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<Snipped quote by yoshua171>

Thanks for getting back to me :)

Well first, the Rotation is a technique passed orally in the Main Branch house of the Hyuga and the reason people thought Neji was a genius for learning it was only because he'd learned it without it being taught to him (since he's a member of the Branch family) so I didn't take age or Rank into consideration since I didn't feel like it mattered. I believe 13-16 would be a reasonable age for it to have been taught if one has the right Chakra control to do it.

Second, the issue with when her Father trains her... Well in my mind, I was thinking Genin don't do a lot of away missions where they're gone for extended periods of time. Don't they mainly do like.... D rank missions? Would once a week be more reasonable? If not, what do you think is? Every few weeks? It's something that flexible of course but I do want to keep her trainings as a semi-regular thing.

As for the last one, I was thinking of ways to kind of set her apart. Essentially I was thinking that she could have the fastest hands, meaning that she is able to accurately pinpoint and attack one's chakra points faster than anyone else. This would be due to her having a really pure or strong Byakugan as well as some natural talent for accuracy. It's not something I have to keep so I can take it out if need be.


(I am secretly Yosh in disguise, he's got work, so I'll finish this up)

1) We'll give Rotation as I had said with chakra control you can get it, but as Yosh points out, it is a very strong tech. I'd like it if you can have a limited form, like a cooldown period or something after it so you can't spin all day.

2) Well, big part of the RP is several genin teams are stationed into the ruins of the Hidden Whirlpool village, it'll be a while before she gets home.

3) Eh, natural talent for accuraccy is one thing, and I don't have a problem with, but 'the best' even though she's young I kinda do.

Fix those, and throw it in the bin with everyone elses.

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@Ganryu All right I'll make those edits :) I guess I can't complain much since I thought it would have more problems when it did hehe
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Hey there. I've RPed Naruto for a good long while and was interested in this. Another user sort of "recruited" me. Would it be possible to go ahead and finish out the Mist team?
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Firstly, Welcome. Not quite sure about the Mist team, but it might be available. I'll let one of the other GMs address that bit. I have real life to deal with unfortunately (in the form of going to bed "early," because I have work tomorrow).

Secondly. Here goes my character.

Antare, Keikoku



Summary: Idk....
Age: 16.
Rank: Genin.
Village Affiliation: Konohagakure.


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The Mist team is currently being wrapped up by another user, the Stone village though has three open spots available.
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Amd while taking longer than expected, I believe I have finally finished my application!



Suzu Watanabe 鈴渡邉, The Closed Palm


Summary: A disliked, self-promoting, discourteous, and obnoxious individual who fights for a better future as if it's a god given task.
Age: 15
Rank: D
Village Affiliation: Iwagakure


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@hex, great char, accepted, history actually made me sad. Throw it in the char bin.
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@Hexaflexagon I'll take a look at the history bit in a moment to see if I like it and see if there are any discrepancies. However, for the moment I'm more concerned with two techniques, though perhaps concern is not quite the word for the first technique.

Earth Anchor.

Simply put, you don't need this. It is literally just another name for using Chakra flow when one utilizes the earth affinity (which would harden/increase the durability of the item).

As to Kori Shinchū no Jutsu(Sly mind Affect Technique), well you need to remove it. I talked to Gan and Write and they agreed. Firstly because Suzu has a D in genjutsu, meaning she wouldn't be able to use C ranked techniques (such as kori Shinchū no jutsu). Secondly because I feel it is a bit powerful for a genin (trust me on this), though mostly because your genin does not specifically specialize in genjutsu. If you want it, she can learn it/gain it later :)

Following that I approve of your character, thus making you accepted. Gonna take a look at the history now though.
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Alright no worries, I made the edits.

With Earth Anchor I was aware of the fact that it was just putting Chakra flow as another name, the intent was to define how more specifically she used the Chakra Flow instead of just kind of leaving it up in the air. Thought the vagueness would of bothered some. Better safe than sorry, you know what I mean? And with Kori Shinchū no JutsuI you foiled my evil plot, you meddling kid! I get where you are coming from, it's a surprisingly powerful little thing for something only D rank.
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@Hexaflexagon

Unless linked to the wrong technique I believe it was actually a C ranking technique.
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@Write
And so it is. Apparently I'm going either blind or dysleixc in my old age. lol Either that or I was thinking of another genjutsu when I was first making the CS. Suppose it doesn't really matter now though as it has now been removed.
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@Write@Ruined Melody

Would you guys like to discuss the relationships between Sano, Hitomi, and Hiyoko? Since they would have been working together for a around a year.
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That sounds like a particularly good idea, so I'll steal it and tag @Howler how do you feel about our Mist nin's relationship? As well as tge Jonin, although we don't know of them yet. I know it might be slightly more difficult to bond with someone who cannot directly communicate, but maybe there can be a negative jive as well?
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To give everyone somewhere to go, the genin are arriving in town, and are expected to set up a base for the next little while. They are experienced genin, and have known their team for a while. This is a 'drag' of a mission, they are sent to a recently ruined village to watch for strange stuff that isnt likely to happen, and will be expected to be away from home for months. The area is a hellhole, but otherwise has been quiet for a year, why the smallfry are sent to keep watch.

Of course as your Gms, we'll make crap blow up.

Questions?
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Sure! So from what I've gathered, this tenuous alliance of shinobi are gathered to this single communal base that is being set up? Also, I assume the Jonin for each team are going to be played by the GMs yes?

I'm still glad to see this get going, and plan to post soon, I'd just like to converse a little with Howler before hand, and maybe possibly wait for Mist's third.
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Add me on Skype @writewrotethis

We'll add you to the group chat
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I already added you lol, just sent you a message asking to add me to the group.

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Yeah my bad - you're in.
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2nd team that is dully formed, whoo! Anyone got any questions, or need some inspiration beat into them?
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No, no! Inspiration is here and now! I believe the Mist is looking cool and ready to gets some posts out, maybe, sometime, possibly, god-willingly soon.
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