. She then stopped right in front of Tabitha with her hand streched out. "Pleased-to-meet-you-Tabitha!-My-name's-Anouk." She shaked her head a little bit. "Sorrry... I tend to talk abit fast when I'm excited!" She was rubbing her legs against eachother which made her look as if she really needed to go to the toilet, but that was just her being excited.

"Let's be friends, k?"
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