[OOC] Heroes of Beacon - the Next Chapter

[HereComesTheSnow]

also team Basilosaurus needs to wake up

[Suku]

well I believe the team is waiting for basl

[Plank Sinatra]

I tagged everyone on the team, we're on our way

[Write]

@Kaithas @Prince of Seraphs
I've changed it to two thousand, hopefully this is doable while still remaining a challenge.

[Guess Who]

@Kaithas @Prince of Seraphs
I've changed it to two thousand, hopefully this is doable while still remaining a challenge.

@Write

Wow, my entry is way under the word limit now.

[Write]

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Wow, my entry is way under the word limit now.

@Guess Who

It's a limit, not a bar you need to hit, please do be aware of that and it's in place for people like PoS, who mentioned that he has trouble not writing a ton. Any amount of words is fine but you wouldn't want to submit anything under 500 for sure, unless it was pure gold. Either way, you have a ton of time. Until nearly the end of the month.

[Lugubrious]

Re-tallying complete. As luck would have it, my ruling turned out pretty similar to last time, with some minor editations in the reviews. All scores stand as previously.

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I have to confess that I only skimmed the critique of the other entrees and as that last post didn't have anything in it to differentiate it from being part of the critique above I kinda glanced over it. My apologies for berating you for something that wasn't actually true. If it's not too much trouble I would like an opinion on the clarification I provided for the contest entree.

@Prince of Seraphs

Das okay. The clarificaton makes a lot of difference, and makes me think better of your entry, but the entry itself can't be changed afterward.

[Guess Who]

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It's a limit, not a bar you need to hit, please do be aware of that and it's in place for people like PoS, who mentioned that he has trouble not writing a ton. Any amount of words is fine but you wouldn't want to submit anything under 500 for sure, unless it was pure gold. Either way, you have a ton of time. Until nearly the end of the month.

@Write

See, I'm the opposite of PoS. I have so much trouble getting long stories. I seem to always unconsciously skimp out on details like appearances, character's emotions, etc. that are always so important to a story and that's why I think I don't win as often, despite always seeming to get high praise from readers. They understand what I'm trying to achieve but I don't seem to hit the mark exactly, making a great idea become only a good entry.

[Write]

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See, I'm the opposite of PoS. I have so much trouble getting long stories. I seem to always unconsciously skimp out on details like appearances, character's emotions, etc. that are always so important to a story and that's why I think I don't win as often, despite always seeming to get high praise from readers. They understand what I'm trying to achieve but I don't seem to hit the mark exactly, making a great idea become only a good entry.

@Guess Who

The best I can give you is to work on it and know your patterns. If you find that you always cut stuff out, leave it in and revise it later. You have just over half the month, there's no hurry.

[Abillioncats]

I'm debating whether I want to use Emerald for the next contest or not. I was thinking I could use my other character Violet because she needs more love.

[Eklispe]

wrong tab

[Guess Who]

Krysthane - Helipad

"Of course I remember what happened, you and Skyra got into a fight with some poeple and Sephia and I made some new friends. I think we finished both of our sections right? So there was just that one last place we had to check out. But we might have new orders now so I guess we'll find out when we get there." Krysthane said cheerily in response to Ebon's question. She watched happily as her other two teammates arrived in time to hear her summary. Krysthane turned to Sephia and said, "Yeah, I'm glad we have an easy mission until we get more used to each other. Anyway lets get going and see what orders we have today." Krysthane nodded in affirmation of her own statement and began walking towards their helicopter-thing.

@Eklispe

Uhh, I think you posted in the wrong tab.

[Lucius Cypher]

Poor dear must have been in such a rush. Oh well, I'll accept this for now, and unless the rest of Team Kess has something to say, I'll move you right onto your mission briefing, alright @Eklispe@Ryonara@SevenStormStyle@PyroDash888?

[Nytem4re]

I'll try to post soon. A bit busy, but I have some time now.

Also, Write, did you mean Darkness my old Friend instead of fried? Or was that a joke I'm missing...

And about the whole contest thing, Maybe there should be more than one judge, preferably from those who did not make an entry. Might help prevent some of the disagreements about the outcome. Or maybe it's a horrible idea, just throwing things out there.

[SevenStormStyle]

Poor dear must have been in such a rush. Oh well, I'll accept this for now, and unless the rest of Team Kess has something to say, I'll move you right onto your mission briefing, alright @Eklispe@Ryonara@SevenStormStyle@PyroDash888?

@Lucius Cypher

I know I'm ready to hop to!

[Lady Seraphina]

@Eklispe

Prince of Seraphs - The Internet

Prince stared, surprised as the fictional character appeared before him and started to speak as though still in there own world. He stood rooted to the stop unable to do anything except make sarcastic comments.

[Lucius Cypher]

Lucius Cypher

Looking back towards his computer as he waits for Fallout 4 to finish loading, Lucius notices that Krysthane from the RWBY RP has posted in he OOC. Curious Lucius plays ago and shortly returns to what he was doing before.

[Crimmy]

1000 words is more than enough to convey a death. 2000 is definitely enough to throw in even more.

Besides




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Quada always liked fish.

[Guess Who]

Guess Who - Trying to Hop onto the Bandwagon

Seeing both Lucius and Prince posting in the OOC as they do for their IC posts, Guess Who tried doing the same. The joke had probably already gotten old and he was most likely just being annoying, but he did it anyway. Not like he had anything else to do... like play Fallout 4... because he was poor.

[Abillioncats]

1000 words is more than enough to convey a death. 2000 is definitely enough to throw in even more.

Besides




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Quada always liked fish.

@Crimmy

;_;