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@Savato

I'm sorry. I was unaware that I would need to make such large post while participating in this RP. I'm not sure that this is a good TO for me if that's the case. I'm going to have to drop out. I wish you luck in the future but I can't make large posts like that.
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@floodtalon I'm not asking for such a big post. Look at the smaller ones posted, they don't demand that much effort. But if you're telling me that you can't go beyond a 4 liner, I'm not sure why you're in Casual in the first place.
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@Savato

Alright. I'm sorry I got a bit defensive. I'll try to write bigger posts.
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@floodtalon I was guessing it was because it was your entry post but I agree with spodes. However I also see most times that once people ease into the RP a bit it becomes easier to write 2 paragraphs.
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@floodtalon Yeah Parti's right it becomes quite easy after a while. By the way, could you post your Character sheet in the character tab? You can also come up with a nice name for your character Vault c;
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Not a problem.
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I'm happy for you Vuur, really am. Carry on.
Though I can't promise anything that I'd be back, dunno if I still have rights to my stuff well, you made most of it. Goodluck.
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whoever made that peace be the jounery jutsu. Were you by chance high at the time of making that character?
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Might this still be accepting? I'm freshly new to the site, but not roleplay and I am quite confident I have the chops for this.
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@Polka Yes, yes we are! C: Especially since recent appliers have been rather silent despite my inquiries
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Sorry guys, I hit a wall these last few days. Im not dropping out, I've just been having some RL problems
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As a few of you may have gathered I am interested in joining this, but I wanted to finish my CS before formally submitting my interest. And I have. Naturally any comments, questions, concerns, changes, etc will be taken and hopefully I will end up being accepted into this fantastic RP. For your viewing pleasure, I give you Daisuke.

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@Lost in my Mind

Hey there, we're always accepting new victim role players, Daisuke is pretty solid. I used to have a 20 year chunnin as well, but that was before the time-skip, he would fit in with the others.

His history checks out just fine, there is nothing wrong about it from what i can see. Though it is a bit of a shame that his folks died the year prior, but that's how is history when. Does he have another relatives that that be introduced later down the track as a NPC?

Tanker is his main forte when it comes to fighting, but getting into close quarter combat and your pretty much done for? You just might be a handful for a certain young master. Come to think of it, your and the GM are the only ones that take attacks head on, in order to get your own jutsu in. This will be interesting to see how you fight with others.

But looking at his Jutsu, he pretty much balances himself out. Even though you did say that he does train a lot, how long can he keep up these justsu before he is unable to? We just need you to elaborate a little bit on your fighting style and stamina. Partisan and Savato need to take this into account when doing plot post.

Hammer of the Mountain is what i would consider your A-rank Jutsu, the description that you type down means business, it's goo that your chucked in it's disadvantages, but a good custom Jutsu i will say :)

I give my OK to this, but bear in mind: i am new to reviewing. The other GM's might have other things to say about this and will ask you to change a few things here and there. But from my view: you have created a good character.
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@Akashi Mayhiro
I will respond to your various reviews/questions in the same order presented, I just don't feel like going through the hassle of quoting so I figured I would explain. Also thank you for reviewing so quickly.

At the moment he does not have any other relatives to speak of, though while writing him I was developing a backstory for his family. So there is a distinct possibility that other family members could show up, it would not be a warm greeting however.

If I understood your wording correctly you are saying that if an enemy gets in close combat with Daisuke they are done for? If so that is relatively correct, though of course it depends on the skill of the opponent and the number of them.

Accounting for his affinity for Doton, his stamina/chakra reserves, and his still below average chakra control I would guess that he could maintain the C rank jutsu for an extended period of time, I do not know exact numbers off of the top of my head, B for just above average for that Jutsu, and A rank would be right around average with the possibility of being a bit under depending of course on how large/deep he makes it.

I placed Hammer as a B rank simply because that is what Savato suggested. Depending on what Partisian says I will change it accordingly.

Once more thank you for reviewing my character.
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@Lost in my Mind

Like I said, I am still new to this, but as a co-GM, I will help you if you need it.

Thank you for giving me that chance:)
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@Akashi Mayhiro
I just hope that I manage to join this wonderful RP. Sadly I must go, the sweet siren that is my bed is beckoning me and I fear I have not the mental fortitude to resist it's call.

Until tomorrow everyone.
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@Savato@Partisan@j8cob@Renny Post has been completed, Tatsuya kinda . . . erupted due to being under too much . . .pressure, and I'm bad with volcano puns so just forget I made them. But yeah, post up and it open to everybody, but kinda directed at those near the podium.
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@Lost in my Mind Here is a list of bald anime characters, scroll through. U might find one you like! Awesome character btw! I can dig!
animecharactersdatabase.com/tags.php?i..
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@Akashi Mayhiro@Lost in my Mind Yeah the fist seems more B rank-ish. It's not that special and is extra weak to lightning, as if being earth alone isn't enough. I'm accepting this char since everything checks out.
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Just to let everyone know I have edited Daisuke's history to give context to why he has not been around. Only the final paragraph was changed, Savato has given me his seal, since we worked it out together, but if the other reviewers feel inclined to read the changes they are there. I am relatively certain that it isn't anything that calls for a re-review but I should mention it nonetheless.

Also I won't be on until later on in the afternoon tomorrow, I have college to go to. Expect me back on in roughly 15 hours.
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