[OOC] Onikisu

[KoL]

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Accepted KoL, now get out of here, wait stay here and put the character in the character section.

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Looks good Silver

@Spriggs27

"Make up your mind, man!"

[Spriggs27]

my char

Name
Neme Lows Virkr Morvel Prow Kredni Sxird Vlerman Robert Iardro Qverxs Jorian Grar ((Yes I can pronounce that))

Epithet/Moniker
Man of many names, the old lord

Age
67

Gender
Male

Construct
A sword with a few ornamental spikes on it. These will be pulled into the blade if attempted to make contact with them and at will of Neme, granting a few extra centimeters per spike

Morality
Neutral Good

Appearance
He looks like Father, from FMA Brotherhood, only with his hair grey instead of blonde.

Personality
"Neme, magnificent bastard that you are, come here!" - Neme's brother, about his personality
Neme likes to fool around with people, using his many names as a way to do that. He also likes reading and martial arts, mainly to watch though, he isn't all that good at them. If one were to offer him a peaceful way to resolve things, he would go for that option, but he has no problems at all with killing. Neme also likes to use other people as unwilling pawns in his plans, it even doesn't have to be that they do something they wouldn't otherwise do, just that it works for him, most people wouldn't like what he does though.
Neme also is an Magnificent bastard

History
Neme was born into a family of weirdos, not that he minded it, no, he loved his family, especially his brother, Meron, or as he actually was called, Meron Nawor Cari Pzor Bres Krion Grar, yeah, his parents were out of name ideas with his brother. Neme's father was a world known business man, who was mainly known for always making some coin of even the most impossible of operations. His mother was just that, if not a tad bit crazy.

Neme would start manipulating people at the age of five, trying to get a few coins of his bullies, he started by trying to become their target once more, because they had found another target. Once he regained their attention, he also worked himself up their ranking ladder, and even took out their main rivals when it came to bullying. He made some money off of them, but he ultimately decided that that was not his style. He learned in order to become a more influential person, and succeeded. At the age of twenty, he had attained the title of 'Lord', but unfortunately, at the age of thirty, he lost everything in an incident. Forcing him to become a beggar. He still was influential though, and soon he had build up his own form of an empire, ruling the streets through beggars. Nobody ever suspected him to be the one who ruled them though, as he also took on the lowest rank, of an 'eye' for himself. Some people weren't happy with that though, and they started calling him 'old lord', revering to both his age at the time (45) and the fact that he used to be a lord. His kingdom however, didn't last for too long, when the Onyx virus came, he was infected, luckily, he became an Onyxian, unluckily, everyone saw it happening.

Skills
Trained martial arts: Neme is trained in the martial arts.
Manipulative: At a very young age, Neme had learned that manipulating people was the way to go through life, he lives by that philosophy.

Other
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@Wyverntamer

Kay couple things I want to ask.

Please shorten the name to just Neme please or have it be a reasonable length.

If he's bad at martial arts, then how could he be properly trained to fight with martial arts.

Could you post a picture of this Father from FMA brotherhood, because some people like me don't know what it is.

@TheWindel You want to add anything to this or have any comments ?

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"Make up your mind, man!"

@KoL

No, Wait Yeah I'll make it up, but not right now, probably later, or tomorrow, hell I may do it right now or probably another time, who knows, it's probably unlikely

[TheWendil]

@Wyverntamer

So how exactly does he manipulate people? And if he's an Onyxian, what are his blood powers?

[Guilty Spark]

The semester is over; you guys need another Onyxian?

[Spriggs27]

The semester is over; you guys need another Onyxian?

@Guilty Spark

Hey if you got an idea throw it out there G.S

[l0ck0n]

This is going to be one badass rp.

[Wyverntamer]

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Kay couple things I want to ask.

Please shorten the name to just Neme please or have it be a reasonable length.

If he's bad at martial arts, then how could he be properly trained to fight with martial arts.

Could you post a picture of this Father from FMA brotherhood, because some people like me don't know what it is.

@TheWindel You want to add anything to this or have any comments ?

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No, Wait Yeah I'll make it up, but not right now, probably later, or tomorrow, hell I may do it right now or probably another time, who knows, it's probably unlikely

@Spriggs27

I said he was bad at martial arts, I mainly revered to his current age though, with him being older and living on the streets for a long time, he hasn't trained in all that long.
I also edited that one in.

@Wyverntamer

So how exactly does he manipulate people? And if he's an Onyxian, what are his blood powers?

@TheWindel

He's an Onyxian, his construct is the sword I mentioned, and he influences people through his words.

[KoL]

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No, Wait Yeah I'll make it up, but not right now, probably later, or tomorrow, hell I may do it right now or probably another time, who knows, it's probably unlikely

@Spriggs27

Ok, you leave me no choice, then. Maybe this will make you reach enlightenment:



Also, would it be fair to use one's extremely iron-rich blood to create magnetic fields and produce electricity?

[Spriggs27]

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Ok, you leave me no choice, then. Maybe this will make you reach enlightenment:



Also, would it be fair to use one's extremely iron-rich blood to create magnetic fields and produce electricity?

@KoL

Enlightenment can't reach me KoL, Because I'm already dead.

Why haven't you added your character to the Character section yet ?!

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I said he was bad at martial arts, I mainly revered to his current age though, with him being older and living on the streets for a long time, he hasn't trained in all that long.
I also edited that one in.

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He's an Onyxian, his construct is the sword I mentioned, and he influences people through his words.

@Wyverntamer

Alright then, I'll accept him, just add the pic to the cs and throw it into the CS bin.

[ghastlyInc]

Finally, after much revision

Jing Hibiki

Onyxian
Name
Jing Hibiki

Epithet/Moniker
The Vagabond

Age
26

Gender
Male

Construct
The Maw-The Maw consist of two hardened bone ‘barrels’ embedded in Jings arms , running from the elbows to the palms that function as crude, if obscenely effective, firearms.
Ammunition is produced internally, by two specialized organs hidden just behind the lungs. One separates and crystallizes white blood cells present in his blackblood while the other diffuses fat present in blood to form a volatile propellant. . These bullets react negatively to the physiology of other Onxyians, crystallizing slowly like a cancer. Rapid removal is often the wisest, if more unpleasant choice. Humans, curiously, seem to have no negative reaction to these charges (apart from the normal problems one encounters after being shot.) A full ‘load’ of bullets (approximately 90 standard shots) can be made over the course of a half hour.
Jing favors his right arm for long range, though its distance and power are more comparable to a standard hunting rifle than the high powered military grade snipers carried by many hunters. If force to assign a comparable caliber to it, Jing would estimate it ranges close to a .308
The left arm is favored for short range. While its stopping power is certainly effective(comparable to .357 round), its range leaves a lot to be desired, being only 40 meters at its best.

Morality
Neutral Good

Appearance


Personality
Jing is a bit of a knight in sour armor. Life in the quarantine zone is hardly a cakewalk(hell, life before it wasn't much worse), but between the ravenous Invalid and mercs from the J.S.D.F its hard for him to believe in the typical spiel of truth, justice and due process. He’s done his best to impose a little civil order in the QZ as he can, picking off packs of Invalids that wander too close to to safe camps or any dangerous Onyxians who do the same. He tends to logic these good deeds away as being entirely practical, killing the Onyxian’s keep the mercs away and killing Invalids helps everyone.

History

Before the bombs dropped, Jing enjoyed the peaceful life of being a rookie detective on Kyushu’s resident police force. Violent crimes were rare on the island, so his services were more typically called in to eliminate foul play in suicide cases. Sure, there was the occasional sick bastard who’d off his wife in the middle of the night with a golf trophy, but in his 4 year tenure as a detective he only worked on a handful of such cases.

Looking back on it, he sometimes wonders if that why the police forced fell so quickly. Its difficult for any force to suddenly lose 75% of its staff and keep order, even more so when that staff turns to eating their former coworkers. What few cops left tried to set up a safe zone for people in the QZ, and it worked for a while, and it seemed like whatever hell had been unleashed would atleast be kept at bay.

Nobody knew what an Onyxian was when the government made them public knowledge, at least not really, but that didn't stop people from blaming them for ‘Armageddon’ (as if any sane creature would wish this kind of hell on anyone). It didnt take long for the witch hunts to start, people needed something, anything, to lynch. Jing couldn't remember how many folks he was forced to detain under suspicion. And he sure as hell didn't want to remember how many he watched get thrown the invalids or how young they were. He sat and watched as the safe zone slowly ate itself, amazed that nobody was trying to stop the madness.

Eventually, there were only a handful of people left. Stand offs became a daily routine, and warding off the invalids became increasingly difficult. After watching former chief of police shoot someone over a day's water ration, he’d had enough. With the only thing worth saving in the base being a couple of pounds of dried and canned food, he took as much as he could carry and left.

Over the next few months he camped all across the QZ, slowly coming into his powers and avoiding other people like the plague (so to speak.). By the time the first hunters made landfall, Jing had enough mastery over his own abilities to traverse across the island with little effort or supplies beyond food. However, not wanting to risk coming under their radar, he keeps low, spending most of the scavenging cigarettes from convenience stores or culling invalid hordes, only risking occasional quick jaunts into human safe zones to steal rations.

Skills
Police training: Jing is an adequate shot and is well versed in the modern martial combative techniques taught to most officers.
Tracking: His time as a detective has given Jing some insight in tracking others down and hiding his own tracks.
Lay of the land: while living alone in the QZ, Jing has had to develop a working mental map of the city, making him difficult to corner. He’s also taken the time to place various safe houses with small ration supplies (almost entirely food. He really needs not much else).

Other
Theme:

Hope thats satisfactory. Lemme know if you've got any problems/suggestions/quips.

[Daxam]

Hey, sorry I've been rather absent. I still have interest in this, if you'll still have me. I know I should've said this earlier, but I wanted to see how the factions would end up and which would need another character more than the other ^^;

[Guilty Spark]

@Daxam Onyxians, onnnnnnyxians.

I'm working on mine right now, gotta decide on his history and write up his personality then he'll be done, but the idea is already there.

[Daxam]

@Daxam Onyxians, onnnnnnyxians.

I'm working on mine right now, gotta decide on his history and write up his personality then he'll be done, but the idea is already there.

@Guilty Spark

Yeah, that's what it's looking like. I just need to think of a blood power for him

[Guilty Spark]

T H E B L A C K R E C L U S E

"..."

Hider

N A M E

Ishihara Jirou

E P I T H E T

The Black Recluse

A G E

Twenty-Five

G E N D E R

Male

C O N S T R U C T

Black Blood Recluse: Four arachnid legs project from Jirou's body, usually his back. They have spear-like tips coated in a necrotic venom which are capable of puncturing armored prey, serrated edges for slicing flesh, and can be used to spring away or climb sheer surfaces. They move shockingly fast, and Jirou uses them like extensions of his own body.

M O R A L I T Y

Chaotic Good

A P P E A R A N C E

When unmasked, Jirou appears to be fairly normal, and some would say easily forgettable. He has short black hair and dark eyes, is of an average height, and does not have any features that stand out.

P E R S O N A L I T Y

When he was younger, before the Onyx virus, Jirou was a shy and unassuming youth. Dedicated to his family, and proving his worth to his father, he diligently pursued his studies in Computer Engineering, hoping to ride the rise in demand for technology majors into a high paying job to support his family and, perhaps, start one of his own. That all changed in 2016. He hasn't been able to make contact with his family since the viruses release, and it is clear that his plans for life have been irrevocably shattered.

Left without his family or anyone he cared about for the intervening years, Jirou has become far more self-reliant than he ever expected to be. You can trust no one in modern Kyushu, and he has taken that mantra to heart, doing everything he can alone and never leaving himself indebted to others. He has discarded his dreams of a luxurious life, and instead turned his diligence into mastering his powers and securing his position in the new world that the island has become. Despite his earlier reservations, he will not hesitate to kill to protect himself from invalids, hunters, or, sometimes, other survivors.

As his confidence in his abilities slowly grows, so too do his ambitions. He has begun to see the potential to turn the island of Kyushu into more than a prison, and is willing to do anything it takes to follow his new path.

H I S T O R Y

When the Onyx Virus was first developed in 2013, Jirou was a young man on his way to studying at a University in Fukuoka. Three years later when the virus struck Kyushu, he had been approaching his final year in that University, and steeling himself for a life dedicated to advancing in his career. Nothing could have prepared that inexperienced young man for the ramifications of the event. One minute he was studying, and the next the casualties rising around him were tantamount to genocide, and all the while the hideous transformations occurring to those around him seemed to have no effect on him.

Then, attacked by invalids, he discovered his powers. He closed his eyes, shielding his face with his arms, and heard more than felt his shirt tear open from behind. Then, when he opened his eyes, his construct was hanging in front of him, dripping black blood. Over the next few years he changed. Embittered by the realization that instead of seeking a cure, his government had opted to exterminate those like him, regardless of the fact that unlike the invalids they were still cognizant citizens. Instead of running and hiding as he once did, he has chosen to make war on the Hunters and wishes to gather other Onyxians to his side.

Despite the risk of discovery by hunters, he has been extorting a community of survivors, providing protection from invalids in exchange for resources and shelter. When unmasked, he blends seamlessly among them.

S K I L L S

Average Swordsman; Average Shot; Hardcore Parkour; Good Cook; Adept Driver; Good W/ Computers/Machines

O T H E R

• Scavenged Weapons: Sword Cane; Desert Eagle .50
• His suit has holes in the back, so he can use his abilities without tearing it.

T H E M E

[Spriggs27]

T H E B L A C K R E C L U S E

"..."

N A M E

Ishihara Jirou

E P I T H E T

The Black Recluse

A G E

Twenty-Five

G E N D E R

Male

C O N S T R U C T

Black Blood Recluse: Four arachnid legs project from Jirou's body, usually his back. They have spear-like tips coated in a necrotic venom which are capable of puncturing armored prey, serrated edges for slicing flesh, and can be used to spring away or climb sheer surfaces. They move shockingly fast, and Jirou uses them like extensions of his own body.

M O R A L I T Y

Chaotic Good

A P P E A R A N C E

When unmasked, Jirou appears to be fairly normal, and some would say easily forgettable. He has short black hair and dark eyes, is of an average height, and does not have any features that stand out.

P E R S O N A L I T Y

When he was younger, before the Onyx virus, Jirou was a shy and unassuming youth. Dedicated to his family, and proving his worth to his father, he diligently pursued his studies in Computer Engineering, hoping to ride the rise in demand for technology majors into a high paying job to support his family and, perhaps, start one of his own. That all changed in 2016. He hasn't been able to make contact with his family since the viruses release, and it is clear that his plans for life have been irrevocably shattered.

Left without his family or anyone he cared about for the intervening years, Jirou has become far more self-reliant than he ever expected to be. You can trust no one in modern Kyushu, and he has taken that mantra to heart, doing everything he can alone and never leaving himself indebted to others. He has discarded his dreams of a luxurious life, and instead turned his diligence into mastering his powers and securing his position in the new world that the island has become. Despite his earlier reservations, he will not hesitate to kill to protect himself from invalids, hunters, or, sometimes, other survivors.

As his confidence in his abilities slowly grows, so too do his ambitions. He has begun to see the potential to turn the island of Kyushu into more than a prison, and is willing to do anything it takes to follow his new path.

H I S T O R Y

When the Onyx Virus was first developed in 2013, Jirou was a young man on his way to studying at a University in Fukuoka. Three years later when the virus struck Kyushu, he had been approaching his final year in that University, and steeling himself for a life dedicated to advancing in his career. Nothing could have prepared that inexperienced young man for the ramifications of the event. One minute he was studying, and the next the casualties rising around him were tantamount to genocide, and all the while the hideous transformations occurring to those around him seemed to have no effect on him.

Then, attacked by invalids, he discovered his powers. He closed his eyes, shielding his face with his arms, and heard more than felt his shirt tear open from behind. Then, when he opened his eyes, his construct was hanging in front of him, dripping black blood. Over the next few years he changed. Embittered by the realization that instead of seeking a cure, his government had opted to exterminate those like him, regardless of the fact that unlike the invalids they were still cognizant citizens. Instead of running and hiding as he once did, he has chosen to make war on the Hunters and wishes to gather other Onyxians to his side.

Despite the risk of discovery by hunters, he has been extorting a community of survivors, providing protection from invalids in exchange for resources and shelter. When unmasked, he blends seamlessly among them.

S K I L L S

Average Swordsman; Average Shot; Hardcore Parkour; Good Cook; Adept Driver; Good W/ Computers/Machines

O T H E R

• Scavenged Weapons: Sword Cane; Desert Eagle .50
• His suit has holes in the back, so he can use his abilities without tearing it.

T H E M E

@Guilty Spark

Hey Guilty, there was a reason why Onyxians didn't have a weapons section in the cs, it was because they had super powers, also a Desert Eagle man that's so clitche and overly strong, no skill or class to them just raw dumb strength, I'll let @TheWindel give a little thought on your char as well.

[j8cob]

"Hardcore Parkour"

huehuehue

[Guilty Spark]

@Spriggs27 Well, my character doesn't have any skill or class so I don't mind that insult to my choice. Maybe a lack of skill or class is why the hunter he took it from is dead, it's not like he bought the gun.

As for having no weapons, he doesn't need them of course, but why wouldn't he pick them up from a corpse?

Edit: Unless you contrive some special effect of the Onyxian virus which makes them unable to use conventional weapons, I'm going to stick to my decision, and if he can't have them at the start I'll just pick up the first guns I can get in the IC. A note on the Desert Eagle, I purposefully chose a gun weaker than Kol's S&W 500, which you didn't have any comment on.

[j8cob]

Deagle is shit irl, mayne. Can't Juan Deag people like you do on them vidya games. If you want stopping power go for a .44 Magnum. Way more accurate, way more variety of weapons that can fire it, faster flight speed, etc etc etc.

[Guilty Spark]

Deagle is shit irl, mayne. Can't Juan Deag people like you do on them vidya games. If you want stopping power go for a .44 Magnum. Way more accurate, way more variety of weapons that can fire it, faster flight speed, etc etc etc.

@j8cob

gr8 suggestion m8, but again Jirou didn't go shopping in gun catalogs, and he has no previous gun/military experience, so I'm not too concerned with him having a shitty gun.

[Spriggs27]

@Spriggs27 Well, my character doesn't have any skill or class so I don't mind that insult to my choice. Maybe a lack of skill or class is why the hunter he took it from is dead, it's not like he bought the gun.

As for having no weapons, he doesn't need them of course, but why wouldn't he pick them up from a corpse?

Edit: Unless you contrive some special effect of the Onyxian virus which makes them unable to use conventional weapons, I'm going to stick to my decision, and if he can't have them at the start I'll just pick up the first guns I can get in the IC. A note on the Desert Eagle, I purposefully chose a gun weaker than Kol's S&W 500, which you didn't have any comment on.

@Guilty Spark

Oh no I'm not saying Onyxians can't, I was just pointing out that your powers could just be better than weapons, I really didn't care if someone wanted a gun and super powers, kinda wish you said he got it from a dead guy first because I would've argued that Japan doesn't sell guns of that size so nice thinking.

Well to be honest with you I don't like KoL having a lot of power in her hands, so that's why I let her have a bigass hand cannon that will shatter her arm when she first use it, why do you think she's not a Co-gm, *Cough* I mean, yeah like I said before shes a merc really so she could've brought it with her on a shitty coach flight to Japan.

I'll let my partner in crime @TheWindel take a look at it too since I really never let him get too much of a look at some of the other character sheets, hey look it's nothing personal pal.