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Just waiting for Flagg to work on our joint post. Balls in his court now.


Thanks for the update as it's much appreciated Bright_Ops. It helps ease the GMs' minds over if we need to take direct action or not, as we rather let the Players take the lead and work with what they're doing then make it ourselves.

Also, I would like to do a roll call so I can organize and sort who's still around. :p As well as others that need approved. Namely as not everyone visits the IRC and we tend to miss you when you don't stop by and say hi. This, too, tells if anyone's having trouble for an IC post or interaction for the most part.

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@OSIEIPPO
The things we noted in your CS as feeling a bit odd:
The use of "Mr. and Mrs. Rambu" when referring to his parents. - it feels rather... Earthy. Doesn't give the feel of being star wars. (yes, minor thing)
How he got to Coruscant after the Jedi who found him could not continue guiding him to the planet. It feels like a missing tale.
Also, there's no mention of the ongoing Great Galactic War here. Even on the most peaceful worlds in the galactic community, the war was felt in some way, yet the CS never makes any references to it.

Even if his skills are lacking when it comes to non-Force, he must have some skills. Perhaps he's decent at diplomacy? at talking his way out of trouble? Nobody's useless at everything.

The long term goals point is what you see your character doing as the RP progresses (so long as he survives), not his personal goals.

Otherwise its fairly decent.
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@Rtron
Would you please add a timestamp to your post?
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Thanks for the update as it's much appreciated Bright_Ops. It helps ease the GMs' minds over if we need to take direct action or not, as we rather let the Players take the lead and work with what they're doing then make it ourselves.

Also, I would like to do a roll call so I can organize and sort who's still around. :p As well as others that need approved. Namely as not everyone visits the IRC and we tend to miss you when you don't stop by and say hi. This, too, tells if anyone's having trouble for an IC post or interaction for the most part.


I'm half here.

1/2 complete :P
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@FallenreaperI'm dead. Some punk kid shot my speeder bike and I crashed into a tree. :(
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@FallenreaperI'm dead. Some punk kid shot my speeder bike and I crashed into a tree. :(


WHAT?!? What happened and can it be fixed? Are we going to lose you? T^T
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WHAT?!? What happened and can it be fixed? Are we going to lose you? T^T


It's a trap.
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I'm half here.

1/2 complete :P


I'll work on Lorn tonight with Ellri.
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I'll work on Lorn tonight with Ellri.


Oh I meant I was missing my legs, but I'm 3d printing some new ones.
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@FallenreaperThere's no fixing Ewok.

I'm fine! I wasn't in a real life accident, I was referencing Return of the Jedi. :D
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@Sep

Good luck with that and keep away from Sish!
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@FallenreaperThere's no fixing Ewok.

I'm fine! I wasn't in a real life accident, I was referencing Return of the Jedi. :D


That wasn't funny! I was actually upset you got hurt! T-T
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@Fallenreaper*pet pet*

I would have thought speederbike would have been a pretty iconic reference to make. Also, I don't think anyone has ever called their bike a speederbike without getting beat up and their lunch money stolen. :D
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Fallen, it wasn't his turn to get injured yet. He has to wait till after our shoulder has mended.
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@Dervish

Wait, does that mean I shouldn't have just started looting your corpse?
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yes, @SimplyJohn. All the loot from that has already been brought to the auction hall.
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What about this kidney? Hardly ever used, and in good condition?

In one of the monthly roleplays I'm doing a player dropped out and so his character was immediately gunned down by a security turret. Moments later, after taking out the turret, the party were picking over the corpse 'salvaging' anything that could possibly be of use to them.
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heh. thats always a sign that people care for you when they do.

You can keep that kidney. We would highly recommend implanting it quickly, seeing how someone's taken all three of yours.
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@SimplyJohnEww, what do you want with a charred body? Pervert.
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@Ellri

Ok thanks. Sorry it's so subpar but I'll make the changes once once I can get to a computer.

The character was originally a human from a different timeline in a different conflict so that's why it feels unexplained. I had to edit out info to fit into this story, my dumbass just forgot to replace that information.

I'll make sure to address your issues when I edit and I'll resumbit for approval.
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