Blargh
Probably not gonna get the next day up until tomorrow
Probably not gonna get the next day up until tomorrow
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Woah hold your horse there bucko. I certainly wasn't thinking anything sexual when I bite peoples hands, and considering that people bite as an attack in good ol anime logic. I saw it as nothing more than a humor laugh it off situation, not "oh kinky;)" Yet if peoples first instinct was to treat it as a sexual situation then thats kind of sad. Mostly if they read they would see they are currently annoyed by each other.
Integrity, a characteristic necessary for good leaders, is the ability to continue to do what's right when nobody's watching.
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I only brought up the kinky bit saying that it was a possible interpretation that I didn't think was the case. My first guess was the correct one: that they're childish. Just so you know, there's a world of difference between the opposite of serious and the opposite of mature.
@Lugubrious
While you're on the subject of examining characters, I'm curios as to how mine come across.
Mostly as to what their personality seems to be, as that's kinda the more important part.
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I have no complaints so far. I've only really interacted with Mark, who seems rather normal and decent despite his guild, and Grant, who is about as evil as I imagine you intend him to be.
@Raijinslayer Have you seen gate yet? its awsome
As long as everyone's asking, how's my writing?
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Burth's the only one asking, but I have no complaints about your writing either. You characterize decently well, with enough detail, strong verbs, and varied sentence structure to keep it interesting, and you clearly pay attention to your grammar, punctuation, capitalization, and spelling. You sometimes switch between past tense and present tense for no immediately obvious reason, which can be somewhat jolting, and you still use a bunch of passive verbs that could be changed into anything more interesting without too much difficulty. All in all, you're a good Casual writer. Fun to RP with and exhibiting competence, but perhaps in need of more editing to make sure everything's the best it could be.
I'm not even going to ask about my writing. I know I suck. xD
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Tell yourself that, and you will. You must have some pride in yourself in order to improve.
You write compellingly. There's seldom a dull moment, with the unique characters you've introduced. One reason our various characters seem to interact so often is because I enjoy playing with you--we enhance one anothers' characters via their interaction. It's never just filler with you, and that is admirable.
If I had one criticism, it would be not posting with Enma or doing the super-secret-plot-thingy related to him yet.
Oh, and @Everyone, it might be a bit early, but there's going to be a pretty awesome plot thingy happening with Frenzy Plant immediately post-timeskip. Will definitely be a good time. As always, I'd be happy to see more characters in my guild.