4 Guests viewing this page
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Hikou no Kokoro
Raw
Avatar of Hikou no Kokoro

Hikou no Kokoro Just Some Annoyance

Member Seen 6 yrs ago

Oh, right, @Raijinslayer I'll give you a freebie since this stood out to me.

Body Modification:Allows one to temporarily strengthen their body, making them stronger, faster, and gives them better reflexes.


FYI this'll make you a cripple once you use it. If you're going for self-reinforcement, you probably shouldn't bother because you won't reach Rin-level, but you can go for self-reinforcement if you wanna.

If it's body modification and you use it to say, speed up your running speed, then right after that you'll be unable to move your legs anymore. Forevah. Isn't it sad?
Hidden 10 yrs ago 10 yrs ago Post by Raijinslayer
Raw
Avatar of Raijinslayer

Raijinslayer .

Member Seen 13 days ago

@TwilightDragon All he has is General Magecraft, Wind Magic, and Mental Interference, as well as his Mystic codes, of which only the sword adds to his overall abilities. If you want me to get rid of two codes, then that's okay. As for the picture, it's in the hider within the hider.

Edit:@Hikou no Kokoro Thanks for the heads up, will fix
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Gamerdude369
Raw

Gamerdude369

Member Seen 10 yrs ago

Hikou no Kokoro
Servent (Caster)
Master

hatakekuro
Servent (Saber)

Gamerdude369
Master

Hebigami Shiho
Servent (Lancer)

Raijinslayer
Master

* * * * * * *

Just wanted to put this together to get a good idea of where we stand.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Raijinslayer
Raw
Avatar of Raijinslayer

Raijinslayer .

Member Seen 13 days ago

@hatakekuro Is it cool if Charles is Saber's Master. I feel they would make a good team-up
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Remram
Raw
Avatar of Remram

Remram

Member Seen 1 hr ago

Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Constantine
Raw
Avatar of Constantine

Constantine Clockwork Heart

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

Work in Progress...

Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Nisemono
Raw

Nisemono

Member Seen 8 yrs ago

Hikou no Kokoro
Servent (Caster)
Master

hatakekuro
Servent (Saber)

Gamerdude369
Master

Hebigami Shiho
Servent (Lancer)

Raijinslayer
Master

* * * * * * *

Just wanted to put this together to get a good idea of where we stand.


I'm making a master too but yeah.
Hidden 10 yrs ago 10 yrs ago Post by Flamelord
Raw
Avatar of Flamelord

Flamelord

Member Seen 8 hrs ago

All finished. I think.

Hidden 10 yrs ago 10 yrs ago Post by Nisemono
Raw

Nisemono

Member Seen 8 yrs ago


Don't have a servant to pair with, soo
anyone want to pair with the master I made?
Hidden 10 yrs ago 10 yrs ago Post by mcpop9
Raw
Avatar of mcpop9

mcpop9 The Hidden Potential

Member Seen 6 yrs ago




i hope you guy's don't mind the beserker i've created.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by PaulHaynek
Raw
coGM
Avatar of PaulHaynek

PaulHaynek The Roleplayer Nobody Likes

Member Seen 21 hrs ago

Here's a master/not-so-regular human if anyone wants.

"For some, it is difficult to rise. To stand above the rest. To conquer as a true warrior.

But not for those who share the bloodlines of champions.
"


Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by TwilightDragon
Raw
GM
Avatar of TwilightDragon

TwilightDragon Dragon of the Night Sky

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

Wow. Lots of people have posted when I was gone...
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Tatsua Aiisen
Raw
Avatar of Tatsua Aiisen

Tatsua Aiisen The Lewd Maid

Member Seen 3 yrs ago

Wow. Lots of people have posted when I was gone...


This is what happens when you're popular.

Rejoice.
Hidden 10 yrs ago 10 yrs ago Post by Constantine
Raw
Avatar of Constantine

Constantine Clockwork Heart

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

True Name: Marie-Anne Charlotte de Corday d'Armont

Age: 24

Cause of Death: Guillotine

Gender: Female

Master:

Class: Assassin

Class Skill: Presence Concealment – A skill common to most members of the Assassin class, this ability represents the capacity of the user to hide their nature as a Servant from both other Servants and Masters. When acting in a non-aggressive manner Assassins are nigh impossible to detect under normal conditions unless they chose otherwise. Useful for both reconnaissance and escape, as well as attacks of opportunity.

Personal Abilities
Expert of Many Specializations
Information Erasure
Instinct

Noble Phantasm: Nameless Blade (Anti-Unit) - The base manifestation of this Assassin specific Noble Phantasm lacks a consistent physical form as it is the manifestation of an idea rather than a specific artefact that existed in reality. As such it ‘manifests’ via the imbuement of specific properties into weapon’s possessing sharp edges and/or points that increases the weapons suitability for fighting Servant level opponents. The effect is maintained for only as long as the weapon is held by the Servant, its effect dissipating almost instantly upon loss of physical contact. By the same measure the effect is granted to any weapon meeting the specific criteria once held by the user. Properties that increase ‘suitability for fighting Servants’ include vastly increased durability and sharpness. Such weapons can more easily bypass tough defences due to the nature of their class affiliation. Due to its inconsistent nature the permanent destruction of this Noble Phantasm is theoretically improbable.

Appearance


Marie-Anne Charlotte de Corday d'Armont



Assassins Harlequin mask


Personality: Having been raised in Abbaye-aux-Dames, a convent in Caen following the untimely death of her mother and elder sister Charlotte is both well-educated and eloquent, as well as a woman of great religious faith. Or at least that is how history would record her. In truth Charlotte Corday is mild mannered only when it is desirable for her to be so, her natural silver tongue allowing her to easily manipulate the opinions of others. She is also very adept at lying and twisting the truth, requiring a skilled mind to see through her illusions. Though her gift of the gab transcended death her piety did not. Having been denied the afterlife that her faith promised her Charlotte’s faith has been significantly eroded, leaving her with an emotional hole in her heart.

As befits her role as the Assassin she has no obvious qualms about ending life, be that of Servant, Master or Witness should it be required of her, especially if the end justifies the means. As expected of members of her class she is also loathe to engage in a fair fight if it can be avoided due to her lower combat potential when compared to other Servants. Unless given the chance to manipulate a situation to her advantage beforehand she might outright refuse an order to battle another Servant directly.

Alignment: True Neutral

Legend: Marie-Anne Charlotte de Corday d'Armont was executed at the age of 24 for the assassination of Jean-Paul Marat. Her legend arose due to her status as a heroine of the Second Empire of France, resulting in her spirit becoming shackled to the so called Throne of Heroes and therefore preventing her soul from reincarnating, thereby granting her status as a ‘heroic spirit’. Her legend is somewhat stronger then that of many Assassin class Servants, making her more powerful relatively speaking, as well as preventing her from losing her identify and therefore her face.

Though she was not born to poverty or the like Charlotte Corday was born to a period of great strife and hardship in France during which the long standing social order would ultimately be up heaved. Unlike many killers of this age Charlotte was no trained killer or soldier. Her assassination of Marat was the result of a belief that he should be punished for his role during the Reign of Terror, as well as the belief that without his death the country would be driven to another civil war from which it might never recover. Through his death she believed that this outcome could be avoided.

Other/s

Despite having a true identity and therefore retaining her appearance Charlotte still wears a mask in combat.
She insists on being called by her full name, Marie-Anne Charlotte de Corday d'Armont. Charlotte Corday has to be earned. To this end it is easier to just stick with Assassin.
The scarf that she is so fond of wearing hides a scar that circles the base of her neck, an indication as to the cause of her death.

ThemeThe Truth
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by PaulHaynek
Raw
coGM
Avatar of PaulHaynek

PaulHaynek The Roleplayer Nobody Likes

Member Seen 21 hrs ago

Just saying, I'd love to pair up with Assassin or Berserker. Mah boi's gonna enjoy teasing or just plain annoying them.
Hidden 10 yrs ago 10 yrs ago Post by TwilightDragon
Raw
GM
Avatar of TwilightDragon

TwilightDragon Dragon of the Night Sky

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

I'll look all of the sheets over when I have time. Things have gotten hectic around here and I'm stressed out. ^^;

Also, reminder, you must use images for your charries. You may elaborate further with description.
Hidden 10 yrs ago 10 yrs ago Post by Kaithas
Raw
Avatar of Kaithas

Kaithas One Jump Man

Member Seen 1 yr ago

"I don't hold anything back."

Name: Thomas Joren, the Paper Mage
Age: 33
Gender: Male
Servant: … Hmm, we’ll see how this goes.
Powers/Abilities: A rather unorthodox mage, Joren is almost entirely dependent on two, simple resources for his magecraft: A writing utensil, and paper.

Remember the Name:
By writing a person or Servant’s name on a piece of paper, Joren can read their abilities and a few of their personal details. The amount of the name he has changes his power–a full name lets him see every ability, but just a first or last name gives him around half.

Words of Power:
By far his most useful ability, Joren is capable of writing a word on paper and summoning an item with it. Most have to be simple, or writing the description takes too long to be of use. This is how he does basic mage abilities like fireballs and the like: by describing them on a sheet of paper, then triggering the enchantment when necessary.

Bloodcasting:
In a pinch, Joren is capable of using his own blood as the material for writing his spells and as a source of mana. Such an effort, however, will cost him a huge amount of energy and will possibly kill him–so he’d much rather not use it. He can use the blood of others as well, though he must do it by physical contact with the fluid in question and he’s sworn to never use it.

Appearance:


Personality: Thomas Joren’s entire “thing” is caution, but complete and utter committal once he has decided on a course of action. He’s slow to make a decision, but once he begins he’s as unstoppable as a steam train going out of control. This often leaves him in a weakened position if he has to fight multiple enemies in a row as he’ll exhaust himself in attempts to utterly obliterate the first, but he’s careful to not get in over his head, and always seeks a less… Exhausting way to deal with them, ordinarily by trying to talk them down. He was probably picked for the grail war due to a desire for greater power that borders on an insatiable hunger.

Short Biography: Thomas Joren has a relatively ordinary heritage. He isn’t descended from any inordinately skilled mages and isn’t a member of a powerful family. His childhood was fairly ordinary for a magus, though the desire for power that marks him to this day arose early. He used paper as an early focusing medium for spells and his magic developed along those lines, granting him the power he so desired at the price of the flexibility other types of magecraft allow. Still, he was good enough at it to gain a teaching position at the University, becoming the instructor of Ritual Studies.

Other: Joren always carries a pen behind his ear, multiple ink cartridges, and two pads of notecards in his pockets.

yay posty posty
Hidden 10 yrs ago 10 yrs ago Post by Hikou no Kokoro
Raw
Avatar of Hikou no Kokoro

Hikou no Kokoro Just Some Annoyance

Member Seen 6 yrs ago

Bloodcasting:
In a pinch, Joren is capable of using his own blood as the material for writing his spells and as a source of mana. Such an effort, however, will cost him a huge amount of energy and will possibly kill him–so he’d much rather not use it. He can use the blood of others as well, though he must do it by physical contact with the fluid in question and he’s sworn to never use it.


This isn't a special thing. Some magi drink blood to replenish their od; bodily fluids contain some life force in them, with the lewd one being the most efficient. That said, using the prana in your own blood is just using your own od, which is kinda bad because od is shitty compared to mana. Nobody uses od to cast stuff, cause you have like, no od inside you. Basically, you can do this but also everyone else can do it too.

Remember the Name: By writing a person or Servant’s name on a piece of paper, Joren can read their abilities and a few of their personal details. The amount of the name he has changes his power–a full name lets him see every ability, but just a first or last name gives him around half.


This just isn't a thing. The Ruler Class has True Name Sight as a Class Skill, but that's A. Given by the Grail and B. Exclusive to Servants because they're also made by the Grail. To somehow automatically figure out every ability someone has is like, accessing the Akashic Record and sorting through it for data or something. My Caster needs her A rank Noble Phantasm to do stuff along those lines, and even then it's not automatically getting info so much as scanning for and observing it through the cup. The way you're trying to do it, especially by modern magus standards and with the fact that there's not even an aria, just doesn't work at all.

Words of Power: By far his most useful ability, Joren is capable of writing a word on paper and summoning an item with it. Most have to be simple, or writing the description takes too long to be of use. This is how he does basic mage abilities like fireballs and the like: by describing them on a sheet of paper, then triggering the enchantment when necessary.


So what you're doing here is kind of like Wishgranting. That's what the Grail does, as well as things like Illya because she's a cup. Certain other things in the Nasuverse can do things like that too, but none of them have Magic Circuits, so they couldn't be a Master anyway. That said, what you're doing isn't Wishgranting because it's a summoning ritual, but for a summoning ritual you need more than just writing a word down on a piece of paper. Also you need to be summoning stuff from somewhere, and as far as this is concerned there's no real way to make this work the way you want it to.

If you want, the best way to sort of do what you want is something similar to what Ciel does in hiding Black Keys inside Bible pages. You could have some pieces of paper with stuff hidden in them, like a knife or something, I guess. It's shaky but it probably works mechanically. You won't be able to get the fireball thing to work though, that's just not how it works.

Other: Joren always carries a magically enhanced pen that has an infinite supply of ink behind his ear and two pads of notecards in his pockets.


If it has an infinite supply of ink you'll get crushed by the Counter Force, or something. Just give him some ink cartridges.
Hidden 10 yrs ago 10 yrs ago Post by YandereClock
Raw
Avatar of YandereClock

YandereClock

Member Seen 8 yrs ago

Here's my Mastah~

Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Gamerdude369
Raw

Gamerdude369

Member Seen 10 yrs ago

I changed some of my sheet. Mostly just added some spells. Let me know and take your time, there is going to be a lot to go through.

Link
↑ Top
4 Guests viewing this page
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet