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Accepted KoL, now get out of here, wait stay here and put the character in the character section.

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Looks good Silver


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Kay couple things I want to ask.

Please shorten the name to just Neme please or have it be a reasonable length.

If he's bad at martial arts, then how could he be properly trained to fight with martial arts.

Could you post a picture of this Father from FMA brotherhood, because some people like me don't know what it is.

@TheWindel You want to add anything to this or have any comments ?

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No, Wait Yeah I'll make it up, but not right now, probably later, or tomorrow, hell I may do it right now or probably another time, who knows, it's probably unlikely
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@Wyverntamer

So how exactly does he manipulate people? And if he's an Onyxian, what are his blood powers?
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The semester is over; you guys need another Onyxian?
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The semester is over; you guys need another Onyxian?


Hey if you got an idea throw it out there G.S
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This is going to be one badass rp.
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Kay couple things I want to ask.

Please shorten the name to just Neme please or have it be a reasonable length.

If he's bad at martial arts, then how could he be properly trained to fight with martial arts.

Could you post a picture of this Father from FMA brotherhood, because some people like me don't know what it is.

@TheWindel You want to add anything to this or have any comments ?

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No, Wait Yeah I'll make it up, but not right now, probably later, or tomorrow, hell I may do it right now or probably another time, who knows, it's probably unlikely


I said he was bad at martial arts, I mainly revered to his current age though, with him being older and living on the streets for a long time, he hasn't trained in all that long.
I also edited that one in.

@Wyverntamer

So how exactly does he manipulate people? And if he's an Onyxian, what are his blood powers?


He's an Onyxian, his construct is the sword I mentioned, and he influences people through his words.
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No, Wait Yeah I'll make it up, but not right now, probably later, or tomorrow, hell I may do it right now or probably another time, who knows, it's probably unlikely


Ok, you leave me no choice, then. Maybe this will make you reach enlightenment:



Also, would it be fair to use one's extremely iron-rich blood to create magnetic fields and produce electricity?
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Ok, you leave me no choice, then. Maybe this will make you reach enlightenment:



Also, would it be fair to use one's extremely iron-rich blood to create magnetic fields and produce electricity?


Enlightenment can't reach me KoL, Because I'm already dead.

Why haven't you added your character to the Character section yet ?!

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I said he was bad at martial arts, I mainly revered to his current age though, with him being older and living on the streets for a long time, he hasn't trained in all that long.
I also edited that one in.

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He's an Onyxian, his construct is the sword I mentioned, and he influences people through his words.


Alright then, I'll accept him, just add the pic to the cs and throw it into the CS bin.
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Finally, after much revision


Hope thats satisfactory. Lemme know if you've got any problems/suggestions/quips.
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Hey, sorry I've been rather absent. I still have interest in this, if you'll still have me. I know I should've said this earlier, but I wanted to see how the factions would end up and which would need another character more than the other ^^;
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@Daxam Onyxians, onnnnnnyxians.

I'm working on mine right now, gotta decide on his history and write up his personality then he'll be done, but the idea is already there.
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@Daxam Onyxians, onnnnnnyxians.

I'm working on mine right now, gotta decide on his history and write up his personality then he'll be done, but the idea is already there.


Yeah, that's what it's looking like. I just need to think of a blood power for him
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T H E B L A C K R E C L U S E



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N A M E
Ishihara Jirou


E P I T H E T
The Black Recluse


A G E
Twenty-Five


G E N D E R
Male


C O N S T R U C T
Black Blood Recluse: Four arachnid legs project from Jirou's body, usually his back. They have spear-like tips coated in a necrotic venom which are capable of puncturing armored prey, serrated edges for slicing flesh, and can be used to spring away or climb sheer surfaces. They move shockingly fast, and Jirou uses them like extensions of his own body.


M O R A L I T Y
Chaotic Good


A P P E A R A N C E

When unmasked, Jirou appears to be fairly normal, and some would say easily forgettable. He has short black hair and dark eyes, is of an average height, and does not have any features that stand out.


P E R S O N A L I T Y
When he was younger, before the Onyx virus, Jirou was a shy and unassuming youth. Dedicated to his family, and proving his worth to his father, he diligently pursued his studies in Computer Engineering, hoping to ride the rise in demand for technology majors into a high paying job to support his family and, perhaps, start one of his own. That all changed in 2016. He hasn't been able to make contact with his family since the viruses release, and it is clear that his plans for life have been irrevocably shattered.

Left without his family or anyone he cared about for the intervening years, Jirou has become far more self-reliant than he ever expected to be. You can trust no one in modern Kyushu, and he has taken that mantra to heart, doing everything he can alone and never leaving himself indebted to others. He has discarded his dreams of a luxurious life, and instead turned his diligence into mastering his powers and securing his position in the new world that the island has become. Despite his earlier reservations, he will not hesitate to kill to protect himself from invalids, hunters, or, sometimes, other survivors.

As his confidence in his abilities slowly grows, so too do his ambitions. He has begun to see the potential to turn the island of Kyushu into more than a prison, and is willing to do anything it takes to follow his new path.


H I S T O R Y
When the Onyx Virus was first developed in 2013, Jirou was a young man on his way to studying at a University in Fukuoka. Three years later when the virus struck Kyushu, he had been approaching his final year in that University, and steeling himself for a life dedicated to advancing in his career. Nothing could have prepared that inexperienced young man for the ramifications of the event. One minute he was studying, and the next the casualties rising around him were tantamount to genocide, and all the while the hideous transformations occurring to those around him seemed to have no effect on him.

Then, attacked by invalids, he discovered his powers. He closed his eyes, shielding his face with his arms, and heard more than felt his shirt tear open from behind. Then, when he opened his eyes, his construct was hanging in front of him, dripping black blood. Over the next few years he changed. Embittered by the realization that instead of seeking a cure, his government had opted to exterminate those like him, regardless of the fact that unlike the invalids they were still cognizant citizens. Instead of running and hiding as he once did, he has chosen to make war on the Hunters and wishes to gather other Onyxians to his side.

Despite the risk of discovery by hunters, he has been extorting a community of survivors, providing protection from invalids in exchange for resources and shelter. When unmasked, he blends seamlessly among them.


S K I L L S
Average Swordsman; Average Shot; Hardcore Parkour; Good Cook; Adept Driver; Good W/ Computers/Machines


O T H E R
  • Scavenged Weapons: Sword Cane; Desert Eagle .50
  • His suit has holes in the back, so he can use his abilities without tearing it.


T H E M E



Hey Guilty, there was a reason why Onyxians didn't have a weapons section in the cs, it was because they had super powers, also a Desert Eagle man that's so clitche and overly strong, no skill or class to them just raw dumb strength, I'll let @TheWindel give a little thought on your char as well.
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"Hardcore Parkour"

huehuehue
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@Spriggs27 Well, my character doesn't have any skill or class so I don't mind that insult to my choice. Maybe a lack of skill or class is why the hunter he took it from is dead, it's not like he bought the gun.

As for having no weapons, he doesn't need them of course, but why wouldn't he pick them up from a corpse?

Edit: Unless you contrive some special effect of the Onyxian virus which makes them unable to use conventional weapons, I'm going to stick to my decision, and if he can't have them at the start I'll just pick up the first guns I can get in the IC. A note on the Desert Eagle, I purposefully chose a gun weaker than Kol's S&W 500, which you didn't have any comment on.
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Deagle is shit irl, mayne. Can't Juan Deag people like you do on them vidya games. If you want stopping power go for a .44 Magnum. Way more accurate, way more variety of weapons that can fire it, faster flight speed, etc etc etc.
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Deagle is shit irl, mayne. Can't Juan Deag people like you do on them vidya games. If you want stopping power go for a .44 Magnum. Way more accurate, way more variety of weapons that can fire it, faster flight speed, etc etc etc.


gr8 suggestion m8, but again Jirou didn't go shopping in gun catalogs, and he has no previous gun/military experience, so I'm not too concerned with him having a shitty gun.
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@Spriggs27 Well, my character doesn't have any skill or class so I don't mind that insult to my choice. Maybe a lack of skill or class is why the hunter he took it from is dead, it's not like he bought the gun.

As for having no weapons, he doesn't need them of course, but why wouldn't he pick them up from a corpse?

Edit: Unless you contrive some special effect of the Onyxian virus which makes them unable to use conventional weapons, I'm going to stick to my decision, and if he can't have them at the start I'll just pick up the first guns I can get in the IC. A note on the Desert Eagle, I purposefully chose a gun weaker than Kol's S&W 500, which you didn't have any comment on.


Oh no I'm not saying Onyxians can't, I was just pointing out that your powers could just be better than weapons, I really didn't care if someone wanted a gun and super powers, kinda wish you said he got it from a dead guy first because I would've argued that Japan doesn't sell guns of that size so nice thinking.

Well to be honest with you I don't like KoL having a lot of power in her hands, so that's why I let her have a bigass hand cannon that will shatter her arm when she first use it, why do you think she's not a Co-gm, *Cough* I mean, yeah like I said before shes a merc really so she could've brought it with her on a shitty coach flight to Japan.

I'll let my partner in crime @TheWindel take a look at it too since I really never let him get too much of a look at some of the other character sheets, hey look it's nothing personal pal.
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