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Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by OldManWong
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Just a quick note on Svenson, 220 lbs at 6'10" would leave very little weight in muscle, it's likely you would be able to see his ribs at that weight and height.
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work in progress



The face claim you chose looks a bit older to be 18. Might want to choose a younger face claim.
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Just a quick note on Svenson, 220 lbs at 6'10" would leave very little weight in muscle, it's likely you would be able to see his ribs at that weight and height.


haha i'm tiny and skinny so i wouldnt know. Ill update that soon

The face claim you chose looks a bit older to be 18. Might want to choose a younger face claim.


Unfortunately I think you are right. I love that face claim, but i guess i'll just have to look through more attractive swedish men o.O
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@HushedWhispersNot sure if you caught my character on p.26
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What. a. day.

Got some food, hoping to post soon.
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Anyways, it looks good for the most part. A couple of things though: if you could elaborate just a little bit more about their flaws, and add a quick eye color description to the appearance section that would be A+ :)

Also, there were a couple of typos here and there, but it wasn't a huge problem.

@HushedWhispers and Undine

I have taken this into account and updated Zeke. Anything else?



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Awesome, I'll start writing up a post when I can. Anyone want to discuss relations? The other grey team members as well as those who have been coming to the camp since forever are probably the best to get right away. I got some other business to take care of but PM me! I'll get around to hopefully everyone the rest of this week.
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Okay, guys sorry for being so silent today. One of my managers texted me and he's going through a really tough time right now with his father's death. I'll still be running the RP and posting but just a head's up as if I don't respond or anything.

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@Undine @HushedWhispers

I post another character on page 24 and was wondering if either of you got around to checking the form or not? I mentioned you both but perhaps it didn't work since I did it in the edit.
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@Undine @HushedWhispers

I post another character on page 24 and was wondering if either of you got around to checking the form or not? I mentioned you both but perhaps it didn't work since I did it in the edit.


Yeah, it was a work in progress, right? Can you please repost the character on this page and I'll take a look-see. LOL.
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@HushedWhispers xD No big deal. Here he is.



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@HushedWhispers xD No big deal. Here he is.



Nice. He's accepted. You may place him within the Character Tab. :)

Also, #DylanO'Brien
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@HushedWhispers

Thanks Miss ^.^
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I'll be posting today before I go in to work. Sorry for not posting yesterday. Things should be sailing rightly now.
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Oh, on a belated note, I'll try and get a post up with Alec sometime today or early tomorrow.

And if anyone would like to discuss the relations between him and your characters, send a PM my way or tag me here!
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Likewise for mine, PM for any relations. I'm a little bit lost as to where to start with this.
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And I got my post up.

With deepest apologies to Mr. Fawn.

Also @OldManWong, since this is your character's first year I'm not sure what you would do with your relations sheet. But hey, I'll PM and we can set up a meeting for our characters if you want.
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