Mistress Dizzy said
Yay!How do I start?

At this point just sort of jump in and introduce your character how you see fit. Once that's done we'll see if we can give everyone a sort of goal to keep the roleplay going.

RoflsMazoy said
I don't think I'll be using the crossbow guy now, because I can't come up with a good story for it but still, I got some other characters instead.Kreiss would probably give quests to do with defending a place, or some kind of army stuff, you know how army guys are.The Old Guy would probably give quests investigating nearby ruins and also maybe bandit loot caches and stuff like that.

The second character made me laugh really hard "age: old?" and seems quite fun but he's a bit iffy. Since there are so many unknowns about him it's hard to say if I can accept him or not (and also f this were a submission for the actual Project Shadow it would be sent back to you since the artist couldn't draw something not described) So see if you can make him remain mysterious without being so much so that he's an issue. (also nice idea on the hole because game wise it would mean you didn't have to pay for an entire building to be drawn, just a hole and sign)

The first character, Kreiss seems like a good one. First time someone wrote their abilities in a way that seems very game like and in a way I can picture being in the games. That being said there are some issues.

1) You state he can move quickly but yet one of his abilities involves carrying five shields around that he can launch. That's very much heavy. (Either that or they appear out of thin air which is a bit too much magic...unless once again he was lifting them from somewhere)

2) The second ability is a bit confusing, the shield blocks and heals but is somehow weaker than a normal shield?

3) Some typos and such (You called the White Cross, White Knights. Some of the characteristics seem more like a thought than a characteristic, and so forth) nothing bad enough to keep the Cs from being accepted just needs some work.

Overall the old man needs some more specific details and Kreiss needs his abilities touched up a bit and clarified how they work.

Good job and I look forward to seeing both of the characters one day make it in Project Shadow

Alright, I explained stuff in the character sheets. It's pretty damn long so prepare for some reading

RoflsMazoy said
Alright, I explained stuff in the character sheets. It's pretty damn long so prepare for some reading

Alright thanks for those, both characters are accepted though I totally picture the old man as having spider legs since he seems to live like a trapdoor spider. Or like this guy...



Either way both characters sound awesome and I'm glad to have them!

Thaaaaaaaat's freaky. I love Miyazaki movies, though.

Er... would it be cliche to have Kassy also in the tavern to witness the White Cross putting pressure on the owner? I mean, if it is a gathering place, it makes sense that perhaps the owner would allow her a small table in the back, so people who do need her help can get it.

Out of curiosity, is the illuminous's weapons and stuff old-world tech? It seems that it would be

RoflsMazoy said
Out of curiosity, is the illuminous's weapons and stuff old-world tech? It seems that it would be

Nope, they're actually from a city (Arenious) that has some crystals that are used as an energy source. This has led to some technological advances but those for the most part have been discouraged by the very powerful church in that city. (Similarly to the Catholic Church during medieval times) a representation of their home city can be seen here in this banner/icon,



The tech isn't the safest either. Since it's not supposed to be made the conditions and resources are less than ideal so sometime it breaks...or blows up

Mistress Dizzy said
Thaaaaaaaat's freaky. I love Miyazaki movies, though.Er... would it be cliche to have Kassy also in the tavern to witness the White Cross putting pressure on the owner? I mean, if it is a gathering place, it makes sense that perhaps the owner would allow her a small table in the back, so people who do need her help can get it.

Nope, totally fine if you want to do that

Finally posted an intro, been sick so I haven't been able to do it for a while.

RoflsMazoy said
Finally posted an intro, been sick so I haven't been able to do it for a while.

Read it, really liked it. Going to write back when I can. Just feeling a bit sick at the moment.

By the way, can I make some basic villagers? It'll make my intro easier slightly. Also, I added skills

Lord Santa said
By the way, can I make some basic villagers? It'll make my intro easier slightly. Also, I added skills

Don't see why not. Go for it

Alright, here we are.

Character Type: Basic
Location: Urbi Lupi
Name: Elicia Feyre
Gender: Female
Age: 30
Race: Human
Appearance:
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 65 kg
Hair: Long, straight, light brown. Hair is tied around 3 inches off the end.
Eyes: Soft hazel
Skin colour: Creamy white
Typical clothing: Standard women's clothing (female poor 1, referring to the civilian clothing designs, but cleaner because it's not as much poor as simple.)
Characteristics:
- Motherly
- easily trusting
- Soft (and warm somewhat)
- Caring
- Smiles often
Traits:
She is adept at gathering wild herbs and plants and knows what can be eaten and what can't. She has minor apothecary skills and sells potions to get by. Has a daughter.
Short back story: Fairly standard childhood. No problems, grew up in Urbi Lupi. Fell in love with a Lycan Lumberjack and got married. Gave birth to her daughter and lived happily for a time. One day, her husband disappeared during a blizzard and it's just been her and her daughter for the last few years. She's still happy but it's a little harder to go on just with potions. There's enough happiness to go around between the two, though.

Character type: Basic
Location: Urbi Lupi
Name: Felicity Feyre
Gender: Female
Age: 7
Race: Lycan
Appearance:
Height: 102 kg
Weight: 21 kg
Hair: Dark brown, short and straight.
Eye colour: Big, soft brown eyes
Skin colour: Creamy white, fur colour is dark brown
Typical clothing: Simple tunic and stuff, nothing fancy. Has boots.
Characteristics:
- Shy
- Doesn't speak her mind often
- Observant
- Almost doesn't act without thought
Traits: Good at things involving her hands
Short back story: Felicity was born a Lycan in a happy family. However, when she was 2, her father disappeared during a snowstorm. She hardly remembers him, only remembering his warm smile and amiable laughter. She lives happily with her mother, Elicia, helping where she can by sewing and occasionally dabbling in apothecary.

That's about it. You can use them if you like, but you don't have to and I'm not planning anything for them. I haven't really thought about them too hard because it's just to help my intro along.

Lord Santa said
Alright, here we are.

Info about characters Dakota removed to save space in this quote...tada

They sound good to me, I look forward to your intro

Thought you guys might be interested in this (also will get to expanding on that IC post sometime today)