Just a quick note on Svenson, 220 lbs at 6'10" would leave very little weight in muscle, it's likely you would be able to see his ribs at that weight and height.
work in progressViktor Svenson
βHey. Yeah you. Fuck you.β
-Viktor StenbergT H E B A S I C S
|Name|Viktor Alexander Svenson
|Nickname|Thor(He's Swedish after all)
|Birth Date|12/17/98
|Age|18
|Gender|Male
|Sexuality|Heterosexual
|Sexually Active|Yes
|Relationship Status|Single
|Role|Member of Team Red
|Team Color|RedA P P E A R A N C E
|In Depth Appearance|The most immediate thing you notice about Viktor is his size. He was born with Swedish viking blood in his veins and stands an impressive 6'10". His massive height, making him look like a giant, is intimidating to most people. On top of that Viktor maintains a very well built figure, weighing in 220 lbs of solid muscle. Working out in the gym is one of his daily routines.
Viktor's face is chiseled and handsome. He maintains a slight scruff around his mouth and his beautiful hair is an intricate mix between blonde and brown, creating a interesting pattern in his neatly combed hair. Viktor's eyes are a harsh blue color. They seem to beckon people in, the way a snake stares at its prey. After seeing him it is easy to see why they call him Thor. He has the size and looks of a god.
|Clothing Style|Viktor's appearance is always rather fitting on him. Whether he wears a tux or sweats, he always makes his clothes work. Usually, he can be found sporting long sleeve shirts and a heavy leather jacket. However, due to the heat of America, he has changed his appearance to t-shirts, jeans, and tank tops. You will almost never find him wearing a coat in this "heat."
|Scars, Tattoos, Piercings|On his left forearm, there is a quite obvious scar in the shape of a jagged bite mark. Across his chest is a small scar directly above his heart. For tattoos the only one that Viktor has is a small simple tribal tattoo encircling his left bicep. He had no piercings.G E T T I N G T O K N O W M E
|Likes & Dislikes|βThe cold
βSex
βCompetition
βGirls
βAlcohol, especially vodka
βIntimmidation
βPower
βSolitude
βAmerican holidays(rather he just doesn't understand them)
βSoppy movies, or chick flicks
βGuns
βWolves
βDrugs
βHyper active people
βLosing control
|Hobbies|1. Modeling
2. Listening to music
3. Working out
|Habits|1. Getting into fights
2. Clenching his fist
3. Tapping his foot
|Fears|β Wolves
β Doctors
β DeathD E L V I N G D E E P E R
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|Place of Origin|Any city or state is fine. Not everyone is from California.
|History|At least two paragraphs detailing your characterβs past.
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Just a quick note on Svenson, 220 lbs at 6'10" would leave very little weight in muscle, it's likely you would be able to see his ribs at that weight and height.
The face claim you chose looks a bit older to be 18. Might want to choose a younger face claim.
Anyways, it looks good for the most part. A couple of things though: if you could elaborate just a little bit more about their flaws, and add a quick eye color description to the appearance section that would be A+ :)
Also, there were a couple of typos here and there, but it wasn't a huge problem.
@Undine @HushedWhispers
I post another character on page 24 and was wondering if either of you got around to checking the form or not? I mentioned you both but perhaps it didn't work since I did it in the edit.
@HushedWhispers xD No big deal. Here he is.Alexander Bradley Nichols
βIt's better to be hated for what you are than be loved for what you are not.β-AndrΓ© GideT H E B A S I C S
|Name|Alexander Bradley Nichols
|Nickname|Alec is Alexander's most common nickname, something that he started being called at the age of 5. In his opinion, his whole name is just too fancy, however, Alec makes him sound... well, normal. Brad is another nickname, coming from his middle name. Feel free to call him either.
|Birth Date|August 13th, 1997
|Age|18.
|Gender|Cis Male
|Sexuality|Heterosexual.
|Sexually Active|Yep.
|Relationship Status|Single as a pringle.
|Role|Team Pink Leader
|Team Color|Pink.A P P E A R A N C E
|In Depth Appearance|Standing at 5 feet, 11 inches and weighing in at a total of 160 pounds, Alec has chocolate brown hair that is cut short and slightly swept up in the front. His eyes are a warm caramel color, always seeming inviting. His skin is smooth to the touch and could be considered a light tan color from staying outdoors. His cheekbones are defined, giving his face a angular like shape.
|Clothing Style|T-shirts that seem to hug in all the right places can be found on Alec's slightly muscular torso as well as the occasional sweater or two. Jeans are his main bottoms, though maybe some cargo shorts here and there. Sneakers or vans for the finish.
|Scars, Tattoos, Piercings|Alec has a scar on the right side of his face going from his temple down to his jawbone. Approximately 6 inches long.G E T T I N G T O K N O W M E
|Likes & Dislikes|βDogs
βPranks
βArguments over things that he is passionate about.
βSoccer(Football).
βPlaying in the mud or outside in general.
βSummer Nights.
βHarry Potter- the books, that is.
βRock Music- Stuff along the lines of Hinder, Creed, Evanescence and Simple Plan. He doesn't listen to it loudly, but loud enough.βWinter.
βSchool in general. Well, lunch is okay.
βStuck up people.
βCelery.
βBeing judged on his appearance.
βRomance movies.
βBeing told what to do.
βBroken Promises
|Hobbies|β’Playing the Drums.
β’Writing- Poetry, short stories.
β’Swimming.
|Habits|β’Chewing on the eraser end of his pencil or pen.
β’Bouncing his leg up and down when bored.
β’Biting the inside of his cheek randomly.
|Fears|β Losing any bodily limb.
β Ferris Wheels.
β Being forgotten.D E L V I N G D E E P E R
|Personality|β¦ Kind β¦ Energetic β¦ Dependable β¦ Confident β¦Alec is a kind person, always helping and looking out for others. He can't simply help it. If you have a problem, he's the one to come to. He is also very dependable, and when he say's he will get it done, he will. Perhaps not at the exact time that he or you would like, but if you ask him to make a cake, and the boy agrees to do so, expect the cake on your doorstep pretty soon. Along with being dependable, he hates broken promises. When he says the words "I promise" he will stick by that promise until the day he dies to make sure that it is fulfilled.
Despite his fellow Pinks, Alec is not one for gossip, though is a loud and rambunctious person. If there is a party or social activity to be found, he will find it and you can be sure to find him there.
A downside, when Alec tells you that he is confident, he's not lying. The boy has a major ego and cares -perhaps to much- what others think of him.
|Place of Origin|Nashville, Tennessee
|History|Alexander's past is something that he will never talk about unless it is strictly required or you are very close to him. Born in a small right on the outskirts of Nashville, the boy had a drunk of a father and his mother died during giving birth to him. For this, he never has forgiven himself, considering that he thinks his mother's death is his own fault. Not wanting the child, his father gave Alexander up for adoption.
And then the so called adventure started. At the age of 3, he was placed with a loving family. Raised in the household until the age of 6, Alec found out that he was to be a big brother, his so called adoptive parents pregnant with a little girl. However, what the young, naive, child did not know was that the only reason the family had considered adopting him was they thought they were unable to be pregnant. It was 5 months before the end of his temporary mothers pregnancy that he was sent back to the foster home.
It was not until the age of 10 that he was officially adopted by a family in Nashville, and here he was nothing more than a meal ticket. Taking care of the younger children in the household by making sure that they ate as well as seeing to it that they were clothed, bathed and got their homework done, Alec did not care so much for his schooling. Being a D average student has really gotten him nowhere, though as long as the children were taken care of, he could care less about himself. Despite his home life and poor grades, he does and has had lots of friends at school.
Coming to camp at the age of 13 in order to get away from things, Alec pledged pink just 3 years ago at the age of 15 and became the leader of the team just last year.
|Extra|His favorite thing about summer? The warm nights by the bonfire with the stars shining bright in the sky.
Due to living in Tennessee, he does have a country accent.
|Theme Song|Tell Me I'm A Wreck β Every Avenue
βWhen you tell me I'm a wreck
You say that I'm a mess
How could you expect anything less?β