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@TheRpgGamer: ...I'm going to be honest, I can't accept the CS as it is right now. To put simply as to why: The Personality's not exactly detailed, and doesn't really fit the Hanged Man Arcana that well, the Grammar needs to be properly fixed, the two attacks besides Maragi, while are SMT abilities, aren't abilities from Persona, and needs to be changed, (Here's the lists of skills from Persona 3 and Persona 4 to help you out.) and Unless cooking is a MAJOR aspect of his life, the character relevance can't work well.

Ok i edited the CS and change his arcana and persona and thank you for that moves list I was currently playing Devil Survivor 2 that's why Weak Kill and Fire Dance there
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Name: Kouichi Kihara

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Attire: he is not choosy with clothes as long as it fits his style.
Arcana: Hermit

Weapon: Scythe

Personality: Kouichi often has his head in the clouds and can make light of serious situations. He's laid back and lazy, however he will come to someone's aid when he sees them in trouble. Despite his outer expression, he seems to have a surprising amount of wisdom and insight.

Theme Song: Devil Survivor 2 Opening - Take Your Way by Livetune

Devil Survivor 2 Ending - Be by Song Riders

Persona:

Persona Name: Kapre
Kapre is a philippine mythological creature.He is a bigfoot but he lives in the forest.Kapre likes to smoke a cigar and stays in one place

Persona Appearance:http://cryptidz.wikia.com/wiki/Kapre

Persona Skills:Agi,Swift Strike,Bash

Physical -Strong
Fire - Reflect
Ice - Weakness
Wind - Neutral
Lightning - Neutral
Darkness - Neutral
Light - Neutral

Character Relevance: Kapre is very lazy like Kouichi because he just stays in one place smoking his cigar to scare people
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To put it simply, a lot. Wonderland looks much like it does in the story, and has the same landmarks and as you can see from the Neo-Shadows, it also has almost the entire roster of main characters from the A/W stories. Plus you won't be able to leave Wonderland...At least not yet. There is a hub here to use as a safe haven or a place to plan out the next moves.

There will still be character development, Personae, and the aspects of battle and of Shadows and Personae, and the fusion process. But there will be no calendar system and no Social Linking. On the plus side, It means you're not limited to one character-per-arcana.

Also, I updated the rules.

@ RPG Gamer: ...Well, it's a step in the right direction, though you could have just edited your first profile. But what bothers me now is that you seem to be finding an Arcana first, and then making a personality out of it. I personally suggest doing it the other way around: Make a personality first and then finding arcana that fits it. Otherwise it becomes a bland personality that exists solely for the purpose of fitting an arcana, the Devil in this case. Incubus is more buy-able a Persona then Nizroc was, but again, it's there because it's a devil. You also still need to work on that grammar of yours, and Agilao's a step too big in the level of elemental spells.
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Alright. I added my weapon choice and i think that was it. I figured since I wasn't sleeping yet I might as well lol. I think that's it Red. Let me know if anything else I may have forgotten is needed lol. Now I go off to bed XD
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edited it again if it's declined again i am not gonna force myself to join the RP and I am still finding what arcana he belongs to

EDIT: Now I need help for finding the arcana that suits him
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Alright, at least you've shown that you can take criticisms and make something better out of it. That's a good trait to have.

So I talked with my partner on it, and we both feel the Personality fits the Hermit Arcana. Read the description on the link, and then find or make a persona that fits that description and connects well with Kouichi.

Just remember that they have to have three low-level skills, regardless of what level they were starting with in the past.

@Demon: Good to hear. He's definitely in.
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Alright sweet. One less character to worry about completing lol
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I'm on my phone right now, so I can't post it, but I finished a character for this. Just wanted to reserve a spot now. I'll post it as soon as I get home to my laptop.
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Name: Crobalt Nicholas "Cronic" Crystalis

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Appearance: Brown, shoulder length hair with blue eyes. Has slightly pale skin. Stands around 5'10.

Attire: Wears a blue trenchcoat that's torn in places, mainly around the lower half of the coat, dark grey trousers and a vest, along with dark green shoes with black soles.

Arcana: Star

Weapon: Twin swords, attached to sheaths attached to his waist.

Personality: Calm and focused. Never seems to give in to despair, no matter what, and has plenty of self confidence. When it comes to people he doesn't know, he's naturally suspicious of them on account of his background, not wanting to be quick to trust someone he doesn't know in the event it comes back to bite him later. To those who have earned his trust, however, he's a reliable ally and friend, being more open with them, and would gladly stand back-to-back with them in a fight.

Backstory:
"Hope won't die as long as we're still standing."
Having a harsh upbringing, Cronic quickly learned who to trust and who to avoid like the plague. But he never once let go of his hope that his life would take a turn for the better. And it eventually did... After he slipped into wonderland. He counts himself fortunate that he was able to escape from wonderland. He knows the score though, and he's determined not to give up so readily.
Persona:

Persona name: Saturnus

Persona Appearance:


Persona Skills: Agi, Maragi (For now)

Character Relevance: Cronic's Hope is his strongest asset. He's never one to give up as long as he continues to draw breath, and won't let anyone try to bring him down.
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I'm on my phone right now, so I can't post it, but I finished a character for this. Just wanted to reserve a spot now. I'll post it as soon as I get home to my laptop.


Understood. No need to worry, I'm still waiting on a couple people to complete their profiles.

Cronic is in.
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Alright, at least you've shown that you can take criticisms and make something better out of it. That's a good trait to have.So I talked with my partner on it, and we both feel the Personality fits the . Read the description on the link, and then find or make a persona that fits that description and connects well with Kouichi.Just remember that they have to have three low-level skills, regardless of what level they were starting with in the past.@Demon: Good to hear. He's definitely in.


Hermit Arcana okay then but I think someone already took that Arcana

EDIT: if not yet taken, i found his Persona "Moros"
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Alright, excellent so far, You're getting it.

Unfortunately, Moros is a Persona already used. ...In a game, yes, but since this is technically taking place between 3 and 4 canonically wise, one cannot have a Persona belonging to someone else.

Fortunately for you, however, The Hermit was only used once for a character. So that means all other possible Personae (Save of course the ones used by others in this RP) is available for use. So I'd like you to try one more time with the Persona.

I should also note that you don't HAVE to necessarily use the Personae on the lists. If you can think of a Mythological deity or figure that are hermits by nature or exist and work behind the shadows, (And are not of any other Arcana like Devil or Death) then you can use them. But if you can't think of one with absolute certainty, I seriously would recommend finding one on the list besides Moros.

BTW: I stated on the rules I believe, but since there is no Calendar or Social Link system there is NO reason any arcana can't have more than one person represent it. ...Except Fool, Jester, Lust, and World of course. In other words, Don't worry about the fact someone else is using it.
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Alright, excellent so far, You're getting it.Unfortunately, Moros is a Persona already used. ...In a game, yes, but since this is technically taking place between 3 and 4 canonically wise, one cannot have a Persona belonging to someone else.Fortunately for you, however, The Hermit was only used once for a character. So that means all other possible Personae (Save of course the ones used by others in this RP) is available for use. So I'd like you to try one more time with the Persona.I should also note that you don't HAVE to necessarily use the Personae on the lists. If you can think of a Mythological deity or figure that are hermits by nature or exist and work behind the shadows, (And are not of any other Arcana like Devil or Death) then you can use them. But if you can't think of one with absolute certainty, I seriously would recommend finding one on the list besides Moros.


Ok i'll try to think of an another one

EDIT: I used Kapre as my persona, Kapre lives in the forest so that makes him belong to the Hermit Arcana
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Hmm...Ok, that seems good enough.

Kouichi is in.

Also, One question out of curiosity: ...What's a clearly Japanese Teen doing in London, England?
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Soooo I finished a character for this.

v2: He's no longer Japanese(?) and his Persona is now based on an actual mythological(??) figure.
(Also Bres was a character's persona in P1, but let's ignore that since my version is different. I swear I didn't know until after I made this)

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Hmm...Ok, that seems good enough.Kouichi is in.Also, One question out of curiosity: ...What's a clearly Japanese Teen doing in London, England?


He transferred in London to study
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If there's still space, reserve me please. I'll try to get my CS done later, if something happens, then I'll probably post it tomorrow morning.
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Soooo I finished a character for this.I re-used a character I never ended up including in something I wrote, so that's why he's Japanese in England too. And secondly, his Persona I made up myself, but without any mythological/historical figure in mind. I hope that won't be an issue?


Yay i'm not the only japanese
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@Sen: Bravo. A persona fan indeed. You even went the extra mile. I'm actually quite impressed.

The Problem, however, is indeed the fact that Libera is made-up. And we already one person try that already. It's kind of a rule, I think, that they have to be Historical/Mythological figures.

...However, since you made such an effort. I'll talk with my partner on this and see what he thinks we should do.

@RPG Gamer: Eh, I'll buy it. XD

@mopsock: I'm waiting for about two or three more people, who has promised to get things done tomorrow anyways. That said, We are getting quite large in both character roster and players. ...So I'm changing plans and making the deadline tomorrow. Then I'm closing down the sign-ups and beginning the IC.
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Human:

Name: Mina Scrios
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Appearance:

Attire: Mina is dressed in a long black hoodie, a piece of fabric covering the bottom part of her face at all times. She wears boots and black stockings and that's about all a person would be able to see when they meet her.
When one manages to get Mina to warm up to him she would be able to show her complete attire. Below her hoodie she wears a set of hotpants and a corset, which she rarely shows to anyone. A black scarf is curled around her neck, so she can hide a part of her face even when her hoodie isn't on and of course she wears her arm braces and gloves.
Arcana: The Moon
Weapon:
Mina carries with her a large black scythe with a silver blade that is seemingly as thin and frail as glass, but can cut through mostly everything. The scythe can retract into it's staff and slide into itself, making it about the size of a human's arm.
Around Mina's lower arm she wears black arm braces with hidden blades inside them and she wears black gloves with silver wires attached to them, which are thin enough to not be seen, but sharp enough to cut through wood.
Personality: Mina is a distant person, scared to open up to people and hides it by acting rude and harsh. She is afraid to let people in, because she is scared to let them be hurt. She feels like everybody she opens up to becomes her responsibility and she should protect them, though if that fails she falls into a deep depression. Eventually it comes down to the fact that Mina acts to be a person she is not, to keep people away from her and avoid getting them hurt, but all she really wants is to be able to show her true self to people.
Backstory: Might add this in later.
Theme Song: Might add this in later.

Persona:

Persona Name: Hati
Persona Appearance:

Persona Skills: Mudo, Zio, Double Fangs
Character Relevance: Hati is the representation of Mina's lies, her barricade and illusion to hide her own personality. It's sight torments Mina, the fact she is bound to it haunts her, but it truly is her inner demon. When push comes to shove, Hati will protect Mina and the people around her at all costs, as that is it's true purpose.
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Excellent, She's in Mina.
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