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@Zarkun Always. CS is on the first page.
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Possibly interested if you're still accepting. Just reading over everything atm to get an idea on what the setting is like.
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@Leolycan Always accepting...perhaps I should edit that into the title. Anyways, any questions, feel free to ask.
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One of my first questions is the nature of the conflict. When reading over the OP, I can see the mention of an RSG and the imperial forces being in a state of cival war. However, I don't see any mention of the RSG's origins. From reading, it looks like they possibly come from Tormin, but they could very well be rebels from Avenase. Just getting some clarification of what exactly my characters origin would be (for example, a Avenese soldier/officer that defected to the RSG in order to escape the oppression of the tyrant).

Now on that topic, I'm ok with my character being born in Tormin as a lancer. That being said, would the culture be conducive to dragoon-esque training? Not to say the character would start out as a dragoon, but with it being my favorite class in nearly rendition of FF- it's something I'd like to end up at (or near).

As a side note, I'm getting a very heavy Ramza vibe from the way the protagonist is explained in the OP.
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@Leolycan RSG is Tormin's military, they have no connection to Avenase in terms of their forming. As for the Lancer, if you wish your character to become a Dragoon, then I can arrange the path your character would need to go down to achieve this goal. On terms of the side note, there's probably a small bit of Ramza's background in there, like how Tyme came from Avenase and is fighting against the Imperials. However, there's much more going on that isn't seen or known yet. If you read the IC, you'll see one secret has been revealed already through Alexander's prologue story, however, not everything surrounding what happened has been revealed yet.
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Very well. I'll begin drafting up a sheet soon. Probably tomorrow with the current, but I'll get it up ASAP.
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@Leolycan Sounds good, looking forward to what you produce. ^_^
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Everyone in Tormin is pretty much friendly to everyone else. Of course, there are cases where people aren't friendly, like the incident that happened with Tyme when he arrived. The people won't care either way if she's from the city or country, long as she doesn't cause problems, she's golden. As for the capital; Moro Zera used to be Tormin's largest coastal city, it was the center of trade for the county when there were twelve continents. Now most of Tormin's docks are in ruins due to neglect, there are only two actual operating ports, and one of them is used by the RSG for their fleet.


Ah, ok. I was confused between Avenase and Tormin. >_< I thought Jin was going to Avenase and figured she'd be in trouble. OK, I'll read over things and get writing. Hopefully should have it up by tomorrow.
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@Leolycan I. Love. This. Guy.

That said, I should mention that right now, black and white magic isn't able to be wielded together by anyone yet. Tyme's an exception due to plot purposes which will be revealed later. As for his magic, period, he would only be allowed to have black magic available (Decided he could be the one character who gets to escape Avenase with that bracelet that enables magic). So blizzard is fine to have, feel free to add fire and thunder if you so wish.

Also, I'm not sure if you understood correctly, but Avenase is one continent, and Tormin is another. They have no land borders connecting each other, just a vast ocean. So Nitire's escape would be in a boat by sea. Whether he stowed away in the boat Tyme took, or he stole one to get across, either way is fine with me. Once these are fixed, your character...actually, I won't give him a rank yet. So once the CS is fixed up, you can place him in the Character tab.
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Fixed it... I think. Let me know if I need to make any more edits.
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@Leolycan Awesome! Accepted, please add him to the Character tab. I will work his starting point into my next post.
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Work was long and hard the past few days. I will work on a reply tomorrow after I sleep
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Question, are we using Hume or Human?
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Alright, i think I'm good, but I could be wrong. Will edit as needed.
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Name: Kessig Mianthus

Age: 24

Race: Human

Class: Lancer

Origin: Avenase

Appearance:

Weapon(keep it basic obviously): Halberd

Magic: Cure (want to be a peacekeeper, or subduer.) I have an idea and can explain it more to you later.

Personality: Pacifist. Kessig learned to fight to subdue. He believes that there is good in everyone, and some may need it beat into them.

Loyalty: Luna Bladedancer

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History: Kessig hailed from the imperial lands. Tired of its harsh brutality, and its military based structure, he chose to leave. He went in search of his true calling, and found it when gazing upon Luna Bladedancer. She was giving a speech about the importance of peace, and he was awestruck. For the last 6 years, he has done everything he can to get closer to the woman. Luna's wisdom is what the world needs in Kessig's eyes. Too much death, too much senseless violence. And for what? To be able to say the words "It's mine."? The continents ruled the people not the other way around. People focus on control so much, that when catastrophe strikes, they realize how little control they really have. In Kessig's eyes, the world was a gift, not something to be taken for granted. It seemed Luna offered the same insight.

Kessig's popularity did grow in Tormin, and his experience with the Halberd was sought after. While training in Tormin, he met a mage. He taught the man a little self defense, so in close quarters he could get away and cast his spells, and in return, the mage started teaching Kessig how to feel the mana in the air. To sense the magic. He hoped that he could learn to heal those wounded. The hair on his arms stood up and followed the flow of magic on this beautiful continent. He could feel it, but could not quite channel it. The mage told him he had potential and it was indeed possible.

Kessig's family abandoned him when he denounced the Imperials and he hasn't spoken to them since. His father a wealthy man had donated many times to their cause, making their family name fairly known. His fathers caravans were often guarded by imperial soldiers because of his loyalty and he oftened discounted wares and goods to the army. Many people on Avenase sported Mianthus wares.

(Krinos just a char idea, I can tweak however need be. Just let me know.)
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I don't mind him using a gunblade, but due to lack of any real professionals in Tormin when it comes to physical fighters, he's going to have to be clumsy with the weapon. Also, he wouldn't have been accepted into RSG at twelve, that's a little too young to be a soldier. Enlistment/conscription age is 16 at minimum, unless he was forced into the RSG beforehand, which is rare. In Avenase it's commonplace due to the poor living conditions and such, but Tormin has practically no poor people.

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Knew you were going Lancer, I was prepared for it. Just one little flaw I saw, if Kessig used to be an Imperial soldier and was born and raised in the Empire, then his Origin needs to change to Avenase, as that's where he's from. Loyalty is alright, I mean, Luna gives orders to the RSG, so it works fine for me. I like the idea of him helping a mage, and in turn, the mage teaching him magic. A very intuitive idea. Anyways, just fix his Origin and add in for his Rank: Luna Bladedancer's Elite Guard. Once done, go ahead and place him in the Character tab.
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I don't mind him using a gunblade, but due to lack of any real professionals in Tormin when it comes to physical fighters, he's going to have to be clumsy with the weapon. Also, he wouldn't have been accepted into RSG at twelve, that's a little too young to be a soldier. Enlistment/conscription age is 16 at minimum, unless he was forced into the RSG beforehand, which is rare. In Avenase it's commonplace due to the poor living conditions and such, but Tormin has practically no poor people.

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Knew you were going Lancer, I was prepared for it. Just one little flaw I saw, if Kessig used to be an Imperial soldier and was born and raised in the Empire, then his Origin needs to change to Avenase, as that's where he's from. Loyalty is alright, I mean, Luna gives orders to the RSG, so it works fine for me. I like the idea of him helping a mage, and in turn, the mage teaching him magic. A very intuitive idea. Anyways, just fix his Origin and add in for his Rank: Luna Bladedancer's Elite Guard. Once done, go ahead and place him in the Character tab.


Right, I actually put that he joined at 18 in the backstory, though I can change that to be more accurate to the actual age.
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@Zarkun Oh, I must have overlooked it. >_< He can be 18 when he joins, it still works. Luna hasn't enforced conscription yet, so the RSG are made up of those who willingly joined of their own accord.
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@Zarkun Okay, so since he's neutral, he won't need a rank right now. Aside from fixing the background to where he isn't able to be completely proficient with the gunblade, he looks good. Once the fix is made, place him in the Character tab and I'll work his starting point into my next post.

Note to everyone, we are drawing ever so closer to the end of our prologue, so please do ensure you have posted if you are able to. @Shurikai and @Fabricant451, I know you guys are waiting and have been for awhile. Regardless if I get a post for Lyona and what she's doing or not, I will be advancing your stories one way or another by tomorrow morning. If a post is made prior to that for Lyona, then expect to be advanced sooner. Thank you both for being patient.
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