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and now it appears I have a donkey above my head. *looks up to see an ass* yup...about right.

but I will try to get a post up now. might just put him right in front of the building.
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If I'm welcome, id love to contribute in some way!
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Matt Daman is Mentally Disabled.... I'm not going to unthank that HAHAHAHAHA.
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I'm sorry but I just think that's funny
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Happy to please, but is there any questions/problems regarding my app? I'd love to join this RP!
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I wouldn't be the one to tell you unfortunately. Fortunes Faded or Pirouette would have to give the ok, unless he makes someone else a co-gm you will just have to wait for now.
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Somehow I got the two names confused!!!! For shame... Anyway thanks!
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@Monkeypants The Bourne Dependency.
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I have been but fucking pirouette hasnt been on in forever plus I work overnights so its hard for me to put one out.

But I will have one up today


... Okay.

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Somehow I got the two names confused!!!! For shame... Anyway thanks!


Your character looks fine to me. The only things I would include are what exactly Lisa has her degrees in, because suddenly dropping she's an experiment in underwater basket weaving when the group most needs one is too unfair.

Secondly, Billy's degree of disability should be outlined a bit better. Being a marksman with a rifle requires a great degree of concentration and an acute understanding of bullet drop, wind, distance, etc. it isn't impossible but it would unlikely that a mentally challenged person could complete the task with such precision. Not to mention the psychological impacts of shooting a person, failure to protect someone, and so on, would probably weigh a lot heavier on someone who is mentally challenged as opposed to someone who is not.

Again, Billy isn't an impossible character, but my opinion is that he would have a lesser disability. Perhaps you can include how exactly he is impaired.
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Your character looks fine to me. The only things I would include are what exactly Lisa has her degrees in, because suddenly dropping she's an experiment in underwater basket weaving when the group most needs one is too unfair.

Secondly, Billy's degree of disability should be outlined a bit better. Being a marksman with a rifle requires a great degree of concentration and an acute understanding of bullet drop, wind, distance, etc. it isn't impossible but it would unlikely that a mentally challenged person could complete the task with such precision. Not to mention the psychological impacts of shooting a person, failure to protect someone, and so on, would probably weigh a lot heavier on someone who is mentally challenged as opposed to someone who is not.

Again, Billy isn't an impossible character, but my opinion is that he would have a lesser disability. Perhaps you can include how exactly he is impaired.


^ What Pirouette said. Fix/Clarify those things, and you're good.
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Almost at 100 IC post!
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Almost at 100 IC post!


Woo!
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Wade Wilson bruh.

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I'm waiting on @Symphoni.
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Didn't plan on posting but I have to try to keep up with Hunter here, posting twice before I can get a word in edge-wise.
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Joined your little party up there!
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I love all this action. Haha it's almost hard to keep up with full time work/school but I'm so grateful for the level of activity here. A big thank you to all of the active members of this roleplay. Anything I should know before I post with Sarah?
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I just joined the party with you lot in there. The wailing and sobbing noise Laura heard is obviously Sarah, heh. But you can ignore me if you wish, just met Cole right now.
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en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Autistic_savant

Also, as you stated there was no need for a bio I figured most of those things were largely irrelevant. Especially degree's. Most of it is fluff that would be explored later but not abused.

I can do some research and add a biography for Lisa if you'd like, same with Billy.

I just got the impression that this was more of a horror survival so I didn't put much stock into a biography.

Edit; I added the savant syndrome to Billy and Lisa's 4 degrees, all of which make sense for someone like her! And all useless in a post apocalypse. All that wasted time and money. Also clarified billy's marksman trait. He is not an extreme sniper but is very accurate at range with a rifle. He just has it, just a gifted marksman.

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@SymphoniHaha....be prepared for some hostility pretty one. So excited how this roleplay is turning out.
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