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LOL!

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Fun fact, I Forsythe came up with an idea for you secondary characters question.
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@rocketrobie2 *Ghost Grinding Teeth Intensifies*
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Hm I'll collab with Lantern when he's here.
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Issues that scream at me.

single nuclear war-head hidden in the pelvic part of the armour


You realize if you fire that, or if it goes off it's good night significant portion of Neuva York good night?

Dynamo on the other hand is different yet similar as he to is good hearted but he takes charge and does something to actively help with the struggle of good vs evil. The Dynamo fingers himself a ladies man though neither him or James has had much luck with women which often ends with Dynamo flirting with women in the most cheesiest of ways
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Is this like, an alter ego he puts on to try and hide his real identity? Or is the suit sentient?

used in the golden age by a villain of the same name.
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Crimson Dynamo wasn't necessary a villain. He was an adversary for Iron Man and some variants were villains yeah, but for the most part he ended up on the Winter Guard so was actually a hero for Russia.

Osborn crazy and the boy's passion to be a hero, he developed the split personality The Dynamo.
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I think you need to check how a split personality disorder happens. It's typically due to an event of high stress where the person can't cope with it, so as a coping mechanism the brain quite often develops a second personality that can deal with it. For example the first Norman Osborne was going through a lot of stress that his contracts were going to be revoked, which lead him to human trials off the drug which coupled with his mental state created the Green Goblin.

Crimson Dynamo suit that he had moved up to his private home at the edge of Nueva York by some low-life's, he may have not run the company but he still had sway in it. From then on The Dynamo personality grew as it repaired the armour and soon The Dynamo emerged onto the skyline of Nueva York city as a force to be reckoned with.
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Surely someone noticed that the suit was moved to his private residence then suddenly the Crimson Dynamo appeared and put one and one together? :P

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Critics my accepted and edits shall be made! Thanks for the once over.

EDIT: worked on most of the issues but it's late here so I gotta get some shut eye. Hopefully I'll finish up tomorrow.
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I've been in the pad awhile but hadn't checked till just now. I missed @Dirty Dan by around forty minutes. I'm putting my son to be in like ten minutes then I'll be free to collab.

I 'Liked' the posts as I read them and enjoyed a lot of what I saw. Language though is an issue for me though, imagine this is happening on standard cable tv and you can't drop five f bombs in a post. I'm fine with bitch, ass, damn, and hell, but stay away from the f bomb and saying [insert God]-damn as well as shit. I know we're all adults for the most part and everyone seems to write very well, but using large amounts of profanity seems juvenile to me and some of the younger posters tend to go overboard way too often. I'm not asking for anybody to go back and edit posts [though if you want to that's cool] but from here on let's try and keep it classy. If you HAVE to have profanity to make your character have their own voice, simply substitute the f bomb with stars like 'f***'.



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I've been in the pad awhile but hadn't checked till just now. I missed @Dirty Dan by around forty minutes. I'm putting my son to be in like ten minutes then I'll be free to collab.

I 'Liked' the posts as I read them and enjoyed a lot of what I saw. Language though is an issue for me though, imagine this is happening on standard cable tv and you can't drop five f bombs in a post. I'm fine with bitch, ass, damn, and hell, but stay away from the f bomb and saying [insert God]-damn as well as shit. I know we're all adults for the most part and everyone seems to write very well, but using large amounts of profanity seems juvenile to me and some of the younger posters tend to go overboard way too often. I'm not asking for anybody to go back and edit posts [though if you want to that's cool] but from here on let's try and keep it classy. If you HAVE to have profanity to make your character have their own voice, simply substitute the f bomb with stars like 'f***'.



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an alternative is use the actual 2099 swears. As they're fun.
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I've finished it. Sorry it took so long.
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I think I've fixed all the issues you had with The Dynamo.
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@Cyrania Accepted. Still a bit powerful, but so long as it isn't overdone in-game I don't mind.

@rocketrobie2 PM'ed you about your CS, some concerns, and suggestions.

When I can catch @Dirty Dan on here we're gonna get that Strange/Ghost Rider crossover going to take down the Thing in the grown up and dangerous Central Park of Nueva York. Should begin with 'a' and end with 'wesome.'

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Should Cyrania join in the Central Park engagement? I could finagle a post positioning myself to join in if you want me there.
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I really want to do the Strange/Ghost Rider bit in my head first, but the Avengers of Alchemax are all over the city looking for Spiderman so you could come across another one of them somewhere. Perhaps Black Panther? Quicksilver could also be all over the place clocking in at just under 800 mph...

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Which one would be greeting newcomers to the city?
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I really want to do the Strange/Ghost Rider bit in my head first, but the Avengers of Alchemax are all over the city looking for Spiderman so you could come across another one of them somewhere. Perhaps Black Panther? Quicksilver could also be all over the place clocking in at just under 800 mph...

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I think @SuperTacticalDerp and @Defacto are using Black Panther.
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I think @SuperTacticalDerp and @Defacto are using Black Panther.


Defacto is actually moving and probably won't be online for like a week. For now, go ahead if you really want Black Panther involved.

EDIT: Straw Poll for 2099 Team - http://strawpoll.me/5285157
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For the record, I know exactly how I'd bring in both the Thunderbolts concept as well as something with the WWII heroes. Winter Guard not so much...

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