@Kaithas @Prince of Seraphs
I've changed it to two thousand, hopefully this is doable while still remaining a challenge.

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Wow, my entry is way under the word limit now.

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I have to confess that I only skimmed the critique of the other entrees and as that last post didn't have anything in it to differentiate it from being part of the critique above I kinda glanced over it. My apologies for berating you for something that wasn't actually true. If it's not too much trouble I would like an opinion on the clarification I provided for the contest entree.

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It's a limit, not a bar you need to hit, please do be aware of that and it's in place for people like PoS, who mentioned that he has trouble not writing a ton. Any amount of words is fine but you wouldn't want to submit anything under 500 for sure, unless it was pure gold. Either way, you have a ton of time. Until nearly the end of the month.

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See, I'm the opposite of PoS. I have so much trouble getting long stories. I seem to always unconsciously skimp out on details like appearances, character's emotions, etc. that are always so important to a story and that's why I think I don't win as often, despite always seeming to get high praise from readers. They understand what I'm trying to achieve but I don't seem to hit the mark exactly, making a great idea become only a good entry.

Krysthane - Helipad

"Of course I remember what happened, you and Skyra got into a fight with some poeple and Sephia and I made some new friends. I think we finished both of our sections right? So there was just that one last place we had to check out. But we might have new orders now so I guess we'll find out when we get there." Krysthane said cheerily in response to Ebon's question. She watched happily as her other two teammates arrived in time to hear her summary. Krysthane turned to Sephia and said, "Yeah, I'm glad we have an easy mission until we get more used to each other. Anyway lets get going and see what orders we have today." Krysthane nodded in affirmation of her own statement and began walking towards their helicopter-thing.

Poor dear must have been in such a rush. Oh well, I'll accept this for now, and unless the rest of Team Kess has something to say, I'll move you right onto your mission briefing, alright @Eklispe@Ryonara@SevenStormStyle@PyroDash888?

1000 words is more than enough to convey a death. 2000 is definitely enough to throw in even more.

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Quada always liked fish.