I'll nerf the transformation types and his base to maybe higher than Goku( Straight after Raditz Saga, which was 344 or something.. correct me if i'm wrong )

We can only have, at the maximum, five techniques. Transformations count as techniques, and I'm sure that, over-all, the GM wouldn't even want us to be able to transform at the start of the role-play.

How about i just tweak and cut while maintaining your CS guidelines and just take away the transformations and leave the Ki attacks (i think) then put a power level (PL = 287) included in his information. If you would allow that.

@Lofi do you mind if i make another

@The Slenderman If I may interject here, the issue with your character as I see it is that your character submission seems as though you strove to make Gula the absolute cream of the crop, almost as if you were striving to make him the de facto leader by way of being unbeatable by the others. This would ultimately mean that the plot would be railroaded to focus around your characters feats rather than the actions of the group as a whole. Now, this isn't always a cardinal sin and can be done tastefully if you do it right and ensure everyone has their time to shine, however you also went and made your character some sort of "I will destroy the world and everyone on it" type in what is otherwise a rag tag team of warriors with backgrounds that, while not all tame, aren't all that dramatic either.

Pink's character Satchi is someone who started out following in her father's footsteps and ended up achieving greatness of her own, Dan's character Xalam's is a somewhat rough and tumble sort who's story is reminiscent of both Piccolo jr's and future Trunks': A warrior who started out with a bad hand dealt to him looking to spare a home not truly his own the atrocities of his own home by growing stronger, Chev's Vekon is just someone looking to survive so he can become strong enough to find a way to escape the hostile land he's trapped in, Spriggs' Sinthe is someone who's had greatness more or less forced onto him due to a prophetic belief, and due to his upbringing believes this himself and is actively pursuing the completion of this prophecy, my character Dimitri is essentially a rank and file soldier from a totalitarian world who occasionally struggles with what little of his humanity remains as he's sent to dispatch his predecessors, and Op's Winter is a noble from a powerful family who attempted to resist a coup despite being met with overwhelming odds.

All of these characters can fit into one troupe or another. All of them can be related to in at least one way and can reasonably be made to work with one another with the right incentive. Your character starts off with a decent background, however it takes an abrupt turn when Gula goes from "i'm cool with all of this" to "kill all humans because of the ineptitude of police officers in one incident". Mind you, his saiyan programming should've had him trying to kill everyone on earth from the day he landed, however you chose to have him inexplicably ignore it, which honestly shouldn't be possible considering that it's a subconcious thing that is countered with a sharp blow to the head during infancy (a la Goku). I'm really not trying to be an asshole here, but it just comes off as unnecessarily convoluted.

@The Slenderman If I may interject here, the issue with your character as I see it is that your character submission seems as though you strove to make Gula the absolute cream of the crop, almost as if you were striving to make him the de facto leader by way of being unbeatable by the others. This would ultimately mean that the plot would be railroaded to focus around your characters feats rather than the actions of the group as a whole. Now, this isn't always a cardinal sin and can be done tastefully if you do it right and ensure everyone has their time to shine, however you also went and made your character some sort of "I will destroy the world and everyone on it" type in what is otherwise a rag tag team of warriors with backgrounds that, while not all tame, aren't all that dramatic either.

Pink's character Satchi is someone who started out following in her father's footsteps and ended up achieving greatness of her own, Dan's character Xalam's is a somewhat rough and tumble sort who's story is reminiscent of both Piccolo jr's and future Trunks': A warrior who started out with a bad hand dealt to him looking to spare a home not truly his own the atrocities of his own home by growing stronger, Chev's Vekon is just someone looking to survive so he can become strong enough to find a way to escape the hostile land he's trapped in, Spriggs' Sinthe is someone who's had greatness more or less forced onto him due to a prophetic belief, and due to his upbringing believes this himself and is actively pursuing the completion of this prophecy, my character Dimitri is essentially a rank and file soldier from a totalitarian world who occasionally struggles with what little of his humanity remains as he's sent to dispatch his predecessors, and Op's Winter is a noble from a powerful family who attempted to resist a coup despite being met with overwhelming odds.

All of these characters can fit into one troupe or another. All of them can be related to in at least one way and can reasonably be made to work with one another with the right incentive. Your character starts off with a decent background, however it takes an abrupt turn when Gula goes from "i'm cool with all of this" to "kill all humans because of the ineptitude of police officers in one incident". Mind you, his saiyan programming should've had him trying to kill everyone on earth from the day he landed, however you chose to have him inexplicably ignore it, which honestly shouldn't be possible considering that it's a subconcious thing that is countered with a sharp blow to the head during infancy (a la Goku). I'm really not trying to be an asshole here, but it just comes off as unnecessarily convoluted.