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I was wondering if there might be Gym Leader / Indigo League changes, since it's 10 years into the future. Maybe Silver became one of the Elite Four. XD
As of yet, there are no changes to the Gym Leaders or Indigo League.
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<Snipped quote by Stale Pizza> As of yet, there are no changes to the Gym Leaders or Indigo League.
Yeah, I'm kinda curious what kinda story or plot we have here. So far all I know: *10 years in the future *It's in Kanto *Slice of life, lot's of crime, during a peaceful time.
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<Snipped quote by WriterRaven> Yeah, I'm kinda curious what kinda story or plot we have here. So far all I know: *10 years in the future *It's in Kanto *Slice of life, lot's of crime, during a peaceful time.
<Snipped quote by Stale Pizza> As of yet, there are no changes to the Gym Leaders or Indigo League.
It's still based off Gen II or Heartgold / SoulSilver, right? Which means Blue is still a Gym Leader.
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Question! Will there be Pokemon contests in this Kanto/Johto or have they not have built contest halls here yet?
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All right, I'm back, and I'm somewhat recovered but now very tired. Let's go through what we have so far. I'll be commenting in point form along the way so I've tried to limit everything to one tag. I'll also answer any questions that were not previously answered to my specifications by my co-GM or by other applicants. Also also, the English major in me is going to come out in full force. Be ready for it. @Ganryu - I've never heard of anyone with Undertaker as a last name without the first name of "The". Might consider altering it. - I'd like to see more on the appearance and personality. The trench coat alone is the article of clothing that usually sets off warning signs for me when reading characters. Especially if nothing is being worn underneath. Personality is less of a problem, I've done lazy before. It's just good to have some offsetting traits with it. That's not as big a problem though. - The bio is a little tough to read with the run-on sentences and the inconsistent capitalization on landmarks, place names and species. @Liriia - I'm wondering how a native of Cianwood got a Hoenn-based egg like that. Aron is not a native Johto/Kanto species so it wouldn't be able to be found in any cave systems there. If Sybil is from Dewford, that would work. - I'd like to know a bit more about what exactly is the extent of Sybil's archeological knowledge. How deep does it run? Does it come at the expense of other subjects? I mean it's definitely possible, given there was a trainee Scientist in the prior RP, just want to make sure it's not too outlandish. -If you want to handicap Lapis at Lvl 2, that's your perrogative, but he gets levelled up just like the others. @Lizmichi - Fary is carrying an awful lot of stuff, as well as a pretty high-rolling cash stack. Given the way the currency system is going to work in Indigo, $3000 might be a bit much. Pokeballs are only going to be $2, so you have enough cash to make drowning a Moltres in broken balls a viable strategy. Might want to donate some of that to charity. - "therefor" "She's sill hesitant" - Nitpicks I know, but again. English. @Lambi - I'm not sure Evolver is a class. I mean specialist, sure. But I'm stretching for that one. Really solid sheet here. @mictlan93 - "Pokeblls". That's the only thing I could fine. Very well done sheet. @WriterRaven - Well as co-GM you're pretty well set in stone. Still, very well done. @hatakekuro - Much like in the games, it's not going to be possible for a PC to join with the primary antagonists of the RP. - I know a lot of the personality is going to built around being a Rocket but he does come off as a bit of a psychopath. Like I said, a given for an enemy, but Raven and I are going to be handling the Rocket interactions. - $5000 is a bit much, even if you're working for a criminal organization. All the grunts I beat up in games barely had any money. - No one is going to be starting off with any Mega Stones. You don't get them right away in the game, you don't get them right away here. - No one is also going to be starting off with a shiny Pokemon, because then everyone is going to want one. If you are going to say you deserve a shiny, you're going to need a good reason why it is absolutely vital to your character's essence of being that their Pokemon be shiny and especial. - Honestly, between the character's biography, back story and skill set, he's better set up to join the Mary Sue RP. Again, I know he's written based on Rocket acceptance but still, it's not a character that would possibly work in this context. @Howler - Again the bank account is too damn high. What kind of economy is this? All these kids running around with thousands of dollars. It's probably my fault for not explaining the pricing system in this Kanto, but yeah, still high. - The talent is a bit oxymoronic compared to the personality. So he gives off this misanthropic teenage angst everywhere but is able to read people like an open book? I wouldn't think a teenager who's shutting himself off emotionally would have the ability to instantly read people. Something about life experience there. I wouldn't know. I couldn't read people at all. Mostly because of the low amount of contact growing up. But I digress. - Gotta have some time spent in Unova to get your hands on an Axew. You can still have Clair as a catalyst and motivation, I'm fine with that, but you're not air mailing Pokemon over. Same as the others. @Stale Pizza - I'm not sure I can give you Route 13 for your lost Litwick. If you want to say Reversal Mountain, even on that little stretch outside of Undella, I think that's doable. However, I don't see a Fire/Ghost type ending up on a Route known for "Beaches and the Sparkling Sea" @Mortimer - ENGLISH GRAD ALERT! I'd really tidy up that appearance section. "looks like a fairly young man that still resembles a bit like a teenager who is slowly developing" has like five different qualifiers in it. "looks like a teenager who's still developing despite his age" is much better. Also, "leave them grow". - I don't care if he bet Mark Xatuberg on the futures of Poke-Indonesia, $4500 is too high. - I'm going to say right now the Legendary Pokemon are not going to be available for capture. Everyone knows all the legendaries were captured in miracle stretches 10 and seven years ago by a bunch of 10-12 year olds who proceeded to keep them locked in computers for the good of mankind. So Ho-oh is a no go. - "craddle" @Nightrunner - To answer your question, nope. Escapist ex-pat. - I'm not sure how much attention she would avoid detection carrying around a Michael Jordan-level amount of rings. If not the cops then another ill-behaved traveller sure would have lifted something. Might have to find a fence. I'll allow for a bump in money to accommodate this though. [@Plot Questions] - I have literally the first half of the story completely mapped out. Consider it a four year work in progress. I also know exactly where the plot is going and it does factor in every aspect of the Kanto/Johto set of games as well as the anime, spanning the generations. The first couple of chapters will be more for exposition and getting to know the group, but the fun will start kicking off in Chapter 3. @Hella Cute - Yes, definitely still accepting applications. Hell my sheet's not even up yet. I just decided what I'm starting with. - Yes, there are contest halls. Cerulean has become the main destination for Contests, following the lead of the Sensational Sisters of Cerulean, who embraced the format wholeheartedly and have the highest ranking hall in the nation. There is also a hall on the reclaimed Cinnabar Islands. [@My Progress] Like I said, sheets not ready. Been distracted with other things and I need sleep before work. I'll be aiming to get it done while I finish laundry tomorrow.
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@NeoAC 1) Will be editing the Town/Pokemon once I get home. Sorry for any confusion. 2) Her strongest subject is definitely history/archaeology. Sybil is a failure when it comes to Maths and biological sciences. She's still very much an amateur when it comes to reading scripts (the many notebooks contain cheat sheets that she crafted over the years) and her strongest point might be fossil and stone recognition.
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Oh, @NeoAC , can you go over the reclamation of Cinnabar real quick for me? I was planning on being born there 2-3 years before the eruption. Edit: Also, is it okay to start with a Marill if the backstory involves them being together for like three years, since Marill evolves from Azurill with high friendship..? Actually, nevermind, I'll roll a Chinchou instead
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I'm assuming the whole applicant acceptance process is basically a "may the best win", kind of deal? I'm pretty intrigued by the setting, especially if it's had a few years to develop, so I think I'll try tossing in a character, if that's all right.
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I'm assuming the whole applicant acceptance process is basically a "may the best win", kind of deal? I'm pretty intrigued by the setting, especially if it's had a few years to develop, so I think I'll try tossing in a character, if that's all right.
Applicants are chosen based on the quality of their sheets, rather than it being a 'first-in-first-served' type deal. So yeah, feel free to post a character.
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Wow. Never seen anyone do so many in-depth reviews in a single post. Kudos. Anyways, to address everything 1) Yeah, I'll be changing his last name. I just want some irony in his parents being involved in Ghost-type Pokemon, and Edgar being afraid of them. 2) I'm fairly bad at descriptions real life as well. Basically, the image I had in mind was looking like Irvene from FVIII.
3) I'll add in more to his personality. 4)I'll clear up the grammar then. Edit: Oh wow, I was apparently asleep doing the sheet the first time. Revised. Redone character sheet:
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@Hella Cute After talking with Raven, since Marill is a Pokemon that can be birthed directly from an egg that still evolves, we are going to allow Marill as a starter. (Also happens to affect my character as well, so that helped deliberations.) Fine, still works for me. Following the eruption eight years ago, the Cinnabar Volcano stood for three more years until a side of the newly formed cone collapsed into the ocean, allowing sea water to come in and flood the chamber, creating something of a towering bay that split the main island into two halves. The lava has given way to a fine silt, giving Cinnabar some lovely white sand beaches and the tourists are beginning to flock yet again. It also helps that Fire trainers were quick to repopulate the island, given how close old Blaine is to retirement. There might be people hoping to catch his eye, or even move in to set up a new non-Fire gym in a nod to the Cinnabar Volcano's own retirement from active duty. @Ganryu To be fair, that was over a night and a days work. I kept getting distracted by things like Archer and Youtube and what not.
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@NeoAC There you are, modified. He received his Axew when Auntie Claire brought him along on a trip to Unova for a conference on Dragon-types and their relative prevalence in Unova in an attempt to give him a 'special' Dragon of his own compared to the dratinis and gyarados that all his other friends had. As for the money, I reduced it considerably to a $500 account, which should be reasonable considering parents sending their kid out into the world to make money by gambling on monstrous cock fights. As for his talent, was that a mandate to change it or a raised-eyebrow-but-alright? I have actually met quite a few misanthropic teenagers in my day that were excellent judges of character and people's intentions--just because they didn't like them or chose to seek attention and act out didn't mean they didn't understand, and often times were pretty intelligent when it came to seeing power dynamics and manipulation tactics having used plenty themselves. I can change it if you like, but I at least don't find it as outlandish as you do.
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@NeoACI've mostly got the entire character sheet completed, except for the bio, which is causing me no small amount of frustration. How much detail would you like us to go into?
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Updated a lot, I really wrote this character a few months ago so I rewrote her personality and appearance to hopefully flow much better (did not change any of her core aspects at all).
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Name: Claire Hawk

Age: 11

Gender: Female

Hometown: Cinnabar Island

Appearance: Claire stands four-foot-and-eight inches (142cm) tall. She has a thin child-like physique and bobbed platinum blonde hair that stands out against her medium dark brown skin. While traveling, Claire wears a simple, loose-fitting electric-yellow shirt; a pair of off-white shorts that fit tightly just above her knees; and a pair of yellow-and-white sneakers. She packs a swimsuit: a blue one-piece suit with a ruffled skirt that stops at the mid-thigh, both of which are bordered with white. On her wrist is a pink-bordered Xtransceiver

Claire opts for a white trainer’s backpack with light blue trim. Here she stows her poke balls, medicines, and all the other essentials of a pokemon trainer - this pack is particularly light and is often carried in-hand by the strap on the top of the bag - as well as being the bag that she carries into battles. While traveling, however, she also carries a black duffle bag where she hides her personal effects.

Personality: Claire has the spirit of adventure and doesn’t think twice before jumping at the opportunity to explore caves, fly to the top of the mountains or ride across seas. This is the primary driving force between joining this group of young trainers - to explore the Pokemon world. She’s eager and ready to see new sights and meet new people and new pokemon. Claire wants to do any - and every - thing there is to do. From taking on the Indigo League, to competing in Pokemon Contests, she has no specific ambitions, just the drive to do it all - often times throwing herself head-first into harm’s way.

Claire loves meeting new people and is an extremely outgoing youth. Though some would simply call it naive, Claire tries to find the good in everybody and holds very few grudges towards anyone. Change comes naturally to her, in part to her moving back and forth between Pallet Town and Cinnabar Town and her upbringing on the ever-moving surface of the ocean. This fluidity gives her the insight to adapt to the forever-changing face of battle, she prefers to improvise rather than practice outside of battle, preferring to fill her free time with activities like swimming or tree-climbing.

Profession: Trainer

Talents: Fishing and swimming.

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  • $15
  • 5x Pokeball
  • 5x Potion
  • 1x Xtransceiver
  • 1x Good Rod
  • 1x Trainer Backpack
  • 1x Thin Sleeping Bag
  • 3x Spare Set of Clothes
  • 1x Swimsuit
  • 1x Assorted Toiletries


Starter Pokemon: Chichi (Lv 5 Chinchou) Water/Electric

Biography: Claire was born on the legendary Cinnabar Island; once the home of the Cinnabar Gym and the Volcano Badge, Cinnabar was a common stop for many trainers in Kanto. However, a few years after her birth the entirety of Cinnabar Town lay submerged in lava as the town’s trademark volcano sprung to life. Luckily, the Hawks managed to escape the lava flow on the back of Claire’s father’s Gyarados by way of Route 21, which ends in Pallet Town to the north. There, in Pallet Town, the family settled in with relatives and made an honest living fishing for Kingler in the 21.

Three years after the destruction of Cinnabar Town, part of the volcano gave way and the ocean swept in to silence the volcano forever. Former residents were eager to repopulate the island, including the Hawk family. Still keeping with the fishing trade, Mr. Hawk taught his daughter everything he knew about fishing and the two fished side-by-side for hours on end. As if by fate, fishing would become Claire’s gateway to pokemon training.

One evening, on a small fishing boat off the coast of Cinnabar, Claire and her father had cast their lines and waiting anxiously for the Kingler to take a bite. Mr Hawk’s line tensed and was pulled quickly down to the ocean’s floor. However, this was no Kingler. Mr Hawk pulled back on the line and reeled in, the pokemon grew closer and closer to the surface,

“Claire, grab Gyarados from my bag.”

Claire nodded and fumbled around her father’s bag for the small poke ball that he kept around, she pulled it out and handed it out to her father. Mr Hawk took the ball and it expanded in his hand and with a grunt, he tossed the ball high into the air and in a burst of red lightning, a mighty Gyarados materialized above the dinghy.

“Gyarados, bite it!”

Gyarados roared and plunged down into the water, snaking down outside of view. The waters grew increasingly unsteady until finally the line loosened. The atrocious pokemon again broke the surface of the water and snaked its way around in the air above the boat.

“Thanks, Gyarados,” Mr Hawk said with a grin, tossing a poke ball back into the air, it collided with Gyarados and in a flash of red lightning he was gone as soon as he came. The ball fell into the bottom of the boat and Mr Hawk reeled in the catch - a chinchou. He pulled the weakened pokemon up onto the boat and looked it over. The chinchou wormed around in the bottom of the boat in a vain attempt to return to the depths of the ocean.

“What will we do with it?” Claire asked as she looked down at the creature. Mr Hawk dug around his bag and pulled out a blue-and-white net ball, he held it out to Claire.

“Here,” he said, “Capture her.”

Claire took the poke ball and it expanded in her hand. She gasped and dropped the ball onto the chinchou, the ball opened and its iconic red lightning engulfed the angler pokemon. The ball stood still for a brief moment and shook once, the button on the front glowed a bright red color and it made a drawn-out beep. It did it again. And again. Then it stopped. Claire stared at it and up to her father. He nodded, “Go on, take it.”

Claire reached out and picked up the poke ball and held it in her hands.

“What’re you going to name her?”

Claire looked at the poke ball and back up to her father, “How about Chichi?"

Mr Hawke chuckled, “A great name. Alright then, let’s get Chichi back to the pokemon center, she deserves a rest.” He took hold of the oars on the row boat and captained the boat back to the shore.

Since that day, Claire and Chichi have been nearly inseparable - from the moment that Claire came back to pick her up from the pokemon center, the two would almost always be seen with each other. Now that Claire’s become eleven, she’s finally prepared to begin her first Pokemon adventure - tackling the eight gym leaders of Kanto - with Chichi at her side, she made her way to Pallet Town to meet up with fellow trainers, to become the very best.

Notes/Other: Claire has a natural affinity for water-type pokemon and will spring at the chance to get more.
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Ok, I'll make the edits as soon as I can.
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Her backstory is like eight different kinds of cliched, and honestly, I'm so exhausted I can't tell if her personality is consistent or not, but I'm open to critiques and revisions.
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@Stale Pizza - I'm not sure I can give you Route 13 for your lost Litwick. If you want to say Reversal Mountain, even on that little stretch outside of Undella, I think that's doable. However, I don't see a Fire/Ghost type ending up on a Route known for "Beaches and the Sparkling Sea"
I chose Route 13 on purpose because it was a bit off from Reversal Mountain, and the difference would have been a lot more distinct (since they could simply just bring him back). It won't completely fit, though I can change it. I didn't want to do Celestial Tower either, because it was too far off the coast and probably isn't much of a "tourist" location. Edit: Small change done to app. Changed location. Also, the reason a bunch of people are packing money is because of they're basing it off recent Generation prices...and the player in Gen V and VI usually starts with $5000, if I'm not wrong. Edit 2: Everyone likes to have their characters be adults. XD
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Her backstory is like eight different kinds of cliched, and honestly, I'm so exhausted I can't tell if her personality is consistent or not, but I'm open to critiques and revisions.
Meh, I had sort of writer's block with my application and tried really hard to squeak past 4000 characters. I just didn't have the mood and basically sat in front of my computer for hours.
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<Snipped quote by NeoAC> I chose Route 13 on purpose because it was a bit off from Reversal Mountain, and the difference would have been a lot more distinct (since they could simply just bring him back). It won't completely fit, though I can change it. I didn't want to do Celestial Tower either, because it was too far off the coast and probably isn't much of a "tourist" location. Edit: Small change done to app. Changed location. Also, the reason a bunch of people are packing money is because of they're basing it off recent Generation prices...and the player in Gen V and VI usually starts with $5000, if I'm not wrong. Edit 2: Everyone likes to have their characters be adults. XD
Yeah, I should have explained the currency situation. Basically I'm converting Pokedollar prices and awards from their Japanese counter parts to American prices by moving the decimal over two places. Because given the amount of mass production done, I don't think Pokeballs are worth $200, and so on. I'm still goo with having a solid amount of money, since people will need food, medicine, all that good stuff.
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