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Alright, there hasn't been a post for a day, the RP's dead everyone. Time to pack your shit and head home.
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FUCK
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@Mr Allen JI'm assuming you're joking? I'm currently working on a post with Urban for Cora and Henry.

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There are no jokes on this thread.

Everything is FUCKING serious.
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There are no jokes on this thread.

Everything is FUCKING serious.


Scream like a GOD DAMN howler monkey and CARTWHEEL to safety.
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Defacto Okay, so who's going to carry the corpse?

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We don't work on weekend. I also like to EMPHASIZE certain parts of my sentence. We DON'T joke.
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<Snipped quote by Mr Allen J>

Scream like a GOD DAMN howler monkey and CARTWHEEL to safety.


What sort of random-ass humor is this shit?

Because it certainly isn't funny.
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One thread post per day? Pfft! How about a post per week. That's sound like a great pace to me.
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Defacto Okay, so who's going to carry the corpse?

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@BurningDaisies which week I got? I'd like to have the next.
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@BurningDaisies which week I got? I'd like to have the next.


Think you misread her post, friend.

Pfft! How about a post per week. That's sound like a great pace to me.


It sounds great because you are a heretic.
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Defacto Okay, so who's going to carry the corpse?

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@Mr Allen J life is full of doubts, misread and cake.
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So it's pretty late and I'm really tired. I think I got everything. If there are any issues or I need to change the ability or anything, just let me know. For now though...

Good night!
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Ok, I have no idea why the hider isn't working...

Edit: AAAAAAND FIXED... Bedtime...
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@Nosuchthing Character seems fine with me, though I think the power could use a little tweaking. For the most part, it's fine (Kinda felt it sounded a bit too fantasy, but you turned it around with the science aspects, so I'll let it slide). The first and third forms are fine with me. I just think you need to give them specific weaknesses.

I'm not super sure how I feel about the second form, though. It's abilities are pushing it just a little bit, and it could be changed around a bit.

Also, I should note that the Dynamics section is for relationships with other characters, not family members. Personally, it just clogs it up a bit.

That is all.
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I too drive spidermonkeys for sport.
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Think you misread her post, friend.


Is it the name, the writing, or something else that makes you think, I am female?

Mind you, you can use whatever pronoun suits your fancy, but I was just curious.

I too drive spidermonkeys for sport.


This needs to be an internationally televised--dare I say "Olympic"--sport!
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I edited the power a bit :). Let me know your thoughts.

Also, anyone want to work on some pre-established relationships :)?
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I edited the power a bit :). Let me know your thoughts.

Also, anyone want to work on some pre-established relationships :)?


The one thing I'd like to point out about her character are the potential psychological effects that should be occurring as times goes on. Since the issue is still fairly fresh it's passable that she hasn't suffered from anything yet- but as timeskips occur and as she settles into her new life as a disabled citizen I'd personally like to see that disaster be played with respect in her character. Allen and I were talking and we have no problem with her being in such a calamity- so long as that affects her.

Being shot several times is kinda really bad, but knowing her friends were shot and killed (even if she did or didn't see it, since it's not really stated if she witnessed their deaths or not) should be playing some role in her person. Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (cant stop remembering the night in her dreams), depression (It's my fault they died, I came up with the plan to go to the fair that night. It's my fault it's my fault it's my fault...), general trust issues with people (what if they pull a gun on me? Do I want to run the risk of losing them?), and crowd discomfort (Because she was in a crowded place during the shooting).

A real person would probably have ALL of these things. I'm not a GM, so my word isn't law, but I'd really like to see her character's issues be played with more respect as time goes on- because while it might not be eating her now (two weeks after) it SHOULD be at the one month mark.

Just some food for thought.

This needs to be an internationally televised--dare I say "Olympic"--sport!


Have you smoked your daily dose of green tea and embraced your life as a cactus yet?
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Here we go, took long enough but here we are. Still might edit a few things if need be.




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>Black character
>Blue eyes

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